New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#481

Hasini,

I read the last update just before going to sleep.

N u could not imagine the smile I had on my face before....I drifted off in my dreamland.....the last update was amazing....I loved it....I enjoyed each and every line of it.........it was just superb....

I will comment on it in detail after....but just for now.....I wanted to let u know....FF is going great............

Love

Rachana

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#482

great update! love ur writing. its soo professional and creative.

will they admit their feelings soon or another twist?

plzz more updates tomorrow!!

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#483

Sorry can't comment as much as I want to as im really tired so just want to say don't worry you've done this part brilliantly and glad to know geet is back on the right track and goi g to walk alongside maan anyways great update and continue soon as I said I'm in love with this ff 😊

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Antares

@Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#484

Great update! Finally, they talked it out and cleared the misunderstandings......and lolz at Geet's way of finding out how badly she needs Maan......I love these two.....passion personified! Do continue soon.

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Ayesha_MSK

@Ayesha_MSK

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Posted: 14 years ago

#485

I haven't had the chance to comment on this FF previously, but all I can say right now, is that this is AMAZING! I love it... 😃

Their relationship has come so far...
My favourite update till date has been Fire and Ice,and I detected a similarity between that chapter and the Twilight saga, (which I adore); I was wondering if that was intentional?

Thank you for writing so beautifully so far, and please do add me to your PM list, if possible! ⭐️
I'd be honoured 😊

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 14 years ago

#486

Part 18: Babe I loved this part so much!!! Her financial situation…such a realistic thing to write about! Good job…and nice idea!! I love how he gets frustrated and then apologizes later!!! Isn't he the sweetest…getting her a iPhone and all!!!! OMFG!!! The two texting is so cute! But my most favorite is the part where he observes when she's talking to Yash…I love small details like that!!! I'm so excited about the next part!! I actually spend all my time in Genetics reading this b/c this is a 100 times…no scratch that…a zillion times better than point mutations, DNA, and indels!!!!!!

Part 19: OMG!!! He finds her a place…he's so perfect!! My first fav scene is when he checks her forehead to see if she has a fever. Don't ask why I love it, but I just do!! He's so caring and protective!! And the loft sounds so divine!!! But ok my most favorite scene has to be Maan's monologue when he thinks about all the times she'll be on the balcony and if she'll ever his name!! How cute…he's thinking about a future with her!!! Also love how he listens to her…he's her shield….awwwww!!! So happy!!! You're an amazing writer…I love all the attention to details you put into your writing!!!

YOU GET THIS:👏👏👏

Well done babe!! I'm standing up right now and clapping!!!

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 14 years ago

#487

Part 20: This part is my fav:

Maan:"But it has to go through fire to emerge out like the blue one…have the impurities removed to make it transparent…has to be cut for it to have a shape…has to be brushed and softened to make it shinier and polished…right now this rock quartz still has to go through a lot of work…and it needs the right person to shape it that way too…"

Geet:"But the question is does this rock quartz want to be like the blue one? "

I love everything about it...the moment, the people, the feelings, the metaphor and symbolism, and the words!!! The whole flea market scene was so much fun to read.....poor maan tormented! SO cute...he just gives her the wallet!!! OMG! I can just imagine them standing there at the end looking at each other's eyes....so beautiful...PICTURE PERFECT!!!

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 14 years ago

#488

Part 21:

I love when Maan starts talking about what he should be, what he is and what he wanted to be in her life...OMG! these monologues are to die for!! Sunday brunch...she's cooking for her future hubby!! OK maybe I'm going over-board...but can't blame a girl for dreaming!!!!!!!!!! You practically killed with the atta scene and the feeding...uff!! So magical!!! More scenes like that please!!! An effing fantastic brunch!!! And the card scene at the end was a comical cute!!

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 14 years ago

#489

Part 22: Oh no...Maan is forcing himself away from Geet! Poor girl...I'm Mad at Maan...she's all flustered and distressed!!! Oh sweet baby girl! Ok I have a confession...I wanted his hand to touch hers when they were lying in bed together!!! Both I can imagine that and it's so so so just perfect!!! God girl...how do you come up with this stuff it's so good!!! I don't if I'm gonna like the next part...separation time!!!

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 14 years ago

#490

Part 23: I love when he gives in and says:

I was insanely and irrevocably in love with her.

No maneet, but reading inner turmoils was just a burst of fresh air! he's confused and not positive on what to do, but as a reader I cheered for him and when he finally admits his love for her...I jumped for joy!! You handled the inner conflict so cleverly and maturely!!! Well done!!! And he packs his bags and heads back home to see how...he's the ultimate definition of perfection! Plus he has no expectations...selfless love it the most beautiful and pure kind of love!!!!

This is getting so good...he's gonna question her about her feelings...do i smell a confession and confrontation coming up?!! Yes I do!!!

Girl you're A-grade writer!!!⭐️ Love ya for all the hard work you put into writing this!!!