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Hetal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#491

Part 24: Fire an Ice....such a symbolic and ironic title! I feel like both switched personalities...she was the one was all fire and warmth and he was held back and cold, and now he's wants to pursue things and she's all held back!!! Why are you tormenting me like this!!?? I can't wait for the next part!!! Oh Maan and his coffee meetings!! I do feel bad for him b/c he did figure it out, but now she won't want him or another relationship!! Ok off to read part 25...fingers crossed!! Once again...thanks babe...love ya!!!👏😃

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Hetal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#492

Part 25: OMG!!!! Babe...I loved their heart to heart!! And the trip they take together..ALONE!!!! I loved this part....love how he sheds details about his past to her b/c he trusts her and wants her to trust her!! He held her hand....awwwwww!!! So beautiful!!! I teared up near the end, especially when he talks about walking together!! So chweet!!! Fell in love with maan again! I loved how you did the compare/contrast between maan's words and dev's wrods!!! You keep outdoing yourself!!!!!!!!!!!

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Hetal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 26: Love ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Maan's B-day!!!! OMG!!!! I can give you the biggest HUG right now!!!! Her plan to surprise him....she's the cutest!!!! OMG my fav scene..ok one of my fav...his thumb brushes against her lips...i wish it were his lips brushing her lips!!! Ok that's enough of my x-rated thoughts...i'll leave those for my dreams!!!😆

The star watching was beautifully written...her head on his shoulder and both holding hands!!! It's such an unwritten confession!!!! I loved this part so much!! The title to the next one is sweet nothings...oh my god...excited!!!!

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Hetal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Chapter 27: Maan fluent in French...so sexy!! uff!!! Can this guy be MORE perfect??!! Awwwww...thumb fight...so cute!!!! And the 20/200....i wouldn't have mind it were 1000 questions...it was brilliantly written!!! This part was so good....you keep spoiling us with these beautiful maneet scenes!!! they keep getting better and better!!! Kudos Hasini!

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Hetal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 28: Stupid Sasha(hate ppl like her)...poor geet....hate it when she cries! But maan, oh sweet amazing maan is always her support system!! Oh how much I love him!!! Oh no...Geet wants to separate herself from Maan! NOOOOOOOO!!! Ok hopefully it gets better and soon!! But that poetry part that geet remembered was a nice touch!! babe...now I'm sad!😭😭😭

Please 29 be better....give me hope!!!

Ok still amazing writing!!!!!!!!!

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Hetal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 29: Geet thinking about being khurana...omg I loved that little detail so much! But then she caught herself!!! Beautiful touch..it made me gush a little!!! Maan and MONO🤣!!! That's awesome..what a riot!! Miss geet def a jealousy little lady needed to know HOW it happened...who did he kiss....so implied from her attitude! Even though she was upset...she cooks for him!! This girl always wins my heart!!! Meera is so right both are ziddi...so stubborn...but still love them!!! I love Meera's and Maan's heart to heart...so nicely done!!!

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Hetal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 30: Jealous Geet so perfect!!! It did bring them closer....oh my god the shirt scene so cute! Maan's reaction and that monologue when she's close to him...love it!! My love how he checks to see the jhumka...caressing the hair and her ears....if only I was there instead of geet...actually no maneet are so perfect!!! The gharwali line is so funny and fantastic and maan catching himself! First geet khurana thing and now this....nice foreshadowing...Mr and Mrs K for sure!!!! I loved the ending!!! This was so light-hearted and sweet!!!! Thanks for such beautiful lines!!!!!!!!!

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Nikky

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Posted: 14 years ago

#498

Hey hey hun... i am soooo sorrry for not being able to reply to your last few updates earlier... i am truly sorry... honestly you are handling this story very well and you have paced it out so well.. its like not being rushed or not going too slow.. you have made their relation seem all the more meaningful and full of understanding by carrying it further at this pace... You are giving them enough time to go through each and every emotion they are feeling... it seems just right.. 👏 I am loving the story... And now that Geet has finally decided to come out clean with her feelings, its giving Maan hope as well... its going the way he always wanted it to go... I didnt expect Geet to jump into a pool of cold water to realize what she feels for Maan.. but hey I dont mind all that if it brings them closer...

I loveddddd.. and i mean literally loved the recent updates esp where Geet is jealous... hahahaha...i loved the earring part... the part where she is over thinking about how he must have acquired Mono.. hahaha beautifully written... loved it all..

You my friend have come up with the most unusual way of bringing two different people together... and I must say you are doing an incredible job at it... your way of writing and telling the story is very different ... very unique and very beautiful... keep up the great work!!!

My day is not complete without reading your updates... sooo keep them coming... i am waiting 😉...

⭐️ - You are a true star!

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Hetal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#499

Part 31: A breath of fresh air...kya title hai!!!!👏'

First off all the questions Geet is asking herself...so realistically written,which makes everything so beautiful! I love how she goes through the self-realization and how she misses him! Reminds me of my past crushes and experiences!!! I love the simplicity and realism of the whole scene! Love how she said she needs him badly...poor girl, but she finally understood his place in her life!!! Genius!

Maan still caring for geet and asking meera about her...he's gonna declare himself once he knows she has moved on!!! Oh all the tension leading up to the ultimate confrontation that will hopefully turn into a confession!!!!

Poor Maan....his reaction when he sees geet all cold and frozen!! Geet is so fierce and jumping into the pool like that! WOW!! What a girl!!! He's so protective and caring...love how he charges in and wants to talk!! MSK is in his mode and he's so hot like that!!! He wanted answers...YES!!!! And she gives him the answers!!! I'm so happy...there's a happy ending!!! It's getting so good!!

I'm all caught up...the best 7 hours of my life!!!! Enjoyed every minute!! Can't wait for the next part!!! Super excited!!!!!!!!!!