New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet

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Preethi

@Preethi-Premi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#471

Awesome dear!! I just loved every bit of it!! Great job! Can you please add me to your pm list

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Geet Malhotra

@SapphireFlames

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Posted: 14 years ago

#472

nice part. but whats the omen here? update ASAP please..dying to see them confess. 😊

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#473

wow!
it wz beautiful!
full of emotions
u've sooooo beautifully written n expressed their emotions n feelings
when she jumped into d pool just to feel if he wz like air to breathe for her
tat wz soooo beautiful.............like just loved d comparision....air to breathe n maan.......lovely!
n maneet together now!
just loved their conversation when they both were alone in d room
n everything clear now
n i very well agree wid maan.....tat he just want's to make sure tat she is just hers.......
like he must b having sum fear in him tat she can still have chances of going bak to dev......
so d divorce even though he doesn't believe in all this but still for his satisfaction.......
n m juz sooooo happy tat geet also realised tat she does hav sumthing for him.......
hope they confess soon
n i luved this line-"I wasn't going to die before I find out what I had for him…or at the very least what he had for me…"
juz loved d update!
beautifully written!
BIG HUG for writing such an amazing update!

luv
Navpreet

Edited by dimpzz - 14 years ago

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#474

Yay!! Finally they are moving forward....

Why did u stop at such a crucial juncture...please hurry up!!

Loved how Maan could not control himself and his concern for Geet came forward!!

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blessednim

@blessednim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#475

wow nice update yippi maan and geet together again thanks Hasini .......

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pushpi

@pushpi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#476

:-D Super happy hun. Thanks I needed something happy before I take a Cardiopulmonary test ahhh...expect more later I promise.

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known

@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#477

cant wait when they confess there love to eachother lovely update pls cont soonnnnnnnn

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#478

wow soooooo lovely
n cute

simply superb part

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#479

Just read part 28!

I read the part twice because when I read it the first time, I couldn't understand Maan's perspective!

But I am still not able to get the fact that why Maan was so indifferent, so cold! I guess the next few parts will have answers to his indifference.

There was lotta emotional turmoil between them in this part.

Not just that, both had apprehensions, both had fears, both were having a turmoil within themselves about how to react, what to expect, how to handle things and this resulted in conficting thoughts between the two while they were conversing about her answer.

I understand why Geet answered Sasha that way because she's right, its difficult for her, being a girl and also, the questions will be raised to Geet and not Maan.

Maan's behaviour- i am still confused.

BTW I liked that line why women take women seriously.😆 This is, indeed, the reality😉