New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet

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smiliey

@smiliey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#461

Hasini, u brought smile to ma face early in the morning...luved ur update...thnks for the pm.. continue soon

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Manpreet

@Maneetkraze

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Posted: 14 years ago

#462

Yes!!! Finally they have cleared their differences. I loved this part (as well as the other parts also)😆

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nisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#463

Hiiii Hasini... went thru d last 3 parts... dey were awesome... it was really nice to see dat geet was worried about maan's name....tats y she told sasha tat dev comes to her...otherwise she cud hav said something else....she was concerned about maan...tat wat wud he think about these gossips....on d other hand,maan got irritated tat she takes dev's name in b/w them...it has hurt him...he thought she has moved 4ward....so,he was moving 4ward to her too....but this has placed him into a lot of confusion....he loves her n love doesn't mean achieving him or her....its about her happiness....maan is confused if geet wud b happy if she go back to dev.... u portrayed his feeling really beautifully..... n see,d plan to get yash jealous is working 4 geet....it means they r meant to b one....destiny has fixed it....its just a matter of time.... n how maan n geet wud come closer wud b interesting to see.... sorry 4 making u bored wid this long comments.... but i can't resist myself 4m commenting after ur beautiful updates....😊

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Anum

@anufa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#464

loved it!!!

awsumm...finally no difference!!!:D:D

update sooN!!!

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#465

Has Geet gone nuts jumping into ice cold water... OMG... finally they had some answer to the Questions wic cleared every thing... But y again Maan his questioning himself with... Dev.... AWESOME update dear.

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: aarthirajendran
Has Geet gone nuts jumping into ice cold water... OMG... finally they had some answer to the Questions wic cleared every thing... But y again Maan his questioning himself with... Dev.... AWESOME update dear.

Hi Aarthi...

Thanks for your comments...Maan is not questioning about Dev...he is questioning if he can be the future...

I was using cross parallelism...
At first Geet refers to Dev as Toronto...
"I wouldn't want to go to Toronto (Dev) because it is a destination in the past..."
When Maan is questioning himself...
he is substituting himself for New York...

...This is normally used in sonnets and poems...I thought it would work out well...but guess it didnt.

Edited by Hasini67 - 14 years ago

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#467

You know u r too good.........i can't belive u r a first time writter.......... Hot chocolate,jumping in pool, nigeria vacation little-2 moment b/w them...... Loved it..... U should be writter by profession.

Edited by aditiwalia56 - 14 years ago

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#468

Can't believe this is your first attempt..you write beautifully..every update has got it's own charm..the sweet magical moments in the story make me crave for more...and you don't disappoint your fans 'coz you update often..thank you😊

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nisharoyce

@nisharoyce

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Posted: 14 years ago

#469

sweet update yaar

as always truly exceptional FF

their monologues are awesome

keep writing

luv u

nisha

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nisha

@nisha_bh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#470

hi hasini.... actually i missed part31.... dat part gives me all d answers.... it was really beautiful...n loved d way dey sorted out their misunderstandings....

living widout maan,was like living widout breathing......waaaaooooo!!!!!!!!!!!tat was really awesome....

thnx 4 this beautiful part....