FF.manet**TREMBLE of LOVE** Thread ~3~ - Page 104

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tinatartari thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
tis ws so gud.i want the truth 2 b revealed soon n hope anu doesnt create any misunderstanding btw maaneet!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Dear🤗

wonderful update
👏👏👏👏
loved it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
loved Maaneet moments❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
loved d way geet told Anu dat there nothing between dem😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
precap looks cool😉😉😉😉😉😉
plsssssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
it is nice tht geet is avoiding anurag...i like it...😈...nice update..thnks
rohini
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi,

Update was good but very small..............😭
anyways it was interesting though😛
I loved Geet's attitude towards Anu,
bechara Anu, wanna know more bot him,
And geet should speak to Maan bot Anu, i feel,
Looking forward to more updates,
ek update se mann nahi maanta
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update..
Hope Anu will not create any misunderstanding
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantasticcccccccccccccc update.
I don't like anu.
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
wht will maan think when he find out anu is geets' old bf ?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

**TREMBLE OF LOVE**

part 72


Maan: no! Make me understand! Make me understand why I am reacting this way? Tell me why I am doing this? Explain why I am in pain... When you call our love a week moment? Tell me why I can't bare the pain? Tell me why I seen those feeling the passion in your eyes... That invited me in? Bolo geet! Samjavo muje!!!!
Why have you gave me that special light in the darkness when you had a plan to disseper in the day light? Tell me? I want to know? I want this pain to disspear... That I have baring since I met you....

Geet couldn't say a word... His question was hunting her....

Maan: I can't bare it anymore.... Tell me what is my mistake... When I thought I am not worthy of you... I Decided to stay way from you... Thinking that you would never accept me..... Thinking that how could I even think like that' Thinking.... How could a mere dust reach the moon''...

Geet looked at him.... Tears started to build up in her eyes.... That it's not true... He is not a mere dust.... Neither she is a moon.....

maan:"Then.... Why did show all the care.... The worry.... That makes me week.... Every moment.... That I fall for you over and over again.... Why? Why did you do that... If you have plan to hurt me...'"

Geet: I never want''

maan: Tell me why I am wrong... When I decide to marry you to save your family??? Tell me... I never forced you in this marriage.... Never.... I was willing to let go everything... Just for your happiness.... Everything.... Even divorce.... It was your decision to give are marriage a second chance.... Why are you inviting me in.... Bolo geet.... Please bolo'.. he started to shake her with each talk''.. he was heart'.. holding her tight'. crushing her arm on his hand'.

Geet looked at him... Blankly.... Not sure how to answer any of his question.....

Maan: tell me..... Make me understand.... Why did you give me hope? When!.... When.... You have to brake it?.... Bolo... Ku? Why you didn't refuge last night? Bolo Geet.... Bolo na..... Why you giving me hope.... A new hope everyday.... If you have to break them the next day..... Why are you testing my love.... I could have staid.... Live rest of my life with the smallest memory I had of you.... Then why? ... Why didnt you leave.... When I asked you to..... Why did you kiss me? Why didn't you stop me? Why? Why are you putting me through this?

Maan had thousand question...
Geet still looked at him blankly... She couldn't answer any of them... Nun at all....
Maan frees her...
Maan: just go geet! Leave me! Just leave.... Before I loss my self... Just leave!
Geet looks at him.... He looks way... Not wanting to see her face... Everything was killing him inside... Nothing was working out.... There relationship was in a mess.... In a place.... Neither couldn't explain....

Later the evening Bothe came back to deli... Wedding house... But Bothe seems to be unhappy.... Maan haven't spoken to her since after the meeting!... he couldn't digest... How She could call there night a week moment or a mistake...

Dinner...
Geet serves the dinner... Nun spoke... An unusual silent took over the table...
Geet: ap Kuch ku Nahi Bol rahi ho?
Maan: everything between us is always mistake... Then what's the point of me speaking!
Geet: I Hav....
Maan: please!
Geet looked at him as he disappeared without eating his dinner...

Geet sat down... Not felling happy at all... She was confused her self... Why she can't accept him... What was wrong with her... Why can't she give up and just be happy with him... What's wrong....

Suddenly her phone rings.... Unexpected.... Unknown number...
Geet: hello....
Phone: .....
Geet: hello.....
Phone: ....
Geet: why do you bother calling... If you don't want to talk...

Geet hangs up... She was more worried about maan.... Not eating at all...

Geet Walks in... With food... Find maan in the study...
Geet: ap khana to kha lo!
Maan ignores!
Geet takes the file... And replaces with the plate!
Maan looks at her angrily.... Ignoring....
Geet: ap mera gussa khane pe ku utarhi ho?
Maan tries to leave the room....
Geet stopes...
Geet: if you are angry with me... Take it out on me!
Maan: I am not angry with anyone! ... He snapes....
Geet: then why are you not eating?
Maan: I am not hungry... An why are you worried?
Geet: because I am your wife!
Maan: I don't want your fake act!
Geet: it's not fake!
Maan: aca! To bolo geet... If you have no felling for me.... Why are you worried if I eat or don't!
Geet: I care for you'


NEXT: maan missing' geet worried'.




ok question' do u lot want me to make geet suffer for few parts????? if you do please do comment' heheh i am sure you all want her to' as she is causing our maan to suffer😆

lol loved all the lovely comments' hop this colour code helps' pls pls pls do leave some comments' i love to read them

:D😆

GEET IS SOOO 😡

and heheh🤣 i couldnt ignore' how much u lot wanted me not to MENTION THE WORD MISTAKE'.i am sorry my 😈 mind'. its not me


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this is my fav part…
just reading through my tremble of love…. this is my best part :D just like to share it with you….

**TREMBLE OF LOVE**
part 72

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