FF.manet**TREMBLE of LOVE** Thread ~3~ - Page 100

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh thank gid this is bk open i was seriously worried. dw keyma the new part is just as gd as the last one he he lol pt 78 is amazin as well cont soon plzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
hay giv me hour or 2… then will update
xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
YES :-D getting an update soon yipee
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzz update 4 ANIMOSITY plzzzzzzzz😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzz update 4 ANIMOSITY plzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank god the post was reopened!!!!

mwahz to the mod and to the amazing writer!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
**Tremble OF LOVE**
part 79

hay sorry for mistake.. done it really quick'
xxx

Maan woke up early... Found geet in deep sleep... Looking beautiful then ever... He cresses her face.... He felt like he was dreaming.... It didn't look real at all.... He waited for geet so long that... Now they are to gather.... It just Didn't seem right....
Geet eyes closed: ka hua.... Why r u looking at me like this?
Maan kisses her forehead... "I love you..."
Geet smiles....
Maan: I have to hurry....
Geet: I want my breakfast.... Geet smiles...
Maan: hmm.... I want my exercise....
Geet: Nahi.... Just breakfast....
Maan: well how will you pay me?
Geet: hmm.... As it's early morning... I can't pay by exercise... I will pay you by breakfast....
Maan: no... I only accept exercise....
Geet: tik hi.... Hum breakfast nahi lete....

Maan smiles and starts kissing her pasonatly.... With more preassure.... Bothe stops after while.... Gasping for air.... Maan smiles at her and then Starts to move way....
Geet: Suniye....
Maan comes back: bolo...
Geet: I want my excercise to....
Maan: Abhi Nahi....
Geet: ku?....
Maan looks down at her... Geets hand was playing misciviously under the spread....
Maan loosing his control.... And instenly they started kissing again.... Making passionate love....

Maan and geet in office...

Geet sat in her office...looking at her old sim card... Not sure what to do... ... She puts it back in her phone... Soon as she switches it on it rings... It's anu... Geet hesitates... Then answers...

Geet: hello....
Anu: muje pata hi... I hurt you allot.... I know... I am the main reason for you being this upset.... But pls do try to understand.... I love you.... I love you geet.... I love you....
Geet: ku paresan karti ho Tum?
Anu: please... Just listen to me once.....
Geet: there are nothing between us.... Not anymore...
Anu: acea mat kaho.... Please...
Geet: I don't love you....
Anu: I know you are angry... And that's why you have been saying this... I know you only love me...
Geet: I am telling the truth...
Anu: I will be back in few days... Then we will sault everything out... We will be married the next day... I promise... I promise that .... I won't let anyone come between us.... No one.... And I mean no one....
Geet: there is already.....
Maan walks in..... Geet cuts the call.... Switching the phone off....

Maan: what happen?
Geet: nothing!
Maan: aca! Your eyes saying something els...
Geet: Kuch nahi.... Koi kam tha?
Maan: ku... Can't I come to my wife?
Geet smiles.... And hugs him.... Relaxed...
Maan: what happen?
Geet: I am scared...
Maan: why?
Geet: I don't know... I have this weird feeling....
Maan: what types of feeling?
Geet: I don't know...
Maan: geet... Are you telling me the truth?
Geet: ha....
Maan: aca suno....
Geet: bolo....
Maan: we have to buy something for my Bothe brothers wife.... Dadi told us to buy something....
Geet: what's your younger Bros GFs name?
Maan: I don't know.... It's a surprise!
Geet: surprise?
Maan: that's what he have been telling us....
Geet: but there relationship is two years old?
Maan: yes... But he never told us....
Geet: oh.... Do you know her choice?
Maan: no... Just buy whatever you like....
Geet: ok....

Maan leaves.... Geet again looks at her phone... Worried.... Not sure how to react.... She switches it on again....

Anu calls again....

Geet: what do you want?
Anu: please listen to me one ..... Please.....
Geet: there are nothing left for us...
Anu: why are you saying this? Please geet.
Geet: don't call me ever again....

Geet hangs up...

Next day maan and geet prepares them self to leave for banglore'


next: mini honeymoon'..

ANIMOSITY PART 8

hay you all'. ty for all the love and suport' loved all the comments' and sorry for part 76' lol' i did go in too much details' which i have to keep it in my mind next time' anyway' pls pls pls do leave me some lovely long comments' and next part will be probably on new thread' i will post the link later on' as we r heeding towards 150 page
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update again!

plz update again today and get this ANU out of the story asap! lol

maybe geet will be preggers?! lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic but a bit short....

But over all it was a nice part..

I'll kill Anu if he comes between Maaneet!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey love it the update ....................................... really good plz update next soon can't wait longer plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..............👍🏼

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