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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start.. Maan the lawyer.. interesting..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivangi783

First part was good😊

Tasha-geet best friends😆 But this is different from the actual one.
If you would have made Sasha-Geet best friends, imagine the reactions🤣🤣

First reaction of geet on seeing the stranger (whom we all know would be Maan😉) at her place was good one😆😆
Continue soon😊

Thanks.
There will be differences between the serial and this FF, but main characters will remain the same
I thought to make Sasha-Geet best friends, but left her for later parts, without her no evils😆
Yeah, you guessed the stranger right, and I'm thinking of their second encounter now
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Shwetha, Fatima, Radhika, Anufa, Wajiha, Firegurl, Nanthini; thanks sweeties. Will try to write asap
@Bluedream; Thanks honey, btw, no need to say thanks😛
@love_lavnya; Thanks for loving the CS and the intro too, yes you are in my list,,Thanks again, and yes will let you know once I do update
@hermoini; thanks dear, did you miss my pm this time?😲, will pm you next time too
@Rakhi; Thanks sweetie, will write soon
@Shalini; yeah, Maan the lawyer and Geet wants to be an artist.....What a combo😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update
loved it
loved geets reaction when she saw maan
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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update was really nice....i loved it...😆
thanx 4 pm....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Awesome update
loved it
loved geets reaction when she saw maan
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Thanks dear
Glad you loved the beginning......
Maneet encounter.....so like them😆
@Sharmake and Nilam; Thanks sweeties....will write asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
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P.S.Some are confusing this with the serial...pls read the introduction to get and idea about this FF
Forever ' Part 2

It was a sunny day that everyone in the house has gone to Mandhir when Geet woke up. She opened her eyes lazily and yawned before getting out of the bed feeling that she was free as it was Sunday. She put her dhupatta around her neck and ran downstairs calling for her mom to make tea for her. 'Sorry bte, all have gone to Mandhir and they will come home in the afternoon' the old and faithful servant, Uma answered politely. Geet made an angry face at her and sat on the chair hugging her knees to herself 'Ummi, why didn't they take me with them? I have to be here bored to death' she complained to Uma who made a cup of tea for her.

Geet heard a thud at the door while she lay down on the sofa, after tea, trying to concentrate on the newspaper. 'Who is coming here now?' she murmured to herself and went to open the door as Umi was not around. She peeped through the door and saw the unfamiliar face at the door step, so she closed the door on his face and leaned against it thinking that she was living in a dream. 'Hey babaji, what is happening to me? Why am I seeing him here?' She prayed for babji and turned to open the door. 'Is anyone there? Please open the door' the stranger called from outside. She opened the door and frowned at him before starting her enquiry 'who are you to come and disturb me? What is up with you?' she started in her very own questioning style. 'Excuse me miss'' he started to talk, but she cut him off by saying 'Miss Geet'. He wondered about her name, it sounded pleasant to his ears, but changed his thinking as he faced her 'so you are Miss Geet , come on start to sing' he entered into the house as she stepped back when he forwarded. 'Hey, Mister, you have no right to talk about my name' she pointed a finger at him angrily. 'Look, miss Geet, I have no time to waste listening to your talks, but let me meet Mr. Brijj' he tried to escape from her while glancing at the house. 'Uncle is not here, now don't ask me where he is and when will he come back' she answered his question while stopping him from asking more from her. He moved closer to her and she sat on the chair behind her and leaned to the back as his face was only inches away from hers 'I don't want to know anything from you' he whispered into her eyes and walked out of the house closing the door behind him. 'Hey babaji, is he a normal or abnormal? Please help him, babaji' she prayed to babaji before starting her self talk about him.

Maan started his car angrily, shouting at Brijj from his heart for wasting his time. It was the last day that he was supposed to be in Hoshiyarpur and he has a very important case scheduled for the very next day. He decided to call Brijj's cell phone before leaving the town, so he dialed the number. He called Brijj several times, but there was no answer, so texted him about leaving the town. He then headed his journey towards Mumbai, thinking about his plans for the next morning.

Geet sat on her bed with papers and tried to sketch something to show off her skills in art, and Bunty was observing what she was doing. 'Didi, look, you have drawn that man' Bunty cried out loud, giving Geet a shock. She looked at the paper and widened her eyes as she has sketched the man she met three days before. She did not remember the events or the unfamiliar man since then, but her sketches made her to think about the stranger more.

Precap: Geet's parents are killed'''''''.Geet leaves Hoshiyarpur

Edited by amrita2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing fanfic plz add me to your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Nice Update....

Raaz Pichle janam kaaa????

Just kidding yaar.... know maaneet forever....so no wonder she draw his picture

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