FF; Forever - Maneet (Part 12 p 57) - Page 39

loved ur update sooo gud

Just read two parts 10 and 11😊

Originally posted by: ansah

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so adorable....ur daughter.....how old is she

and waiting for next updte

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Just read two parts 10 and 11😊

Part 10

That was a nice update but with a lot of questions!

I know it dear...the mystery will unfold as we move forward

Some of them got answered in Part 11 but some still remain unanswered. And I guess, you won't answer them soon because you're enjoying keeping your dear readers in suspense😉😛

It isn't like that dear....I have never read a novel/story where I get answers to all my Qs in the beginning or just in the middle....but this is a good way to make readers to look forward for the next part

Anyhow, I liked the way Maan was searching for her frantically as if some loved one has gone missing. Of course, he's gradually developing feelings for her but he himself is unknown about this!

Love can make any one crazy!!

Loved the hug, actually 'Symbolic hug', the way he was making Geet calm, letting her pain go in the form of tears. He was not only easing her pain but also his fear of losing her. He engulfed her in his embrace assuring himself that she's with him.

Loved this moment a lot😊

Well said dear, I don't think I need to say more⭐️

Part 11

Now this part was like a relief since it helped to calm down the waves (waves of questions) which rose in my mind. But the waves aren't fully calmed yet😛

sabar ka pal mitha hoga😉

Geet has suffered a lot herself and she doesn't want to any defamation being caused to his reputation in the society because of her. Also, he still is unaware of her past.

This Maan is the same as in the serial in terms of taking out the anger, confusion-getting violent and hurting himself!

I love the character so much, that I could not help myself from bringing up this part

Loved the stubborn Geet here, she wanted to relieve him of the physical pain that had been caused. And the love, the concern was so visible when she was hesistant to apply the saline with the fear that she might end up hurting him.

That line where Maan speaks of physical pain and emotional pain, was really deep, thought-provoking!!!👏👏

And the Kodak Moment of the update-

Geet insructing him, feeding him and teasing him! So dreamyyy ( Pari style)😍

Kisne socha hoga ki Maan ko, Maan Singh Khurana ko koi aise dhamki dega😉 Aur phir pyaar se khilayega😍

Haaye, mar jaawan lassi peekar ( Muskan(played by Drashti Dhami) style from Dill Mill Gaye)

(I guess this part of comment thoda zyaada filmy type ho gaya, but I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it, or should I say, quoting the styles😉 ) 😊

Awww, I loved Daadi here-she was so happy to see someone caring for Maan, some girl looking after her stubborn angry grandson and Maan listening to her😊 She seems to be pretty cool types, hope she helps the couple in the future to become Maaneet from Maan and Geet😊

BTW where does Daadi stay? In the same city?

Unlike the serial, I have changed the city....this happens in Mumbai....Daadi lives in K mansion....Maan lives seperately, in an apartment....far away from the K mansion....There will be one more difference, but it will be shown, only if the readers want it like that....I will ask the Q when the time arrives...😉

In short, fabulous updates. Loving the way the story is progressing! Its becoming really gripping with each update. 😊

Hug for you for the amazing parts😊

A hug from my side too

Me in blue....I have even underlined some parts.... Thank you so much for the sweet comment....I loved reading it...

Originally posted by: sukklover

yaar ammo...kya huya tujhe😕?

kitne dino se update nehi kiya yaar..🤢...

yea lawer maan ko main kitne miss kar rahi hoon....

jaldi update kar.😳..

haan last update awesome dear.👏👏👏.

i'm waiting 4 ur update dear.😃...

lov,❤️

Tama

beauuuuuutiful!!!loved the update!!plz update soon.thnks 4 pm.

loved the update ❤️ ❤️..........pls make them realise soon bout their love.....also pls include me in ur PM list.i have sent u buddy request already...

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