FF*Despair*(maaneet)pt20at pg 133(17 nov)

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_Mystique_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

it sounds intersting

continue it soon.........

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maansi007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

nice is geet really shown 13 in ur ff or its only there guess???

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pushpi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Yay you updated! Congratulations dear!

This part was excellent. I cant wait to see what happens next and when Maan-Geet meet.

A child....12 or 13 years old.....Ha!

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zubi123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

the way u characterize nd the way u wrote the first part is interensting nd wating to knw hw they meet eachother, so update the nxt soonn

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love_lavnya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Pls add me in ur pm list dear awosome update all part are nice

n keep updating

love u

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tina tartari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

plz add me 2 ur pm list 2.thnks

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Hi,

Congratulations for New FF............
This FF is also very good, as usual, its your common quality, hai na..

Subject, i mean storyline was too good,
Oh Maan ko dekho, choti si bachhi hogi, wahan jaake dekhega toh maloom hoga......
hai na, choti si nahin, ek sundar si pari hai.............

Love
Lakshmi

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Serenity_me

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

nice one,,,interesting.....
maan saying k bachi hain....omg...jab samney ayegi na tab to- mr. msk tu sala kaam se gya,,,,🤣

hey add me in ur pm list..................