MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic.

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Very beautiful update ... I truly loved it, it was really amazing ... I loved the way you conveyed their emotions ... the awkwardness; the fear of what destiny has in store for them .. the first eye-lock; the first touch was really amazing ... Nupur was really quiet while Mayank was on a talking spree ... I felt Mayank was really nervous as some people have a tendency of talking more ... I am really waiting to see how are they going to adjust with each other ...

I loved it Madam ... continue soon ...

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

mehak..jst read all 3 parts...its super duper rockin re.....really really lookin 4wd for further parts in future.....pretty plzz add me to ur pm list for this ff...plzzzzzzzzz

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valliyah

@valliyah

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Every bit is so so heavenly.................please jaldi update karo.......can't wait................!!!

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amrita vasireddy

@AmritaReddy

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

simply magical mehak👏
n thanks 4 the pm🤗

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

awwwwwwww they really r the most beautiful couple !!!!!!!!
aur isko witness bhi duniya ki sabse khoobsurat cheez ne kiya .........

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

*sigh*

and i could feel the magic in the air with this part..!!

it was just perfect the way you described it all....!!

Awesome part..!

do continue soon..!

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459718

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Mehak dear , wow....Perfect update i loved Nupurs realization of her dream guy, that was the bestest part, rest was fine but that one really stuck.. Otherwise great work

Continue soon

Sajjal

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Gosh, Mehak I just can't tell you how much I loved this part!

It was so beautifully written. The way you described it as to how she first saw him, and how it all matched up with her idea of a perfect husband, the good looks, watch, hair , smile! Gosh, I am just bowled over by your writing Mehak!

These two are just so sweet together. Adorable <3

Lovely part Mehak!

Can't wait for the next. Please do update soon.

Love <3

Daania