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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
I m in love with thiz ff of urs MAhek....u have written each n every so beautifully...waiting for the next parttt
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
wow mehak nice part
sorry for late comment loved it]
looking foprward to next update
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update mehak ..........you wrote is soooooo well........such an amazing writer you are .........cant wait for the next part ............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u so much guys...🤗

PART 4:..

constant knocking on the door was making both of them uncomfortable...nupur slightly opened her eyes..she turned her side and she saw mayank on the couch..he was very irritated..
he had placed the cushion on his ear.his eyes firmly closed....and a irritatd look on his face....nupur couldnt help smiling..he was looking so cute, but another knock made her come out of her mesmirasation...

She went to open the door...it was shilpa...

SS...good morning beta..

Nupur got concious...she unneccarily started adjusting the collar of her shirt..

N..good mornng aunti...

SS...mayank uth gaya..

N.nahi..abhi nahi uthey hain..ap ander..

SS..nahi...tum usey utha do..aur jaldi tyaar ho jao tum dono..10 baj gaye hian...2 baje tum logon ki flight hai...ik bar dobara sara samman check kar lena...aur tumhare maa bauji ka bhi phn aya tha..wo log bhi a rahe hain..tu jaldi karo beta..

N..gi...

she turned but then said...

SS..aur aunti nahi maa kaho..

nupur smiled...

N...gi...

She closed the door,and saw that that the irritated look on mayank's face had vanished...it was just an innocent sleepy look...with his hair sligthly flowing and sunshine shining on him...

She looked at the window ...it was a beautiful morning.....

She went close to mayank..and now she didnt knew how to wake him...

she streched her arm to place on his shoulder but then she couldnt..she attenmpted it twice

Mayank was again distrubed due to the sunlight...he placed the cushion on his face...his eyes still closed.

Nuur was feeling as if she is not bale to speak.....finally she gathered strength..

N..mmaya...

She wasnt able to pronounce his name even...she didnt wanted to..so she decided on something else..

N..suniye...

He slowly lowered the cushion and peeped behind from the cushion with eyes half open..

nupur smiled with nervousness, and cleared her throat..

N..wo maa keh rahi thi k hum late..

M...LATE??..

mayank threw the cushion and stood up in an instant, nupur took a step back..she got very scared..

M..kia mtlb late?..

N..wo..wo maa keh rahi thi 10 baj gaye hain tu uth jana chaiye ta ke late na ho jayen...

Mayank breathed a sigh of relief..

M..oh!..mujhe laga hum late ho gaye hain..ufff..tum ne mujhe dara diya..

N..sorry.. mian tu bus...

M..nahi ..its ok...waise bhi hamien sab kuch dobara cross check karna hai..

He moved towards the cupboard and took out his clothes, nupur was nervoulsy standing..trying to put her tied hair behind her ear...mayank couldnt help smiling...she was looking sideways..

M..btw good morning...

Nupur turned and saw the heavenly smile again....her heart couldnt control its beats again..but she also replied with a smile.

N..good morning...

Mayank went to the washroom and nupur was standing there so much in awe of him...her heart was beating fast and she was smiling at her own...she arranged both the blankets and placed the pillow of sofa back on the bed...and she opened the cupboard...all her things were packed and and were to be brought from her house today,..she had just brought some clothes there, there was a sari and shalwar suit but she chose a jeans and kurta...as the flight was long so she decided to wear something comfrotable and durable...

Mayank returned..wearing a blue jeans and a white shirt full sleeves shirt with the sleeves folded till his elbows...nupur realised that he doenst likes full sleeves or wasnt comfortable in them..again rubbing his wet hair with the towel..nupur didnt knew that
why was she uncomfortable with his wet hair..he stood in front of the mirror throwing his towel on the bed...

Nupur picked it up , his towel even sent a shiver through her..she placed it on the chair...

M..tum bhi tyaar ho jao jaldi...

N..hmmm.ja rahi hon..

he was brushing his hair...nupur took her clothes and went to change..

Mayank was sitting arranging his papers when nupur returned....wearing black jeans and and a black half sleeves loose shirt which
was just above her thighs, her wet open hair tucked behind her ears...and her l white arms with mehindi till her elbows were looking beautiful in the black half sleeve shirt...as he entered mayank somewhere in his subconcious was happy seeing her open hair...but he lookd away ..

Nupur stood in front on the mirror..wearing her munglsutra, sindoor and chura...and she was brushing her hair...

mayank could sense the movments of her hands by the slight beats of the chura....he didnt relased but he was enjoying it.

he again turned her face...nupur was about to pin up her hair..and this time his subconcius took over him..

M..ye...

Nupur turned...and placed the clip..

N..gi?..

Mayank was again dissappioneted seeing her hair tied...he came back to his concious self...

M...kuch nahi..wo

The door knocked again

Mayank got relieved and quickly opened the door..it was gunjan...

G...good morning jiju...

M..good morning...

On hearing gunjan's voice nupur almost ran towards the door of the room..

N..gunjan!!...

Gunjan ran towards her and hugged her..mayank was amused by their excitement...he closed the door and started staring them..

N..kaisi hai tu?..

G..meri choro..tum kaisi ho?..

N..main thek hon...

Gunjan looked her from top to bottom...

G..wow di !..bht hot lag rahi ho..

Mayank who was staring them immedeitely turned his face away...he was feeling awkward but couldnt help smiling.....nupur got nervous like hell..

N..kia?...gunajn tu..

Gunjan sensed that she had said something wrong..she giggled at their nervousness..

G...umm mera mtlb hai k achi lag rahi ho...

N..acha..maa bauji a gaye..

Gunjan's mood changed in a moment..and all her smile vanished and she coldly repied..

G..haan...

Meanwhile shipla entered..she was somewhat not happy to see nupur...nupur sensed that..she got very confused....mayank's smile aslo vanished,and he coldly said..

M..good moring maa...

SS..good morning beta...chalo neche chailen..

They all went down stiars...and shahsi moved forward to hug her daughter but tulsi said in almost garving voice...

T..ye kai hai nupur..ye kai pehana hai...

Nupur got very scared...

Guanjan and mayank were both shocked..

T..jao badl k aao...

Gunajn and mayank couldnt belive their ears...they were shocked ...and to add fuel to fire shipla also spoke up..

S...hann main bhi yehi kehne wali thi..nupur beta kapre badl lo...ye thek nahi hain

mayank got very furious..

M..ku?..in main kia kharabi hai?..

Tulsi, shashi and shilpa were amazed to see his his agitated voice...nupur looked at mayank with tears dweeling in her eyes but she lowered her head..gunajn felt very satisfied..

T..beta shaddi k pehle din kala rang...

G..maa plz!!...bus kar do...

Mayank shook his head in disbelief...

N..main badl leti hon..

her vioce told that she was very scared and embaressed..

M..koi zarorat nahi hai...hamien bht lamba safr katrna hai..u wear what u are comfortable in..

gunjan smiled even more pleasently..she was happy that her di had got a person who will not let her suffer..on the other hand mayank felt very bad and angry..he didnt felt nice seeing nupur like this..shashi broke in..

SB...chalo choro kapre...nupur beta ye apne papers aur saman dekh lo..

Nupur wiped all her tears and started looking at papers...she then took them to mayank...

N..ye ik baar dekh len gey...

mayank took them and then placed both of thier papers in one bag...

SB..ab airport chalte hain,11 baj gaye hain...2 baje ki flight hai..cahlety hain..

hey all reached the airport and mayank went to fetch a trolley for keeping all the luggage..although nupur liked mayank very much,
she was very excited but there was an unknown fear which was making her very uncomfortable

TS..kia hua nupur?..

Nupur tried to smile

N..kuch nahi maa.

G,..di bikul thek hai..ha na di?..

Nupur nodded with a smile..

SS..haan...khush ho na..

SB..bolo na beta...

TS..haan bolo..

All three were asking her and gunjan was getting irritated...first they got her married and now enfrocing happiness on her..

TS..bolo beta..

M..hum khush hain..thank u..aur ab hum chalien..time bht kam hai...

Nupur was relieved to see mayank, she herself couldnt answer ...gunjan also smiled.

TS..haan haan..beta jao tum log.

her voice was shaking a bit...nupur hugged all three of the parents..and she tried to smile but had little tears...

Maynk exchanged greetings with nupur's parents and hugged his mom..he never thought he would feel so cold hugging his mom..no matter how hard he tried to be normal but he couldnt refuse the reality that what if nupur hadnt been nice....

They both were moving towards inside when guajan called themm

G..di..jiju..

Both of them turned...and she hugged them...both.simeltaneously...gunjan placed her hand on her waist and mayank gently on her head..

G..i will miss u both..all the best..jao mera naam roshan karo ta k main bhi proudly keh sakon k ye merey di aur jiju hain..

Both of them smiled and went inside...

Mayank and Nupur started the biggest journey of their lives...a journey which changed their lives even before it started..

God knows what more UNEXPECTED MAGIC was waiting for them...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edit..........................

Mehak Ji

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part 3

mayurs first eye contqact with mixed feelings

and then flashbackf abt nupurs dream-Boy which ultimately becme true....

nupur was satisfied with maynks gesture and attitude- bilkul uski sapno ki rajkumar jaisa.

By GOD myanks smile brought smile on nups face.

and maynk was as usual mesmerized by her angelic beauty.

their first touch made them heavenly feel.... .


loved their first convo- it was so understanding and realistic.

u describe the whole mayur scene very beautifully- totally rocking

u proved again that u r an awesome writer dear

Part 4

hmm so first day after mayur marriage

mayu looks so innocent while he was sleeping

and nups was starring at her

Wah mayu loves to c nupur in open hair'

when he saw nupur tied clip then he was disappointed- no prob mayu agli baar use bata dena. tumhare liye wo apni baal khuli rakhegi.lol


Awwwwwwww our mayu is so sweet. he suppot our nupur
i just loved it.

Mayur started their magical journey about their lives
and i m more curious 2 know abt it.


Mehak - u r just superb writer
i m fida over of ur writing style

i loved it lots dear
keep updating

Note: Mehak try to post this FF on Fan Fiction forum.




Edited by fariaa70 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
haye haye kya batau?
as usual the update was superb....
tum mujhe ek baath batao tumhare dimaag main kuch perfectnes ka machine hai kya?😆😆
arey yaar then how can you write so damn perfectly????
plese do answer my question
Edited by mayurg2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hee Hee !! Haww Haww .. Finally Update aur Gallery bHool gayi !Lovely Paart , Loved the part Mayank was angry at the Parents😃 ! Waiting for the unexpected Magic !! Update your gAlley too and Thanks For The Pm.

Natasha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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the update was superb.....poor nupur..how embarassed she was...but our mayu was there to help na..love gunji also....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
Wonderful update madam,

I loved each and every emotion you showed ... Nupur's nervousness, Mayank's rage, the awkwardness, I adore Gunjan in this story ... The mothers were somewhat harsh on Nupur ... but it's okay, I loved it how Mayank supported her ... You are creating magic Madam ... absolutely awesome ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
What an update Sirjee!!!!!!!!👏👏
You are awesome Mehak!!!
Even though you give long updates..but then too mein itna kho jaati hoon unme ki lagta hai khatam hi na ho.......
Plz cont soon..😃

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