MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic.

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Payal-15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Nice OS Mehak!!!😊

continue soon..........😊

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Natasha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Heyy Mehak ! Its always a pleasure to recieve your Pms !And well this is such a sweet heart Updaye. Awwie they are married without dragging and all ado ! And hez mesmerised !!!😳Update as soon as you cazn and thanks for the Pm

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

awesome cs and first 2 parts were amazing!!!!

really loved it...

plzzz continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

wowwwwww mehak amazing update loved it alot

thx for the pm

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

PART 3:

Nupur didnt realise that mayank had entered, she was looking outside the window...looking beautiful in the dim light,
with moon light just admiring her...even breeze wasnt able to hold itself to play with her hair...again and agin making them flitter her and there..nupur wasnt really bothered where her hair were going..
she was leaned againt the wall, by the side of the window and her eeys were closed.. while the nature was busy gracing her beauty...

Mayank let go the door knob...it slipped from his hand and the door closed with a bang..

Nupur immediately opened her eyes and striaghtened ...

THE FIRST EYE CONTACT..fear, hesitance

Mayank slowly moved towards her....nupur's mind started flashing with all the memories...

N...tu dekhna gunjan..duniya ka sab se handsome larka hoga...

Dressed in white sherwani, the collar button opened, with the sleeves pulled up till his elbows..

N...gunajn agr us k baal lambe hoye na tu main tu kaat don gi sarey..

short hir, slightly ruffled...giving a messy look...

N..uffff...mujhe koi beard nahi chaiye...

he was clean shaved..

N..aur haan ghari zaroor pehnta ho..i love watches

wearing a watch in his hand...

N...aur ankhain tu itni deep hongi k main kabhi bahir hi nahi aaon gi...

black eyes..which seemed had the intensity of the world...

Mayank came and stood in front of her...both standing on the extreme edges of the window...moon perfectly witnessing their first meeting, thier first closeness..

N..aur dekhna gunjan us ki smile meri zindagi ki sab se khubsorat chez hogi..

This filled nupur's eyes with tears...smile?...her mind questioned her heart

N..will he ever smile at me?

Mayank smiled at her...and the tear flowed from nupur's eyes...as no there was no space for it...his smile was heavenly...and nupur realsied...the most beautiful thing of her life...

M..hii..mayank...

he put froward his hand...

His voice was even deep than his personality..she looked at the hand for a moment and then she looked at his face again, he was still smiling in the most welcoming manner..nupur's heart skipped a beat..

Moon light, white sherwani...heavenly smile...nothing could be more divine...

She lifted her beautiful, soft white hand and placed it on his comparatively huge palm..

N..Nupur...

thier first touch..it sent a shiver through nupur...it seemed the blood in her veins pumped with double intensity,a nd nupur's soft touch made mayank feell as if a rose petal had landed on his palm...
it was ony for mere second...their hands parted...

M..so how are u?..

N..fine..thank u...

M..dekho nupur i really dont know how to talk to u...it is very awakward for me..and i am sure tumhare liye bhi...

Nupur started looking out of the window,..she couldnt look into his eyes..

M..i always look forward..shaadi ho gai hai hamari...main nahi karna chata tha..aur mujhe pata hai tum bhi nahi karna chahti thi..right..

Nupur looked at him and nodded...

M..i know but i guess hum dono apne parents ko mana nahi kar sake...we both are alike..

He said with a smile...and nupur nodded again..

M..tumhe shiayed lage k main bht ghusey se rahon ga tumhare sath...

Nupur again nodded...and mayank couldnt help smiling...she was really very innocent..

M..why arent u speaking...?

N..nahi wo...

M...anyways main sirf ye kahon ga k main bina gahlti ki kisi ko saza nahi deta...hamare sath jo bhi hua us main hum dono ka koi kasoor nahi hai.....it's destiny...

Nupur was looking at him...her furthur dreams were being fullfilled...

M..aur mujhe usi se shaadi karni thi ji8s se meri maa ne kehna tha..so i am ok with it...that i am married to u...

This made nupur's heart agian skip a beat,..

M..its just i dont want to lose focus on my aim...meri liye meri studies bht important hain aur mujhe pata hai k tumhare liye bhi...so i guess God has brought two equally ambituous people together...

N....hmmm...

Mayank moved away from the window taking of his watch..

M...waise i have never met a girl jo itni ambituous ho..bilke mujhe lagat tha k shiyed larkiyan itna plan karti hi nahi hain..but i am really impressed...tumhare entrance exam main kitne marks they..

N...93 %..aur ap k?..

M..93.5%..aur plz ap ki zarorat nahi hai..its ok...

Mayank took out his tracks from the cupboard and went to change..nupur was very satisfied,,it seemed as of her breath was flowing agian...she was very scared but mayank was like her..just like her...

He came back..rubbing his wet hiar with the towel..nupur got somewhat uncomfortable so she turned her face away..

M.,..tumhe change nahi karna?...

She again turned..

M...i mean...subha 2 baje hamari flight so i guess so jana chaiye...

Nupu again nodded and this time mayank broke into a lugh..

M..yaar tum bolti ku nahi ho...gunajn thek keh rahi thi k tum nahi bolti...u are just nodding...

Nupur got a bit embarresed...

N..nahi wo...main..

mayank sensed that he shouldnt had laughed..

M..Its ok..main tu bus aisey hi keh raha tha...change lar lo...

She went to change and mayank removed all the rose petals from the bed...nupur returned..

wearing a silk pajama shirt with her hair tied in a pony tail...mayank got somewhat dissappionted seeing her hair tied...but he then said..

M...ummm..dekho nupur u dont need to feel uncomfortable...i dont know what to say..mian k..

N..its ok,...main uncomfrotabe nahi hon...mujhe dar lag raha tha per ab nahi lag raha...thank u so much ofr understanding k meri ghalti nai hai...

Mayank smiled

M..not bad..u speak very well..

She smiled and mayank got still for moment...sligthly curved lips and the shine in her eyes were magic...

M..umm thek hai tu u sleep on the bed, main sofa pe so jaon ga..and no need for courtesy..

N..ok...

They both lied down..thinking that so much had changed in the past one week..they were married

Mayank was happy that nupur was a sensible girl...and he had the hope that they could carry on..

Nupur couldnt believe that mayank was exactly the same husband she dreamt of...is really God so grateful...

thinking this they both went to sleep...

their window was still open and moon again witnessing the most beautiful couple..who were brought together by destiny

who were perfect for each other, and who were going to experience all the UNEXPECTED MAGIC in their lives...

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Awwww...I SWEAR this part was super awesome! <3

Right from the beginning..when she remembers her dream guy..hehe..with long hair..watch..smile..wow! That totally had me mesmerized!😲😳

And hes so cute..entrance exams ke marks puch raha hai!?!😲😆 LOL..damn sweet part..Im loving this one!

Continue soon!!🤗

-Mansi

Edited by -Mansi- - 14 years ago

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kranti01

@kranti01

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

this couldnt get any better.you're so gifted mehek. whenever you write, i can see the scenes happening in front of my eyes.

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secret_me

@secret_me

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

awwww...that was really cute..it was awesum yaar!!!

continue soon..

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: kranti01
this couldnt get any better.you're so gifted mehek. whenever you write, i can see the scenes happening in front of my eyes.

i acn feel their emotions. their missing beats.
way to go girl. do update soon.