Mayank&Nupur SS-Hum Jo Na Keh Paye[Last Part PG23]

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

My apologies for commenting so late Sajjal 😳

First & foremost Your concept of Love & Ego is marvellous, at least i wouldn't have thought of something so intense.

Your stories are absolutely amazing, Sajjal! I love the way you express each and every scene with so much ease and intensity that i can completely imagine this scenario in front of my eyes. Seriously i wish you were the creative writer of MJHT 😆

Very very expressive, and i love this Mayank & Nupur, i love the way Mayank is trying all possible ways to remove "Raj" out of her life & moreover the fact that he is jealous for the very first time.

Love these characters, you totally made my day hon!

Please PM me the very next time you update the 5th part please, i cant wait to know what happens next 😍

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

read 2 parts together,...

awesome parts..

nicely written....

continue soon..do pm me...

thanks for the pm ..😊

divya

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Nirvrithi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

All the best Sajjal for interview 👍🏼

Coming to the update - I dont feel sorry for Mayur now.

If their ego is so big even to express the love ( in fact ,I dont even understand the need of those three words - 8 letters ,when they both know they love each other) , how will their life can proceed after marriage.

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Wow ! Sajjal, Its beautifully written !Both have such clashing egos and no one ready to give up ! I hoped Mayu would say I Love youBut then i guess you have better plans😉Oh so Aliza was Mayu's plan..OMG.I so love this line , its so touchy It does not matter who wins....both will loose something very special and edearing.
Best-o-luck for your interview!!Yes i do wish to recieve your Pms andd me in the Pm List !!
Update as soon as you can !!

Natasha

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Prachi

@preitygal99

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Hey Sajjal,

Loved the update.

All The Best for ur interview.

-Prachi

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Mansi bhatia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Sajjal...that was like seriously AWESOME! I was a bit apprehensive of reading this before...but I swear..Im loving it now..

I was amused at every line you wrote!😆 god..MN can be so egoistic sometimes I swear..rem the time when Nups wanted divorce!? I got an attack!

Coming to this one..LOL. Mayank is so cunning! Loved this one..

"because you don't want to." mayank replied rubbing his cheek with her, while nupur stood stunned. He was right, if she could have this moment, them standing together like this would never end...but unfourtunately her Pride was way too big to let go ..." Not good enough"
"Fine. I don't want you to go....i can't stand seeing you with someone else. him touching you makes me want to kill him right there. Your mine and mine only"
" Still not enough" Nupur said excusing herself from his gaze and looking away. he was doing it again. the thing where his eyes would bore into your and you'd feel like as if the whole world had stopped and you two were the only ones there. It made you feel like you were on top of the world.

So beautifully expressed..I read it thrice!😆

Okay I have a doubt..Why doesnt Mayank say ILY to her? Did i miss something in the previous parts?😕

Over-all it was AWESOME <3

-Mansi🤗