FF.manneet **TREMBLE of LOVE** part 25 pg70 - Page 38

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Keyama, love you so much for the wonderful update!!!

Oh, I loved how Maan helped Geet!!!
I guess Armaan would be out now😊
Thank God, this update didn't had Sameera. Let Maan know about her truth asap. See Dadi is sure enough that Sameera isn't pregnant. Do something so that its Geet who brings out this truth in front of Maan, may be dadi helps geet in it....

Update soon please😳



yep…. sam will be out soon…… i have my next evil plan now…. :D😈
heheh ty hun loved ur comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Updates!!!
You know I've been checking every other second if u updated!
It's 8:25 here and instead of going to skool i'm here reading ur FF!!
It's juss too good!
Please update soon and i mite be able 2 read more be4 leaving
Lol
Just a request
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
I love maan for what he did for geet helping her and by ur word that mean that Sam is out for short and the love story of maan and geet it's start know but wooow maan pay 2M just for geet I reay whant some one will make like this for me lol
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice update..hve u written this story already?? updates are pretty fast- which im loving!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kyphfanz

Nice update..hve u written this story already?? updates are pretty fast- which im loving!!


yep i did…… actually thats what i do for all of them….. i just type whatever comes in my mind……. its better then thinking…… it absolutely takes ages…… lol…. x :D next part is up soon :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Awesome Updates!!!
You know I've been checking every other second if u updated!
It's 8:25 here and instead of going to skool i'm here reading ur FF!!
It's juss too good!
Please update soon and i mite be able 2 read more be4 leaving
Lol
Just a request
-Jassi


ty hun… yep one more part up soon
xxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey keyama,
I m speechless what can I comment u r rocking wiht u r each n every part lvoe the way story move But when are maaneet lovestory start I m despreatly waiting for that Hope u understand
I m addict with u r ff n pls also update the HEATBEATS part also
greattttttttttttttttttttttt part all of Awesome Updates!!! I can't say anything due to I m just thinking what is the next?
pls update soon can't wait dear
love u

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Posted: 14 years ago

part 20


Few weeks have passed... Maan haven't seen geet for long time... And he started have dough.... Samara is not pregnant... She had no symptoms... Maan haven touched her since they were back from Shimla... And that have been well over 4 months... Wouldn't there been a bump he wonders....

In one evening... Geet comes round... To see Dadima.... Sammera and maan also present....

Geet hugs Dadima and maan ad Sammera walks in.... He becomes exited sewing geet after such a long time....
Geet: hello sir! Hello mam! She smiles and asks nicely.... How is your health? How is the baby....
Dadi and geet looked at her tummy... In great concentration....
Geet: that's odd.... Wouldn't you have a bump by now? Geet looked at dadi....my cousin is 4 months.... Her bump is visible!
Sone excitement came in maans eyes.... Hoping she wasn't pregnant!
Sam: umm.... Actually... It completely depends on the body... You know....
Geet: yea I guss!
Geet and dadi walks out of the living room.... And enters the kitchen....
Maan looked curious!

Geet: are you sure she is pregnant!
Dadi: she is not!
Geet: hmm... Why she is lying!
Dadi: her habit.... That's the 2nd time....

Maan stood at the door... Shocked! Sam already have left... To avoid further question....

Maan: 2nd time!
Geet and dadi looked at him in shock!
Geet: umm.... Oh.... 2nd time for my cousin! She tried to change the subject!
Maan: dadi.... What are you hiding?
Dadi: beta... She already have aborted a child before!
Maan stood there is shock... Hold on.... What do you mean!
Dadi: a year ago....
Maan: that's imposible.... I never! He stopped! Thumped....
Geet and dadi looked at him with a surprising face... And a disgust thought.....
Maan rushed out.... Went rounds Sammera....

Geet: umm..... I should leave dadi... Maybe see you soon....
Dadi: why don't you stay round for some more time....
Geet: maybe another day....
Dadi: would you be able to help maan out.... From this!
Geet looked at her.... She was already under maans depth.... Maybe this can pay off... She thought....
Geet: you mean Sammera?
Dadi: yea....
Geet: smiles... Maan sir done allot for me... Of course I will....

Later on the evening... Geet calls maan.... Just before he was about to enter... Sammera....
Maan happy... Shocked! Surprised.... First time ever she called....

Maan: hello!
Geet: hi sir....
Geet wasn't sure how to start... She really Disn't like to interfere in his personal life.... But she had promise dadi... She will talk....
Geet: sir.... If you need any help.... I.... I ca....
Maan: it's ok... I think I can.... Actually... Can you met me... In 10 minutes!
Geet: I am home! It will take me 30 minute atleast!
Maan: I will pick you up!
Geet: ok!

Somereason... The fear they shared... Have disappeared.... Geet was comfortable with him.... And maan... Loved her company..... Even-though he knows.... Nothing could ever happen between them.... Geet is only there... Because he helped her.....

Maan picks geet up....

Maan: umm... Ehh.... Are you sure... That you want to help me!
Geet nodes!
Maan: ok.... Umm.... Do you know any doctor... It's your friend!
Geet: my sister is a medical student! She must know some!
Maan droves back to her house.... "call heer!"
Geet looked at him... With a confusing face.... She calls her... Here walks out.... Nearly a stroke.... Seeing MSK with her sister....
Maan: heer....
Geet and heer Bothe looked at him.... Surprised....
Geet: how do you know her name?
Heer: MSK knows my name!
Maan: get in the car!

Heer rushes in....
Maan: any friend.... Who is a doctor!
Heer: yes.....

Maan wasn't type of guy... Who would leave someone... That easily.... Specially.... Cheating on him.... ..... ..... ....
Sammera had no clue what she was putting her self in to.... .....


Dadi: geet.... Why don't you join Khurana industry?
Geet: I don't know Dadima.... I will apply again for a new job soon! So I might do!
Dadi: you don't have to apply... We seen your talent!
Geet: hmm... Thanks Dadi!

Rahul calls....

Geet haven't said anything to Rahul... And Armaan.... Geet have no idea... What have maan done to him.... His business seems to be heeding towards bankruptcy.... Which geet was extremely shocked about.... Geet would dare not ask anything to maan.... He always was in high temper.... Then she thought.... Have dadi gone mad.... Trying to make me work with him..... It's like.... Basically.... "khudki paro me kulari marna!"
Dadi: hmm...
Geet smiles... And answers the phone....

Geet: hello!
Rahul: where are you?
Geet: round dadimas!
Rahul: you re always round hers.... You having days off.... And I never see you!
Geet: sorry baba! Umm... Ok... Pick me up... I will see you soon!

Maan walks in... Geet smiles... : by dadi.... By sir.....
Dadi: by beta!

Maan: why she always leaves.... Soon as I walk in!
Dadi: hmm.... No.... It's rahul..... Probably complaining.... That he never see her.... I hope something.... Happens between them soon.....
Maan became irritated.... Didn't like that at all.....
Dadi: becra Rahul..... Loves her blindly.... And she .... I really wonder who she loves!
Maan went In deep thought.....
Dadi: maan! Maan!
Maan: haa.... I am tirade.... Goodnight Dadima!

Maan couldn't sleep at all.... He kept thinking about geet and Rahul..... Even though they had no chance..... But he still felt.... Some weird feeling.... Again.... Armaan incident started to play in his mind.... Thinking about how week geet was.... At the same time.... So innocent and pure..... Anyone could loose there balance near her..... Anyone.... Even he didn't trust him self.... Last thing he could remember from the Simla night.... When he was drunk.... Was geet..... Nothing els...... So he must came close to Sammera.... Thinking it was her...... He still hated him self for that night.... Curse..... Geet would never.... Ever would be close to him..... Knowing each and every fact about his life.... Or he could ever touch her..... He deserves someone far better then me..... Someone pure like her..... Unlike me......

Tears started to roll down his eyes.... Like happiness.... Was not under his name.... Not anymore...... All night..... He thought about.... The tremble of his life...…….



NEXT: big twists…...






OK now i want… comments lots… lol… i loved them all.. ty so much… :D

…. from now on… i will do a long part :D…. really long… and going bc to my heartbeats….. heheh sorry all of u who is like mailing me madly to update other two….. so so so so sorry….. i will do it today…. i will try :D

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Posted: 14 years ago
all this parts are really awesome...so loved them...
and must say fast updates...thx alot...i am so loving it all
great read gurl...thx...keep writing...waiting for next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
Owoowo
Amazing
Gr8
Loved it
Now mote curious...
Pls update soon
Xxxx

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