FF.manneet **TREMBLE of LOVE** part 25 pg70

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hay you all'.. cant think of anything for Ment to be' lol
well heer is another one' i am free today' taking brk from study' so i wrote allot of parts' for this new FF' hehehe

i hop u like this' its complicated :D
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Tremble of love....



part 1


Maan: not very punctual! Are they!
Sammera: no... Not at all...
Maan: 5 minutes late!
Sam: are you sure... I mean..... you want to do there project...
Maan: I don't know!
Sam: let's say no...

Geet and Rahul walks in...
Rahul: we are Extremely sorry...
Maan: you are late...
Geet: sorry sir... We...
Maan: can we proceed with the project...
Geet: sure...
Geet present the presentation... It was outstanding... Maan was very impress... Every aspect was thought carefully.... Nothing was ignored...
Rahul gave her a very proud happy face...
Maan: impressive... I like the idea...
Sam: me to... You have Thought about every aspect... extremely well...
Geet: thank you sir.... Thank you mam...

Maan: well congratulation mr Rahul megera.... Project is your....

Geet jumps up in excitement.... Couldn't control her happiness....
Maan gives her a shocking look... And walks out... Flowed by Sammera....

Rahul picks geet up... Spines her round... Hugging her tight.....
Rahul: I am so happy....
Geet: you have no idea... How happy I am....
Rahul: all because of you....
Geet: no you....
Rahul: I love you.... I love you..... I love you.......
Rahul spines her round..... Bothe happy.... Smiling.....

Sam: that was surprising!
Maan: what do you mean!
Sam: it's impossible to impress you!
Maan: MSK looks for talent... And any talent... That deserves to be impressed... i will be impressed...
Sam: why you talk in a Sooooo long.... Weird language!
Maan ignores... Sits in the car....
Sam next to him.... Kisses his cheek... "where would you like to take your peonse!"
Maan: anywhere you want!
Sam: I am hungry....


Geet back at home...

Geet: can you believe it.... MSK... Impressed by my project... She was boasting... Non stop....
Mum: ok! Ok! We hard it... You have repeated that... Millions of time!
Geet: so... It deserves to be repeated... Do you know how hard is to impress that kharus... People usually shakes seeing him... My thought was drying... My leg was shaking... Shivering.... OMG tell me about it...
Heer: ok ok... Di please... Chup!
Virji: enough!
Geet: whatever....
Virji: where is Rahul?
Geet: idk!
Heer: your BF! You suppose to know...
Geet: he is not my BF! He loves me... I don't!
Virji: Chup! Your engagement is planned with him...
Geet: umm... Per... I don't want to marry him.... My dream guy.... Have to be angry... At the same time super hot.... Sweet.... Loving.... Loves me blindly.... believe me madly.... Trusts me....... Egoistic.... Who could control me easily... and the world..... And most of all... I love him... Where my one smile will make all his stress disappears... My one smile will make his day..... You know... And Rahul... Does everything I say.... I mean before I could even think... It will be there... virji.... Can't you choose someone els???
Virji: shut up... That only happens in a film.... Have you even seen your face.... Bari aya perfect man donhne!

Geet: what's wrong with my face? Heer am I ugly?
Heer: OMG! Di have you just realized??
Geet: mummmm..... They all teasing me.... Calling me ugly!
Mam: perfect.... Atlas they have said something that suets you!
Geet walks off in strop...


Sam: maan.... I don't understand you at all.... Why do I love you?
Maan smiles holding her close.... "BCs you do!"
Sam smiles.... Enjoying there passionate kiss....
Maan hugs her tight.... "I love you.... I have to leave for banglore 2moro!"
Sam: what?
Maan: yes... For a week! Dadi specially invited me... It's her best friends Something!
Sam: your Dadi bhi na.... Always spoils are mood!
Maan gets angry at those word... She is my dadi... You know... That I hate any words against her....
Maan pushes her way...
Sam: sorry darling.... Huggs him tight again...


Rahul: we have to go to banglore...
Geet: what? Why?
Rahul: another site... + it's my grandmas birthday...
Geet: Awww so sweet...
Rahul: I know... She is my favorite... + she wants to see you...
Geet: you know... I don't want to marry you!
Rahul: I know... But you are!
Geet: you are confusing... I don't understand you at all....
Rahul: I know...
Geet: I have gave up saying no now! My no doesn't have any effect on you.
Rahul: of course...
Geet roles her eyes...



next trip to banglore'.




INDEX

PART 1 PAGE 1          

PART 2 PAGE 1          

PART 3 PAGE 2         

PART 4 PAGE 2

well

i do have few part banked'. and i was really bored' so i wrote a bit more'

pls pls pls

do comment' i will be updating part by part

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today,,,, atleast 7 

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and sorry for ment to be' will be a week delay'. i cant think of any story line

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Plz plz plz......do continue l love the concept.......i have read your's ff's nd os..woh bhi amazing they.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sweet...
so geet and rahul are a couple?
and so are maan and sameera?
nice nice..
dont tell me both of the guys grandmothers are BFF's interesting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sounds interesting .. waiting for those 7 parts .. YAY so for some time thr wont be any boring lectures .. hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey great job......like it......but I'm confuse...so geet dont work for KC?.....n maan love samira?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey, you back with another FF!!!
Great yaar! Love you for this!!!😊

The first part was good😊
Rahul loves Geet but Geet doesn't. Sounds interesting😉
Sameera loves Maan, Does Maan also loves Sameera?

Waiting for the Bangalore trip😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Res for part 2

Didn't know you'd be updating so quick...
Part 2 was good. Gradually you're unfolding the story😊
I hate Sameera abhi se😡

Geet is so lively and frank😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome yaar gud beginning continue it sooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amzing concept really luved it continue soon

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