FF.manneet **TREMBLE of LOVE** part 25 pg70 - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago
oops just read ur update !! i guess u hvnt pmed yet ..........well theek hai 1 chance fr ur maan lol :)....btw why did geet mom say tht ??
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Posted: 14 years ago

u r updating so fast,that we are impatient for the next part now, bcoz all the parts are better & better.

so plz update soon.........

thnx for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

part 13


Geet woke up middle of the night to get some drink.... Hall was pitch black.. But light from laptop.... Geet walked to the kitchen... The noise made maan jump... He turned round.... It's geet....
She drunk some water and was about to walk off with a jug ... She caught maans eyes...
Maan looked way.... : you could have called nakul!
Geet: it's just water... I can manage!
Maan: ok!
Geet: it's 4 am... Don't you sleep?
Maan looked at her surprisingly.... First time ever... She made some effect to talk to him properly...
Maan: umm... Ehh... No....
Geet: what? You don't sleep?
Maan: I mean... I have lots of work to finish off!
Geet: you could do that twomoro... In the office!
Maan: umm.. Eh.... No... It's too much... I have to finish this off by end of this week!
I really don't want any help from Sammera!
Geet; umm... Alright.... Geet didn't like to disturb..... Knew he wasn't happy with her... And she didn't like getting personal.... "goodnight!"

Maan sat there... Really wanted to talk to geet more... But of course no use...

Next day geet made breakfast... Dadi and geet sat there eating... Maan joins...
Maan: how are you feeling dadi?
Dadi: extremely good... Are you going to the office?
Maan: yes!
Dadi: you still have one week off...
Maan: I really don't have time for this dadi...
He walked off... Without having breakfast...
Geet: umm.. It's good to have breakfast....
Maan stopes.....: he looked at geet angrily.... Everyone was shocked.... Then heart attack... As he seats down... And actually finishes his breakfast!... Then walks off!
Dadi looked at geet in shock: he never listens to anyone!
Geet: hmm.... Maybe he was hungry... And nun of you ever stopped him....
Dadi: no... I always try...
Geet: idk...
Dadi: I know I should not ask you this... But you have a week off right... Would you be able to please go and keep an eye on maan... Please....
Geet: umm... Alright dadi... But just for you...
She smiles...

Office....

Geet walks in... Rahul and Bothe Armaan were calling... Armaan were furious... But couldn't say a word.... Rahul... Didn't like the word... But he always agrees with geet...

Geet knocks on maans door...
Maan: come in...
Geet: good morning sir!
Surprise after surprise for maan... The girl who... For past months... Haven't spoken to him or came anywhere near him.... She is in his home and office!!!!!!!!! But he was happy to see her..... Maan wasn't sure him self.... But her face always makes her day............. Like all his stress disappears................................

Maan: umm tum! I mean geet!
Geet: sorry sir... I was working with dadi for two weeks... And I still have a week left... I have to work with you.....
Maan liked that...... His heart was jumping like a small baby.... Whole week with geet was like a paradise..... But..... Maan didn't deserve her at all...... Specially remembering what Armaan have told him.... He already have shared a special relationship with someone..... No matter how hard he may try..... He could never turn those clocks back..... And win geet...... That's never going to happen..... Not in this lifetime..... Not after she knows everything..... And still.... He could have never lied to her......... Maan was in deep thought..... He had no idea what his mind was thinking..... Not at all.....

Maan: yea.... Sure......
Geet: thanks sir.... I will be in the next office.... If you need me.... Please do call.....

Sammera wasn't in office.... Maan insulting her in public.... Really did create a bad image.... So she decided to hide for sometime.....

Maan kept looking at geet.... Now ad then..... He had no clue.... That he had a GF....
Geet walks in with a file...
Geet: sir.... Do you think... This will be suitable?
maan looks at the file...: likes geet concept... I think perfect...
Geet smiles....
Maan was stun with her smile.... That was the first time she actually smiled at him....
Geet: thanks... I will complete this designee and will bring it back to you.....

As the day went by... Maan couldn't stop thinking about her smile.... Something was different about that day.... After 2 long years... He felt happy.... Happy... Some weird happiness.... Started to cover his face.... His heart.... But typical maan have to shout at someone....
Someone asked why he was happy....

Maan: I don't pay you to gossip.... Get back to work!

Geet stood there jumped with his high voice... She rushes in to her cabin.... Maan noticed that... Then he realized.... How Armaan and Rahul.... Always talks in low voice in front of her.... She must get really scared with high voice..... Maan smiled... I Guess that's not happening here.... But she is only here for a week.... That doesn't make any difference..... '..




ok' ok'. ok' enjoy much as u cannnnnnn'. thats all i am saying😃


:D wont update till later on today' and i havent PM anyone yet' will do it now'


and ty for all the lovely comments

xxxxxx sox i neevr reply but i do read them

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PLS PLS PLS DO COMMENT

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome dear👏but POOR MAAN😲agar yeh MAAN bechara hai tu bas phir hum kya kahain🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hermoini

oops just read ur update !! i guess u hvnt pmed yet ..........well theek hai 1 chance fr ur maan lol :)....btw why did geet mom say tht ??


ty hun next part is up :D
just enjoy this.. :D
i couldnt make u all cry for long… but it will fluctuate…
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just read parts 12 and 13!!
Amazing!!!
I liked the way Maan shouted at sameera😉
I wonder how could he even fall for her😲

Liked the way geet is taking care of Dadi😊
After seeing the effect of Geet on Maan, I am sure Dadi will make more efforts to make her wish true, i.e. Maan ki Geet😆😆

Loving the way Maan is falling for Geet😍
But Geet is so sweet,simple, serene and Maan totally the opposite, I mean the way he's been portrayed till now, his actions doesn't seem to be nice but yes, his heart is good.
Lets see what happens further....

And I am happy Armaan is being ignored by Geet due to her new responsibilities😉
Armaan ki buri nazar hamari Geet par, usko door hi rakho😆
But feeling sorry for Rahul, he geniunely likes geet....

I just read your replies to my comments.
please don't say sorry for not replying. Its perfectly alright😊
P.S. perfectly alright till the time you treat us with multiple updates😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
H mm .. like it!! Things are cooling down a bit ..
I would like to know how Maan steals geet from Armaan & Rahul..
Rahul though seems to be quite a sweat heart .
Though it would be difficult for geet to accept Maan after what she had seen in Simla(Sam's chapter is closed for now ).. but lets see how this tremble of love survives between Maan & Geet!!

Superb FF yaar, 👏👏 claps for you⭐️

& please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U r really quick in it (I like it ) !!
Edited by riyaanu87 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Just read parts 12 and 13!!

Amazing!!!
I liked the way Maan shouted at sameera😉
I wonder how could he even fall for her😲

Liked the way geet is taking care of Dadi😊
After seeing the effect of Geet on Maan, I am sure Dadi will make more efforts to make her wish true, i.e. Maan ki Geet😆😆

Loving the way Maan is falling for Geet😍
But Geet is so sweet,simple, serene and Maan totally the opposite, I mean the way he's been portrayed till now, his actions doesn't seem to be nice but yes, his heart is good.
Lets see what happens further....

And I am happy Armaan is being ignored by Geet due to her new responsibilities😉
Armaan ki buri nazar hamari Geet par, usko door hi rakho😆
But feeling sorry for Rahul, he geniunely likes geet....

I just read your replies to my comments.
please don't say sorry for not replying. Its perfectly alright😊
P.S. perfectly alright till the time you treat us with multiple updates😆😆


hehe ty hun… i will try my best… but this maan… hmm… enjoy much as u can
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loved ur comments
xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
both the parts were amazing...so loved them...
maan and geet together...really awesome...
so loved it..keep writing 👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: riyaanu87

H mm .. like it!! Things are cooling down a bit ..

I would like to know how Maan steals geet from Armaan & Rahul..
Rahul though seems to be quite a sweat heart .
Though it would be difficult for geet to accept Maan after what she had seen in Simla(Sam's chapter is closed for now ).. but lets see how this tremble of love survives between Maan & Geet!!

Superb FF yaar, 👏👏 claps for you⭐️


ty hun.. yep sammera…. lovely comments
xxxx

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