FF.manneet **TREMBLE of LOVE** part 25 pg70 - Page 47

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awww Oh dont end the update on such a sad note on Maan feeling hurt and leaving.

Please please please please pretty please update soon!
Pushpi
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Posted: 14 years ago
woooooooooow jst read all five parts
loved it do continue
it was awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updates.loved them.
finally sameera removed from maan's life.
who is anurag now?
anyway united maaneet soon.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
happy tht sameera is over.. but whoz this anu??? wasn rahul enough.. excited abt the next part.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear great part thanx to pm me
love u salina
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 23


Geet rushes out....... sorry sir... i really didn't mean that.....

Geet: (oy geet.... he is already upset enough.... now you just made him more upset....)

maan dosn't listen....

Geet: sir... sir...

Maan: hmm... what is it?

geet: i really...

before geet could say another word... she slips......

maan looks back with sudden silent..... no face.... "OK!" then he looks down.... geet flat on the floor...

maan: geet!

geet: ouch!

maan tries to help her.... but she fails to get up....

Maan: "Are you alright?"

geet nodes negatively..... "It hurts!"

maan picks her up on his arm....

Geet: please sir i can manage!

maan: you couldn't even get up properly... at least let me help!

geet embarrassed on his arm....

maan takes her to the living room...

Geet: umm.... i will be alright...

maan: hmm... ok!

maan was about to walk way...

Geet: sir....

maan: i thought you will ok!

geet: umm.... it hurts....

maan smiles... wait here!

after few minutes he comes back....

maan: where?

geet: its ok... i will do it...

maan hands her the cream....

it was geets back.... no clue how will she do it........ she straggles.......

maan watches her for a minute... straggling....

Maan: give it to me...

Geet: its alright... i will do it...

Maan snatches it..... "turn round!"

geet does.... she had a big bruse.... on the top side of her back..... luckly she was wearing a low cut top.... but the string was covering her back....... maan hesitated....

Geet also getting uncomfortable... Maan spowly pulls the string... Barley touching the string... Tickeling geets sense.... Bothe started to drink there sliva.... Maans hand was snacking.... Touching her.... Wasn't in his dictionary.... He suppose to stay way from her....
He gently touched her bare back... Shaking.... Tickiling geet....
She could feel the warmth of his hand.... Like it was soothing to her heart.... A weird feeling came in her... Unexplainable....
Every stroke of his hand on her soft skin....was bringing maan close to her.... They were standing Extreamly close.....
Geet could feel his warm breeze on her back from his mouth.... Soothing the pain..... She started to breath heart.... Some weird feeling started come in her... Like she was Loosing it.....

Bothe were confuse.... What was wrong with them.... Every touch..... Was physically weakening them....

Maan pulled way.... Before he went completely mad on her...
He ties the string back...

Maan: it's all done...
He leaves the place straight way... Before he outburst with feelings....

Geet: sir!
Maan stopes...: yes!
Geet: thanks!
Maan nodes.... About to walk way again....
Geet: sir!
Maan: yes!
Geet: umm.... I have cooked something for you...
Maan: hmm....
Geet: umm.... I don't know if will like it.... But dadi said... Italian was your favourite!
Maan looks at her... With a confusing face....
Geet: I have cooked extra!
Maan: I will try!
Geet smiles and walks in to the kitchen... Maan flows....

Geet serves... Maan eats....
Maan takes a spoonful of pasta and shoves it in his mouth.... Eating like a normal man.... Extreamly quick....
Geet: you can slow down.... You have plenty of time....
Maan: hmm.... Ok! .... He does slow down.... But puts double the amounts of food in his mouth....
Geet: umm.... Sir... Less!
Maan looks at her angrily....
Geet: khana atak jaigi!
Soon as geet mentioned about coking... Maan started to choke....
Geet rushed with some water...
Geet: ahem! Ahem!
Maan strayed to eat slow and with small spoonful....
Maan: happy!
Geet nodes... With a big smily face....
Maan finishes eating... And hurries off... Geet looks at him confusingly....

Maan just wanted to stay way from her... More he stays close to her.... Weaker he becomes.... which wasn't a good sign.... he always finds him self starring at her....


geet comes after him with more water.... he was still chewing on some pasta.....

Geet: sir.....

maan turns round...: yes!

geet: water... you need it!

maan: i am fine....

he starts to choke again.... maan gets angry and takes the water... hated how she was right all the time...

geet smiles.....


Next: busy day at the office... Anu gets angry with geet…..




updating fast as i could :D

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pls do analysin…. u lot giving me amazing idea… and wont pm again… will update few more… then pm togather :D

its easier… I have like 148 of u to pm… so pming togather sounds better lol

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!
awesome!
when she gets hurt n he applis d cream!
finally geet is feeling sumthing for him!
wooohooooo!
luved it!
n d cookin scene wz also nyc!
cute!
now hez trying to juz stay away from her!
n hope tat anu guy juz goes away again!
:P
update soooooooooooooon!

luv
Navpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
yay finally some feelings r surfacing... plzz do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
So finaly our tubelight geet started to feel somethng tats a good start, n i repeat again plz dnt take my prediction as an idea mujhe heart attack aajayega!
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Posted: 14 years ago
mama miyaaa pasta .................
geet cant you sense that maan is your love not any one else.....................

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