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Posted: 14 years ago
Amy.....you are an A-W-E-S-O-M-E writer!!!!!

i have been really busy with my studies,
so couldn't read and comment on your OS's,
just read SOULMATES1,2 and ANGEL OF MY LIFE....

SOULMATES HIM -
it was beautiful...you have so realistically described
arjun's feelings for rati..❤️👏

SOULMATES HER -
this was even more beautiful than the first one,
so real, simple and sweet....
loved the towel part...
" you make the world's best butter chicken "
awwwww.....cho cute....❤️👏

ANGEL OF MY LIFE -
it was lovely....you described their thoughts so wonderfully
and the lyrics of the song are really very romantic...
loved it....❤️

these one shots are so REALISTIC,
i want with all my heart that this is true...
hayeeeeee ArTi.....😍
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue the 3rd part of soulmates soon.....😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey friends😃
Hope you all are okay😃 A very ArTilicious VALENTINES DAY to you all😃

Thank you for all the comments you gave me...unfortunately i havent been able to reply to all of them..i have been having a very hectic schedule and this will continue now for quite a while.. But that's okay😃

Your comments mean A LOT to me so please do keep commenting or if not, at least press the LIKE button...just ONCE though😆

I know many of you are waiting for SOULMATES 3...i will write it as soon as i get time....I was supposed to post 2 OS's today....one being Debzy's bday gift and one being Vasu's vals request...but unfortunately i have been able to write only one so far....so instead i am posting something short which i had come up with to cheer a few friends up😃😃 for those who havent read it😃

Debzy---HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY, SWEETY🤗

Vasu----Your request will come up soon, huny😃😃

Meethi-----You write AWESOMELY and you write ArTi OS's better than me....seriously😃😃

Yamz---Please dont be late in commenting here this time

DSD---Will miss your comment, Come back soon please😃

All---Hope you like this OS...it was something i wrote in a hurry and half heartedly because I was angry and this was supposed to be a stress-buster...so i hope you like it as much as you liked the others😃
Also I have written out an FF...so if you are interested in reading it, do let me know so i can type it out and post it here in bits😃😃

Okay enough of lectures now...Enjoy😃😃

Wishing you a happy valentines once again and Hoping ArTi had an AWESOME valentines day TOGETHER😉😉

~JAB KOI BAAT BHIGHAR JAE~

Today an AMAZING thing happened to me...as i was calling my friend, there was a cross-connection and after some static, i decided to hang up when i heard a familiar voice so I decided to go ahead and listen😛

She: Hello
He: Hi baby
She: Is waqt phone kiya? Busy nahi ho kya?
He: Nahi, busy hoon but i couldnt concentrate on work
She: Kyun? Kya hua? I hope you are feeling okay
He: Arre i am fine, yaar...bas tumhe miss kar raha tha
She: Awww jaanu...i miss you too, lekin kaam toh karna parega na?
He: I know..isliye toh i called you to hear your voice so that i could get through the rest of the day
She: Acha? Itna miss kar rahe the mujhe?
He: Koi shak?
She: Nopes, not at all
He: Acha suno, i know we are meeting for dinner but could you please do me a favour?
She: Anything
He: Please sing something for me now so that i can get encouraged to go and continue with my work
She: Kya gaoon?
He: Kuch bhi...bas tumhari awaaz honi chahiye
She: Hmm acha thik hai...i know what to sing for you
He: (excitedly) go ahead
She: Jab koi baat bhigar jaaye, jab koi mushkil par jaaye, jab koi mushkil par jaaye, tum dena saath mera, oh hum nawaa....Na koi hai, na koi tha, zindagi mein tumhare siwa, tum dena saath mera, oh hum nawaa....
He: Goodness....your voice always calms me down in the best way possible...How do you have such an effect on me?
She: Because i love and you love me...Acha ab jao, kaam khatam kar ke aao....tonight i will give you a surprise...
He: Acha? Kya hai? (excitedly)
She: Ab batadoongi toh surprise kahan rahega?
He: Acha thik hai...I cant wait jaan
She: Me too...love you
He: Love you too, baby.

And then they hung up...guess whose conversation i overheard???😉

xxx

I sat down on a chair, tired and mentally exhausted, more than anything else. I was not in mood and was feeling crankier than usual today. I wondered what was causing me to be like this ' the heat or the long hours or something else entirely.

My new co-star came at that moment and sat down on the chair next to mine.

"So what are you thinking about so seriously?"

I just mustered up a smile and murmured, "Nothing. I am just tired."

"Oh, I see. But I am afraid I will have to disturb you for a while," she said.

Not again, I thought. I wanted to be left alone at that moment but I just smiled and asked her what she wanted me to do.

"Well, that you will just have to come with me to see," she said smiling widely.

There was a hint of mischief in her voice and I hoped my mood could bear whatever she was about to throw at me.

I got up and gestured her to lead the way. She led me to an almost deserted place behind the sets and told me to close my eyes.

I sighed and did as she said. There was silence and I wondered what was going on so I decided to peek.

A tiny peek confirmed that she was nowhere around so I opened my eyes and looked around. There was no one around. I was irritated now. What was going on?!

I was just about to walk away when I heard a familiar voice singing, "Jab koi baat bhighar jaaye, jab koi mushkil par jaaye, tum dena saath mera, oh hum nawaa."

I turned to see the source of that sound but could see no one around.

The beautiful voice continued singing, "Na koi hai, na koi tha, zindagi mein tumhare siwa, tum dena saath mera, oh hum nawaa."

I turned around once again and there she was. The lady with the most beautiful voice on Earth, according to me, of course. The one who had been singing the song, the love of my life, the lady without whom I felt incomplete, the lady who made me feel like the luckiest man in the Universe. I was stunned to see her. It was an unexpected surprise so for a moment, I felt like I was dreaming.

Rati walked towards me and placed her hand on my cheek. "You were missing me?"

I could do nothing more than nod.

She smiled and I felt my day get brighter. "Well, here I am then. Care to give me a hug?"

I pulled her into my arms immediately and hugged her tight and that was when I realized, she was really here. On the sets of my new show. I pulled back.

"What are you doing here?"

"Why? Can't I come to see you?" She asked, puzzled.

"No, you can. It's just that I was not expecting you to come over here. It is a very pleasant surprise," I said, not able to control my wide smile.

She smiled back and moved forward to peck me on my cheeks. "I love your dimples, Bijlani."

I laughed and hugged her again. It felt like I had the world in my arms.

"Okay, enough of hugging now. You have a shoot to complete, remember?" She said, pulling out of my arms.

My smile faded and I nodded. She noticed that. "Don't worry. I am going to stick around until you are done then we will go out somewhere, okay?"

My smile re-appeared. She held my arm and pulled me back to the sets.

I completed all my shots as soon as I could. Of course I was distracted very often and my director kept telling me to concentrate. I could not help looking at her. She was talking to everyone on the sets as if they were her old friends and her smile was very infectious because everyone around her was smiling their exhaustion away.

I messed up a scene or two when I had been looking at her and by mistake took her name when I was supposed to take my co-star's onscreen name. Everyone around had started laughing at me and my director had told me to do a re-take with a tongue-in-cheek "Happens to everyone".

The shots could not end soon enough for me and I almost jumped with glee when the director told me I could leave for the day. I literally ran to my green room and changed as fast as possible.

"Let's go," I said, eagerly.

"Wow! You changed so fast?" she said. "So eager to be with me, huh?" She teased me.

"You have a doubt? You don't know how much I have missed you," I said, a sad tone in my face.

"Quit complaining and show me those dimples, Bijlani," she said.

I smiled. "Thank you very much and now we can go." We said quick byes to everyone and I thanked my co-star for the favour and left.

A friend had dropped her on the sets so she did not have her car. Which was a great thing because she could ride with me.

She sat in the passenger seat and pulled down the window. As I drove, the wind blew her hair around and I could not stop looking at the mesmerizing sight. She was enjoying the wind and the smile on her face conveyed that. I itched to run my hands through that beautiful hair and I was just about to move my hand to touch her when, without looking at me, she said, "Arjun if you don't look at the road while driving, we are bound to get into an accident."

I quickly turned to look at the road but wondered how she could tell I was looking at her.

Home couldn't come soon enough. I was eager to sit with her and talk and spend quality time with her. I had been missing her a lot since I was mostly busy with my shoots and we were mostly in touch over the phone, which was not enough for me at all. So today I decided I would make the most of the time I was going to spend with her.

We arrived home and as soon as I opened the door, my puppy came running over to us. Rati picked it up and hugged it close. She went over to the sofa and started playing with it while I watched on, feeling slightly jealous. I was jealous of my puppy. I couldn't believe it.

"See, the puppy gets more love than I do also. This is not fair," I complained.

"Are you jealous, Bijlani?" Rati asked.

"Yes, I am. And what is with this Bijlani? I have a name of my own, you know?" I said, feeling cranky all of a sudden.

Rati put my puppy down and got up. She put her arms around my neck. I wanted to pull her close but I resisted. I was supposed to be angry at her for loving my puppy more.

"Why don't you go get a shower and freshen up then I promise, I will spend all my time with you," she said and winked at me.

"Okay," I said, pretending I did not feel like kissing her there and then and just shrugged before moving her arms away, which was the hardest thing I had done in a while, and walked off to my room.

xxx

I came out of the shower and dried my hair off before donning a white shirt and blue jeans. I went into the living room but did not see Rati there. Then I heard her voice coming from the kitchen. Whom was she talking to?

I stood silently in the doorway listening to her talking to my puppy. She was talking about me so I decided not to disturb her and eavesdrop for a while.

"So puppy, what do you love most about Arjun?" Rati asked.

The puppy just looked up at her and went back to eating the dog food she had poured for him in his bowl.

"You know what I love about him? He is so caring and he finds time for everyone. He makes a special place for everyone he loves in his heart and treats everyone he knows in such a way that they can't help but feel special. He gets so worried about small small things especially when it is to do with someone he loves. Like one day while shooting for MJHT, I twisted my ankle and you should have seen the fuss he made. He carried me to my green room and ordered for ice and ointment and made sure I did not do any more shots that day. He carried me to his car and dropped me home and then even carried me all the way to my room and left after making sure I had everything for the night and that I did not have to get up for anything. Can you believe the guy? And it was just a twisted ankle. I really love him a lot, you know. I never knew I would love someone this much. And everytime I feel I can't love him anymore, he would do something that would make me love him more. Today he was being so adorable. He could not take his eyes off me and kept messing with his shots, you know."

She laughed and I felt my heart beat faster. Her laugh was so beautiful and I felt I would never get over it. She could light up any sort of dark corner inside me when she laughed and repair any bad mood also.

I decided to let her know of my presence so I coughed a bit and went over to her. I put my arms around her and hugged her from the back.

"How long were you standing there?" She asked.

"Long enough to know how much you love me," I said and gave her a light peck on her cheek. "What are you doing?"

"Nothing much. Just dinner preparations," she said and continued making the salad she had been making.

"You ordered something from out?" I asked, wondering how she had arranged for dinner in such a short while.

She moved my arms away and turned to face me. "I made dinner for you, Mr. Arjun Bijlani. So please get seated in the living room, I will bring everything."

"You made dinner? When? How?"

"Before I came to meet you on the sets, I came over here, used my key, opened the house, prepared your fav dish and then locked up and came to meet you. Simple," she smiled.

"Butter chicken?"

She nodded and smiled.

"Wow! It has been ages since I tasted your hand-made butter chicken. I can't wait to have it," I said excitedly.

"Well it's as long as I haven't had your world's best coffee," she said.

"Hmm, okay let us make a deal. You feed me butter chicken and I will make you coffee later on. Agreed?"

She nodded, excitement showing on her face. I loved the fact that such small things made her so happy and I promised myself that I will never let any harm come to her. I will try my best and always keep her happy and smiling.

I bent and kissed her lightly on her lips before going into the living room.

She brought the food and we ate in one plate and fed each other, all the while talking and teasing each other like we always did.

When dinner was done, I made her coffee as promised and watched her relish every sip as much as I had relished the butter chicken she had made for me. The butter chicken she made was the world's best and I always told her no one could make it like she did, which of course she denied.

We talked some more before she said, "Arjun, I have to get going. And you should get some sleep. You have to go for shooting tomorrow."

She did not sound too happy about going and I was definitely not happy. I wished she could stay for longer and then an idea struck me.

"Rati, why don't you stay over tonight?" I asked.

"What?! Don't be crazy, Arjun!"

"Why not? I don't want you to go and I know you don't want to go either. I have missed you. Please stay back," I said, praying she would agree.

"I won't drop you back home at this time. I am too tired," I said as an excuse.

"Very funny. I know that is just an excuse to make me stay back," Rati said, smiling. "But since I have missed you also, I will stay back. But you have to drop me home before you go for shoot tomorrow, okay?"

I smiled widely and nodded.

We went to my room and talked about lots of things that we could not talk about over the phone and I teased her a lot just to see her smile and hear her laugh. I wondered what I would do without her in my life. I wished we had gotten a show together so I could spend time with her but I guess I had to wait for that particular day to happen.

After a while, we started dozing so she got up, freshened up and changed into one of my shirts and tracks and I changed into my vest and pjs. We cuddled up in each other's arms. It felt great holding her so close to me and even that for the whole night. It was getting harder to stay away from her now and I wanted to marry her as soon as possible. I made a note to talk to mum about going to see her parents. Now that would be a hell of a surprise for her, I thought and smiled. As I thought about how to plan things out, I realized Rati had fallen asleep already. I pulled her closer to me and placed a kiss on her forehead. She smiled in her sleep and putting both my arms around her, I closed my eyes, letting the sweet dreams take over.


Enjoy😃 Lotsa Love😃


Edited by AmyArTiMayUr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwww...amy..😍 😍

after practicing maths for 4 hours i just logged in and found out two beautiful OS..😲, urs and princess's..OMG..What a treat!..God really pays off hardwork!..😆

lovely, i loved the part where rati came to the sets and rest all was so pure and i loved rati talking to the puppy..that was the sweetest part!..loved it!..

and do u even have to ask abt the FF?..
Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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loved it and i loved rati's talk with the pup,everything was so cute😳😍
Edited by --Nida-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
O MY God
I have no words Just Speech Less
U Portray so beautifully Every Artian Wish
Hope this dream come true Soon
I just Love It
Thank U so much For Pm
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Fabulous OS Amy...OMG it was soooooooooooooo romantic hon!! aaahhh i was blushing, drooling and aww-ing at the same time...It cant get any better Amy..i loved the way you stared the crossconnection of phones and overhearing the conversation of ArTi...Awww man it was so amazing..😍 loved every bit of it and moreover was smiling throughout the OS....BEAUTIFUL! 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
res....just read it! It was superb!
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~JAB KOI BAAT BHIGHAR JAE

Omg! It was such a cute OS!!!

First of all, I love how you write from first person point of view…Like I said in the other FF thread, it really makes the story come out real. It is hard to write a story in 1st person because u have to tell the whole story with one person at a time...but u do a wonderful job with it!!!

Totally loved the phone convo…

Loved her surprise! And then him messing up his scenes coz he is distracted by her…aww…what a cutie!

"Arjun if you don't look at the road while driving, we are bound to get into an accident." –LOL! Can't blame the guy when there is a gorgeous lady sitting next to him.

"I was jealous of my puppy. I couldn't believe it." – I couldn't stop laughing at this part Amy!! I can just picture Arjun's expression. Rati telling him she'll make up for it after…so sweet!!

Rati talking to the puppy about why & how much she loves Arjun was so adorable…

The ArTi hug, dinner and moments later were so beautiful!! I didn't mention everything I wanted coz it would otherwise be longer than the os itself

"I pulled her closer to me and placed a kiss on her forehead. She smiled in her sleep and putting both my arms around her, I closed my eyes, letting the sweet dreams take over" – what a great way to end!! …I loved everything. I was in ArTi land while reading this and I didn't want to come out of it…Please do write more Os!!!

Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago
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amyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.....my jaanu...finally u posted an ArTi OS......iskeliye tereko ...ek jaadu ki jhappi....a bear tight huggggg 🤗 🤗 🤗

cross connection..... nautanki....dusron ki baat sunna achi baat nahi hain...😛 but if its ArTi....chal koi baat nahi..kabhi kabhi nautanki karni padthi hain.... 😉 😆😆

but what were thy talking😲 😲....goshh...amy did u listen to my heart too??? i was thanking and expecting some ArTi OS on arjun missing rati in sets and then some ArTi scenes .... but never expected this part from ya...awww....u made my day sweets!!! 🤗

she sang...wow i m missing her and her voice so much..... 😭 😭 i know her voice has a soothing effect on Mr.Bijlani as well as on us....😳 beautiful voice!!! 😍

dinner aur woh bhi sirf ArTi...amyyyy good good ...teri dimaag airways se bhi zyyada dhaud rahaan hain aaj kal..... m proud of YA!! 😉 🤣

when bhavna came and sat beside him...my nerves raised and i was like why bhavna in this 😡 yeh ladki( tu hi ) pagal toh nahi hogayi...(u know me naa...whithout reading everythingi come to conclusions and get worried 😕) but then after what she has done....for the first time ever i thot bhavna isnt that bad... 😆 🤣 OS se ek insaan ko judge kar rahin hu....kya zamaan aagaya!!! BY GOD!!!! 🤣

then the surprise.....awwwwwww 😍 😍 😍 when she said...care to give me a huggg?? i was like .... 🤪 🤪 🤪

PS...amy...tu naa ek dinn meri jaan pakka logi.....seriously !!!

the way u described his state while giving shots having rati around him.....hahahahahahahaha!!!! i felt it is happening in reality.....😳🤣 kisko pata....dono bada CHUPA RUSTUMS hain!!! 😉
the best part was ..he took rati's name instead of his co-star's charcter name..... 🤣 🤣 yeh toh sure shot reality main hua hoga...i m 200% confident!!! 🤣

dinner at arjun's place..... *coughs*

rati has a spare key for his house...ahem ahem!!! puppy ran to rati not to arjun...hahaha!!! how cute...and the way she was so busy with the puppy...and MrBijlani was jealous of his won cutteee chota sa puppy.... 😆😆

arjun in white shirt and blue jeans....THUDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD.....
😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 m dreaming......

PS...i told u...u are gonna kill me one day.....i ll write a note too that u are responsible for my death for being so merciless 😆 🤣

the convo between puppy and rati was toooooooo adorable...... when we hear something like this from our loved ones ....aww it feels so heavenly.... ❤️
(dont go to thoughts ...i m single..agar arjun/mayank jaisa ladka hain toh mujhe boldena.. 😉)

aww...world'best butter chicken and world's best coffeeee ....cutest at its best!!! 😃 ❤️

rati staying at his place the whole night and both dozing in each other's arms reminded me of mayur which are ofcourse ArTi... 😳 😳

missing ArTi man!!!!!!!! 😭 😭

an Awesome FAB OS amyyyyyy as always....

thanks for the pm.....
love ya loadsss and loadssss 🤗🤗
ur BIGGEST FAN!!! 😃
Edited by VasanthaArTi - 14 years ago
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ll edit asap amy.. havng xams frm 2mrw.. ll try to edit jaldi.. 😊

finally edited...and that too veryyy longgg....

first of all sry for the long post .... m back home yaar....i wasnt restricted to limited characters in a post as i m always because of my mobile(thats the reason i reserved 2 posts!!!)...so i m super duper excited for editing ur post thru my pc.....😃 😃

thanks for an awesome OS once again as valentine's gift...and yea i ll be waiting for my choice..... desparately waiting for it!!! but ya take ur own time....dont stress yourself....

love ya ......
vasuuuuuu!!!!! 😃



Edited by VasanthaArTi - 14 years ago
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Amyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy🤗
Love you.😳..............hayyeeee............kya OS hai.............ARTI ARTI PUKARE HUM PRANI

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