Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet season2 - Page 64

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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskan di.:)
1st of all a big hug from my side to u 4writting such fantastic FF..U may know dat but if dont let me tell u,u r a gem of a writer..U write so fantastically,I dont like to read FF's as dey bore me to d hell..but recently started reading 1 & fortunetly had read ur new 1 & den thought to read ur previous once..but i didnt know dat time dat it'd make me hook this much..
This FF is d best 1 out of 3..fantastically written..Not 1 part made me feel bore or ok..
I loved how Geet made herself strong,independent,love how Maan fall 4her..Der romance,argument,Passion,Liked how u used small -smallest issue @ d right time.Like How Geet stood 4 her Maan:)
How Maan mentioned 1st time when he saw her..These small details made d FF awesome..
Loved how u always maintain to show Geet-Krish bond so amazingly,Even Maan-Khushi.Maan-Krish small talks,laugh abt his mom & his life..

MG moments r really well written..Very passionale moment i've to say dat.I actually didnt know Romance can be this much of a pleasure to a marride couple lol*blush*
I liked all twists n truns..Though in b2in i felt bad 4Maan when geet used to get angry on him..
I truly enjoyed reading this FF..& now im waiting 4d next part so update soon :)

Lods of love
Piya.
Edited by piya2025 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Why are u updatin pyaar ka ehsaas muskaan hun!!!...
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Posted: 14 years ago


how r u dear



wat is this muskan wat u did in part 142


y only geet?
yaar ajj bata hi do k is itni loving story me hamesha geet k sath hi esa kyo hota he. y



hope k jald hi sub thek ho.



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Posted: 14 years ago


for part 143

last part me to acha shock diya tha but thanks k ALL IZ WELL .





really like morning romance.

geet - aap ko office nahi jana?
maan umm!!! nahi mujhe honeymoon karna hain



daadi held his ears..
daadi - chodho use
maan - pur daadi
daadi - pur wur kuch nahi
geet - mujhe neech uthareeya na..plz
maan half heartedly let her down, she goes to the breakfast table with daadi
maan frowns & goes to get ready

geet comes infront & starts kissing his bare chest licking the water
maan - yeh kya kar rahi ho (almost losing it to her touch)
geet - main woo
maan breathing harder...woo kya
geet - main honeymoon & her cheek turns pink

and a special thanks for this friends meeting



nakul - maam woo aapke friends aayee hain
geet wondered & went down
she was going down..& daadi shouted at maan...
daadi - wat is this maan?
maan - aab maine kya kiya?
daadi - why she running up & down the steps like this
maan lifts her & takes her down just in his shorts
pooja's jaws just droped open
smriti closed her eyes & looked away
geet gave a stirn look to maan & asking him to leave
kavya cleared her throat
kavya - hi geet & hugged her
maan rolled his eyes & left to the room
pooja - hi jiju
maan stood on top resting his hand on the railing
maan - hi arohi !! how was ur date with that sado?
geet turned asking him to get in now with her eyes
smriti - so bhabhi ji how are u?
geet hugged her & said sorry yaar
they gave her the big teddy & flowers they brought for her
geet - wow this teddy is so cute


geet wondered maan ne kha ha tha?

daadi - u all are soon becoming masi's again
pooja - yaar to pregnant hain ..yeh kab huwa?
smriti - congrats & kavya fed her a sweet & said love u

suddenly all of them become extra carefull with every moment of geet
smriti - yeh teddy mujhe de..it may be heavy
kavya - yaar to bait na
pooja touches her stomach - yaar teera peet deehk kar laagh tha to nahi hain
NT - abhi sirf 2 1/2 months huwa hain na..it will show only after 4-5months
pooja kisses the stomach & says hai I am pooja masi...nahi u can call me poo
they make geet sit on the sofa & all of them sit around her kneeling
kissing her stomach & taking turns in talking to khushi
geet looked up at maan who stood their crossing his hand over his chest & admiring
her happiness offcourse after changing!!!
smriti - so wat do u want baby girl or baby boy
maan - I am sure it is a baby girl walking down the steps
pooja - we already have a jr jiju, we need a nani pari now
maan - bhikul aapne mama ki tarah!!!
all of them hug geet from stomach
kavya - when is karthik coming
smriti - krishna stupid!!!
kavya - Yah sorry!!!
smriti - will he be there for the wedding?
geet - yah yah he will be definitly there for the wedding
maan left to the study
geet - main abhi aathi hoon
NT - kuch chahiya tumhe
geet - NT can u be with them I will just come
geet takes maan's breakfast & goes to the study
maan - why did u bother, u could have asked nakul to get it
geet - phir dessert !!
maan pulled her into his lap & kissed her
geet - thanxs
maan - tum khush hona!!
geet - umm

all of them discuss about wat to wear for smriti's wedding
pooja - I have seen a nice lehengha in the mall
we will check that when we visit the mall latter
geet gets restless, smriti pinches pooja
kavya - aacha geet wat are u planning to wear
geet - main woo she fumbels
pooja - geet yaar arjun wedding main aayeega ka kya?
geet still looked scared dont worry geet ab sub acha hi ho ga. he na muskan


once again






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Posted: 14 years ago
update

maan u r tooo good .really like the way he diverts geet's attention for tat incident.

maan shouts from his study GEET!! GEET!!
geet - ji
she walked in to the study restlessly
maan - are u taking care of the IT project too
geet - ji
wondering wat happened
maan - when is the next meeting scheduled?
geet - I think next week
maan - where is the initial write up
geet - aap itna gussa kyun ho rahe ho?
maan - my whole take over depends on the media plan that u guys will provide
geet - yah I know that
maan - but still u guys have not yet send the write up!!
geet - lekin!!
maan - kya lekin
geet - Mr. Khurana aaj Sunday hain..& i don't work on sundays
I will answere ur questions on Monday snaps & turns to leave
maan pulls her back ..but Mrs Khurana u can answere ur hubby
geet - only hubby wala questions..looking lost into his eyes


daadi - hain beta, please tum behtjavoo
maan pulls her to sit next to him
pooja noticed that & giggled..geet was feeling so embaressed

maan - challoo challoo finish every thing..be a good girl
she stamped maan..he cried out oouch!!
daadi - kya huwa
geet - mirchi laaghi hogi
maan nodded his head..pooja giggled again


pooja caressed geets leg slowly..geet looked at maan
pooja caresed it again..geet looked at maan he was busy having his lunch
pooja did it yet again..geet stamped maans foot harder..maan jumped up literaly
pooja sat down holding her stomach..laughing loud
geet felt guilty & looked at maan & held one ear...

while having the dessert geet looked at maan
maan still looked away..she slipped in next to him in the couch
and wispered - my dessert is not sweet enough
maan got up at once & went to the kitchen got some sugar in a bowl
maan - yeh loo
every one looked shocked
maan - she said the dessert is not sweet enough so I got her some sugar
daadi - tum bhi na maan!!!



waooooo aik aur surprize.

thank u

they all reached the mall geet held on to maan as they walked in
she looked really scared & stressed
Arjun, ranbhir & Ajay joined them
all of them was suprised & thanxed Maan
geet smiled looking at maan..that was really so sweet
Arjun - hellow Mr.Khurana
Maan - call me maan
arjun - umm!!
arjun & arohi looked really shy..
maan wispered to arohi - now u can start from where u left that day & winked
arohi - thanxs jiju
ranbhir - wow bro that was really a great plan!!!
shaadi ke liya bus 1 week haina..so ghar main ...they won't let us meet
this was a great plan
Ajay - we spoke over the phone Mr. Khuaran...I am Ajay
thanxs its really nice catching up with u all
they all move to the food court maan put his hand around geet holding her closer
geet sat with maan, kavya with ajay, smriti with ranbhir & arohi/pooja with arjun
kavya & smriti introduced themself to arjun
kavya - hi arjun, I am kavya poojas friend
arjun confused with pooja
geet - arohi is her screen name
arjun - umm!
smriti - so ur poo's dreamy!!!
arjun blushed
arohi - aise kuch nahi hain..we are just friends
all of them laughed loud



maan - us janaab ko to deehkoo..points at younger boy teenager may be
geet - kis ko
maan - that blue t-shirt
geet - woo
maan - I am sure he is come for a date here aapna school bunk karke
geet - how can u say school bunk karke..he is not even carrying any school bag
maan - look at his shoes..
geet - oh no!!!
then girl comes along & catches up with that boy
maan - geet uski girl friend aagayee
geet - mr.khurana not bad!! maan gayee aap ko for such a lovly update


waiting for next
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskan i just read all da parts now they were too good. u seem to be pretty fast on updating i really love this ff finally reaqd the last part is it ight if u send me pm whenever u update dont want to miss anything
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Posted: 14 years ago
😛 hi dear... m back again.missed u a lot..hop u r f9 n dong well..
bt i am really feeling excited to read ur FFs.....lovely update..nice to see them all together again😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
pleasee update soon! we need krish back & the wedding to happen sooon! ;) we need some bhabhi&devaar scenes! ;D
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏really muskan u done a fabulous job. awesome....................update dear..plz cont soon.😃
Edited by shimontini - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 144
nice update...
just loved it....
update soon......

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