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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
awwwwwww...tat wz really sweet
maan will make geet to fall in love wid him :D
can't wait for tat
n priya n geet.......how sweet.......both dun hav parents....so now they r together....
tatz soo nyc
n wt happened to geet?!
update soon

luv
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
nice update.. luved priya n geet bonding.. priya is really sweet... do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
thx 4 the pm.luved the update n moreover luved priya.so sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
I m LOVING priya & geet & maan! <33 hayee! she got maan&geet as parents. soo sweet.
I LOVE LOVE YOUR FF! add me to your pm list! ;)
please update soon. we all are waiting!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

hmmm...priya n geet r shoo cute 😛...i liked the fact that geet offered 2 b maans friend...n his nakhra ufff haha...loved the update xxx

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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
hiiii
awesome update
loved it
priya is soooo sweeeet
love her
loved the ice cream scene
cute little family
what happened 2 geet
cant wait 2 find out
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Thats Awesome Dear....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏......
Loved it sooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved the way Geet expressed her Feelings to Daadi....😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭......
wow Geet asked Priys to treat her as her Mother..❤️❤️❤️.....Thats really Sweet.❤️❤️❤️.....
Loved it sooooooooooooooooo much when Geet shared her Sorrow with Maan.........
wow so Maaneet are Friends now.......
Loved the Geet-Priya annoyed Maan..😆😆😆😆......
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Sooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
veri nice update and thanks for the pm... plz update soon and do send me pm weneva u update thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Hey so sorry for the late update:(
Ziada naraz na hona plzz here you go guys!!
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Never again.
Geet opened her eyes,after what felt like ages.She was suddenly hit by a nausea feeling,trying to adjust her eyes to the light she looked around.It was then did she notice that she was in a hospital.The question was why?Turning to look at the time,it was around 1pm,which meant that everyone must have been at work still but she was wrong.As she looked at the far end of the room,there were two people lying on the chair.Maan and priya,she suddenly felt her heart skip a beat.Priya was her daughter now,she loved the ond she shared with Maan.Maybe one of the truest that she has seen so far.Not wanting to disturb them she pressed the help button behind her bed calling for a nurse(we have em here in canada.I haven't been to india!So plz forgive me)

"Aap uth gayen,chalein abh toh Khurana ghar main kushi ho gi,itne dino baad koi toh hase ga."

"Mu-jhe kiy-a hua tha?"Geet said glancing at the young nurse.

"Apko kisi ne poison kiya tha!Aur pir aap gir gayen jise aapke saar pai bohot gehri chote aye.Aapne toh dara hi diya tha humain.Aur apki beti toh roo roo ker pagal hogai.Apke pati bhi uljhe hue se the.Kuch raath toh woh khud bhi roothe the.Apki naani or unke 2 bete bohot sad the.App ke ghar main bohot se loog apse pyar kertain hain."

"oh woh mere pati nai,mere hone walein hain!"

"Oh sorry,well aap rest kerein doctor a ker check ker lein.Toh aaj aapko ghar bejh dein ge."

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"Mama!Mama!Aap theek ho na,apko meri waja se chote lagi na..Agar main zid na kerti woh ice cream khane ki aur swings pai jaane ki toh aap theek hotii"Priya said while trying to get up on the bed in her mothers arms.

"nai mama ki princess ase nai roothi.Beta aapki mama ka saya hamesha aper rahe ga!Na roo.Ma-an aap priya ko mere paas bethda do.Mere se reach nai horahi."

"Geet,humain chor ke jaane ke iraade the,pagali.Wasaiy samjh nai lag rahi,sirf tumhari cone kyon poisonous thi!Lagta hai someone is after you."

"Mama,aap promise karo mujhe chor ke nai jaogi ase.Kabhi bhi Nahi."

"Nai,promise...Hamesha apke paas rahoungi"

"Mama mujhe neend arai hai,main apki godh main soo jaon?"

"Priya apki mama abhi bemaar hain.Woh thak jayen gi."

"Nai,nai Maan it is okay chalo main priya ko sula dongi.Aap itni dair ghar ja ke fresh ho jayen."

"Haan,bus vicky,dev or dadi ajayen ...Pir chala jaonga.Abhi maine private investigator ko phone kerna hai..."

"Kyon?"

"Mujhe kuch theek nai lag rah.Ase sirf tumhari cone main Poison hona!Yeh kuch ajeeb nai lag raha?"

"Dimag ko itna na chaliyen...Jayen aur fresh ho ke ayen.Main thori dheir priya ke saath akela rehna chahti hoon."

As Maan went home,he had totally forgotten to tell everyone that geet had woken up.So when Dadi and her two other grandsons walked in,they were met with the most beautiful scene infront of them.Geet had priya in her lap with a light blanket covering her.She was slowly running her fingers through Priya's hair in attempt to tie it in a nice braid.Priya had clutched on to geet's kameez and was slightly sighing in satisfaction.Being lost in her own world,geet forgot that Dadi would be here soon,but dadi did not want to break the moment between the two girls.She was glad that priya would have such a strong person as her mother."Dadi,maine priya ko kabhi itna kush nai dekha,aur kuch dino toh yeh bohot dafa nightmares se uthi hai.Dadi she is perfect for our family.Magar humain kuch kerna pare ga.Mujhe ajeeb feeling ho rahi hai.Koi kuch ker na ."Vicky the family's joker said seriously,but it was the truth.Dadi knew that she had to tell geet about why her parents commited sucide.

"Bhabi..I mean geet aap ko humain tang kerne ka shook hai"Dev said walking up to geet and messing her hair up.

"Haan geet,Eik din khana kiya bana diya...Sheesh ab toh kisi aur ke haath ka khana nai kaya jata"VIcky said pouting at Geet.

"Aap dono ko toh baghwan hi bachaye,hatiye main apni beti se gale to mil loon."Dadi said pushing the two aside and hugging Geet.

"I'm sorry,maine aap logon ko pereshan kiya!"

"Nai,hum apko kona nai chahte geet."Dadi said with tears

"Dadi patha nai duniya kon sa khel,khel rahi hai!"

"Acha dii,aap yeh bataye.Humne apki surile awaaz nai sunii..Kab suna rahi hain?"Vicky asked

"Bus mujhe idher se free hone do toh gana bhi suna dein geh."

"Mama"

"ji"

"Mujhe Maan bhai ke paas jana hai"

"abhi atein hain toh aapko le lein ge acha..Aap thora aur sona chaho gi"

"Nai...."

"Ok....kiya hua aap itni sad kyon ho jaanu."

"Mama dar lagta hai"

"Kyon"

"Aapko kuch hogaya toh"

"Beta kuch nai hoga"

"okay"

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Maan had been on the phone with the private investigator for an hour now.It was now confirmed that someone was trying to poison geet,but who could it possibly be?The private investigator had raised another question.Mr and Mrs Handa's death,was it a suicide or was it a way to save geet.

"Mr Khurana I hope you understand that you cant leave geet alone,if the situation gets out of hand.You can lose her.You need to keep this between us while I find out about her family.Do not worry,you hired the best."

"Hopefully,Mr Malhotra I will ask my grandmother if she knows anything.Untill then please do not rest till you find him or her.No one can hurt geet and get away with it like that."

Maan said goodbye to the inspector and threw his phone on the bed in frustration,he was tired.All he wanted was some sleep,but he could not rest untill this case was over and geet was saved.Looking at the clock he saw that it was evening now.Grabbing his keys and phone he headed to the hospital.

"Morning Mr Khurana,I was just going to check up on Ms geet."

"How is she?"

"Oh she is fine!Her head injury was deep,but now that she is awake.There should be no problem."

Maan and the doctor walked in to the room,and discovered everyone chatting to each other.Maan looked at Priya who looked like she was asking Geet something,and it looked like Geet was in a heated conversation with vicky.When he listened to their conversation both the doctor and Maan supressed a laugh.

"Oye Mere srk ko kuch na kahoo"

"Tum amir khan ko kuch na kaho"

Beta aap dono shant ho jayen."Dadi pitched in.

"Nai Mere srk ko kuch kahe aur main chup rahoon."

"Bhabi aap Amir khan ko stupid keh rahi ho"

"Haan toh stupid hai toh keh rahen hoon"

"Dadiiii aap dekhein na yeh mere idol ko stupid keh rahi hai,"

"Haan aur tumne srk ki movie ko bakwaas kaha!Amir khan ki koi movie achi nai!"

"Tare zameen per,aur Ghajni!"

"DDLG,tumhare amir khan ki yeh do movie ne itna nai kamaya hoga.Jitna DDLG ne kamaya hoga."

"Typical love story"

"Haan toh ghajni jaise bohot special story thi!Atleast srk ki memory 15 min se ziada kaam kerti hai!"

"HAHAHA,Vicky she got you!"Dev said

"Nana booo booo"Geet said while sticking her tongue out at vicky

"Hmmph,dont talk to me bhabi"

"tum baachoon ki tarah kyon act ker rahe ho"

"Maan bhai!"Priya said jumping on the bed."Breaking the fight.

"arre priya jaan,jump na karo apki mama ki tabiyat krab hai"

"Sorry mama,mama dekho bhai agaye"

"Its okay,Maan she was asking for you!"Geet replied

"Oye meri princess kiya hua"Maan said picking up Priya.

"Maan bhai *hiccup* aap meri mama ko kuch hone toh nai doh ge na?"Priya said soaking Maan's shirt with her tears.

"Priya brave girl hai,aur nai main kuch nai hone doonga"Maan said not being able to see her cry.

"Idher aao beta dadi ke paas"Savtri devi said to priya.

"Aap mama ka kyal rakho,aur bus pray karo"

"*sniff* okay"

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"Acha geet,hum chaltein hain,aap discharge ho ker Maan ke saath ajaye ga.Hum aapke liye maze maze ke khane pakwa the hain cook se!"

"Haye Dadi,kahen ushme bhi koi poison na dalde,ise dafa toh main paka maar jaon gi"

"GEET"All the Khurana's said at the same time.

"Geet bande ki shakl nai achi ho toh baath toh achi kerni chaaiye"Vicky said not liking her words,and forgetting their childish fight.

"Oh ab main ugly hogayi,hmpph."

"Dadi aap loog jaen main iske hard head main thora si akal dal doong ga."Maan said

As the three Khurana's left,Maan slowly diverted his attention to geet.Her words about dieing had cut through like a knife.She had no idea how much they cared for her,and how much she meant to them.He slowly made his way towards geet,his anger was starting to take over.He pulled a chair beside geet bed,who had just come from the washroom wearing a ocean blue salwar kameez.She was trying to put her flip-flops on,but failed.Without hesitation maan pulled the sandal out of her hands with great force and pulled one of her leg on to his lap and gently slipped the sandal on.Repeating his actions for the other foot,Maan pushed both her feet away gently.He looked at Geet,who had her eyes closed.Geet could not figure out what was happening to her.When ever Maan was around she felt so calm and relaxed.Pushing her feelings away,she looked at Maan who was glaring at her.

"Kiya hua Maan?Ase kyon dekh rahe ho?"

"Toh kaisen dekhoon,HAAN!Batao..Tumhe toh maarne ki pari hui hai"Maan said walking to the window.

"Are main mazaq ker rahi thi"Geet said trying to make her way to him as fast as she could.

"Tumne asi baath kyon ki"Maan said

"yaar asi hi!Acha baba Im sorry"Geet said holding her ears.

"Geet asa kabhi na soochna.TUm apne best friend ko ase chor ke nai jaogi.Tum laro gi.Mere liye."

"Acha na,ab chalo."

"Chalo,aur pir asi baath kabhi bhi na kare na!"

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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

I LOVEEEE Priyaa & Geet bondingg! <333 omg omg! they are soo like mother&daughter bond! I LOVE IT! we need more scenes with priya&geet..

LOVE how all the khuranas were looking at geet&priyaa from far..
OMG! I LOVE VICKY's & Geet fight over AAMIR & SRK! haahh! omgg! I LOVE IT! Maan is soo worried for geet! ;( pooor himm! WE NEED SOME geet&priya&maan scenessss.
Maan cares soo much for geet...wonderr who poisoned geet..
Can't wait till she is back homeee!
&& We need some bhabhi(Geet) & devaar(Vicky) scenes..and maan getting all angrryyyyy!!
We need some intense scenes! ;)) CANT WAIT!
&& I LOVE the first scene where maan&priyaa weree sittingg & waitin for geet to wake up! aww! father&daughter waiting for their mom! AWW!
Geet&Maan should marry sooon! lols..

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