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awesome update
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he is trying 2 change geet
love geet and priya's bond
cant wait 4 the engangment
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like it....plzz continue

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Aww thank you thank you thank you everyone....
So before I do go on,my ff is dedicated to all those ppl who are not happy or in other words depressed.I know what its like because i have been a victim and still am.Taking anti depressants does not heal ur pain...Only time does....Just know that there is someone out there,waiting for you to ask them for help....
My story on Maan and geet is based on the fundamentals of trust,hope and love.....So here it is guys:)
Disclaimer I never owned the geet cast or show..i only own priya and the plot:)
plus i was in a hurry so i could not edit sowwie:(
Mujhse dosti Kargo gi?

"Dadi I respect you a lot,aur jo aap keh rahen hain ushe mere liye apke liye aur izhat baar gayi hai.Magar dadi aap mere nazarye se soochein.Ammi aur abbu ko thore din hue hain guzre hue.Main ase nai unki maut ka jashan bana sakhti.Dadi mere liye abhi khud ko samait na bohot zaroori hai.Main ase maan ko tie down nai ker sakhti,especially ase bandan main,jisme main fully commited nai hoon.Maan ke liye aap kisi aur ko donde,main abhi shaadi nai kerna chati.Aur yeh hi saach hai.Main kisi ase insaan ke saath nai reh sakhti jiske liye mere liye itni respect or trust ho,kyon ke agar mere se koi galti ho gi toh mujhe zindagi baar baghwan nai maaf kere ga.Isliye,sirf isliye aaj main proffesional help ke liye ja rahen hoon.Isliye main aaj akele jana chati ho,thaake agar main badal sakoon toh woh pschyologist mujhe help kere.Please dadi mujhe mere haal per kyon koi nai chorta tha.Main,mera daam ghuta tha hai itne pyar se.Bataon kyon because mama baba ki tarah aap ki family ko kuch hogaya toh main kabhi bhi nai chain se jee payon gi." Geet said looking down at her plate,trying not to look at dadi.

Everyone at the table watched geet with saddness,vicky and Dev knew about her parent commiting sucide but Maan did not.He was confused as to why she would say such a thing,he had no idea what had happen to her parents and he never dared to bring the subject up infront of Dadi.Dadi has always been surrounded by men,but a young women's heart was something she always wanted to experience.She never had a daughter,but when Her bahu,her son's wife came into her life she was estatic.They lived a happy life until a fatal car accident took the life of Mr and Mrs Khurana,Maan was 10 at the time.She watched Maan,become passive but as years went by Maan had took responsibility of the company in Mumbai.Dev was the eldest,after getting a divorce from his college sweetheart,he had moved too Canada.Vicky was the youngest,being only 6 at the monet of his parents death he never really understood anything.Maan was the total opposite of both the brothers,while Dev and Vicky struggled with the death of their parents Maan bottled up his feeling and acted like the father.Although dev was the eldest,he always was more mature.After many years vicky followed Dev to Canada,where he later did his studies.Dev expanded the family's bussiness,and Maan handled everything in India.

Savtri Devi had tears in her eyes,she knew from the start geet was not happy with marrying Maan.At least not at the moment.She knew that geet was trying her best to make herself happy,but Savtri Devi could see it was not working.The tension at the dining table was thin as ice,and someone was going to either shout or break down any minute.Although nothing Happened,Dadi watched geet divert her attention to Priya.Priya also noticed the atmosphere changed,and when she saw geet in tears she started crying too.

"Are meri sweety ko kiya hua"Geet asked picking up priya and hugging her.

"Geetu apke bhi ammi abbu chale gaye na.Geetu mere bhi nai hain ammi abbu.Sab bachon ke hain sirf mere nai.Main bhi apki tarah kiya hoongi,asi sad si."Priya said with teary eyes.

"Aare nai toh sweety,apke paas to itni ammi abbu hain.Chalo aaj se aap meri chote si beti. theek hai?"Geet said to priya who looked at her with a smile.

"Really!Aap meri mama bano gi,aap mujhe kabhi nai chor ke jaogi na.Main apko mama keh sakhti hoon?" Priya said

"hmmmm ofcourse,main apko mama ki princess keh sakhti hoon"

"haan jii bilkul mama,ab main bhi mothers day per apko gift deh sakhti hoon."Priya said thinking about what ot give her

"Hmmmmmm acha!Oh i love presents mama ki princess!"Geet said forgetting about the tears and pain.

"Mee tooooo"priya said

The four Khurana's watched the exchange between the two,and realized that priya really was happy to have geet being her mother.Anyone's heart would shatter watching the scene ahead of them.Geet had found priya,and priya had found Geet.Priya had found her mother,and it was evident geet was happy to be her mother.Savtri Devi still had not said a word to geet,because she did not have words.She knew that tying her down like that was not right,and she knew that geet wanted to find herself first.

"Okay beta,mujhe bilkul patha nai tha ke aab itne ulge hue ho.Maan bohot acha hai,woh khayal rakhe ga.Aap ko jitna waaqt chaiye aap le lo.Wasaiy bhi ab toh ap hameri priya ki mama bhi ho!Aur agar aapko koi aur pasand aye toh humain batna!"Dadi said before getting up and hugging geet.

"thank you dadi"Geet said happily

"Acha toh aap driver ko le jao!"

"theek hai dadi"Geet said before touching her feet and looking at Priya.

"mama maine bhi jana hai saath pleaseeeeeee" Priya said not wanting to lose geet.

"Beta main abhi gayi aur abhi ayi"Geet said bendng down to move priya's hair out of her face.

"Per maaaaaa" Priya said not noticing the effect her words had on everyone.

"Mama ki princess,dadi ko nai tang kere gi okay.Main shaam ko ayoongi,toh aap mujhe apna fav park dikhana"Geet said kissing her.

"ohhh YEAAaaaaH..sachi!..."

'muchi" geet repied before getting up and leaving

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"Suniye,driver aap idher mujhe le jayen.Ishe address per."Geet said before turning to see someone enter the car"

"Driver,tum pehle mere office chalo."Maan said not looking at geet.

"tum"

"main"

"Kyon"

"kyonki"

"Sahi tarha batao Maan"

"Suno geet,main tumhare saath ja raha hoon.Priya ki mama ka kyal rakhne,no apni hone wali ka kayal rakhne"

"Abhi toh hum kuch nai hain"

"Chup,bikul chup!"

"Saddooo"

"Chipkali"

"kya"

hehe just jokking"

"hmmph"

"geet main tumhain asi halat main kahen nai chor ke ja raha,so you might as well call it truce."

"kyon"

"Because geet,mujhe jana hain ke tumhe itni dukhi kyo ho"

"Sune ki himmat hai"

"ofcourse Maan Singh khu--"

"Oh please do not start"

Geet started to tell Maan about her parents,how they met and how everything changed in a few years.Maan listened quietly.Feeling her pain,from each and every memory she described.Silently when geet finished,he looked at her and clutched her hand afraid he might lose her.He was afraid that she would leave him.Maan was secretly falling for her,and he could not let her hurt.Looking at geet,he brought his hands to gently brush her tears away."geet tumhare ansoon bohot eham hain.Tumain strong hona parega."Maan said before he was met with the heat of her body.Geet was hugging him,at first he was suprised but then he slowly caressed her hair.

"toh pir mujhe nafrat hogayi pyar se,aur aaj...aaj main kisi ki bhi nai ho sakhti!"Before quickyl pulling away from Maan,not knowing what possesed her to hug him like that.

"Nai tum hogi kisi ki,tum meri hogi!Main tumhare dil main pyar ke woh ehsaas ko jagoon ga.'

"Uh-h"

"oh eik second dekho hum office agayen hain,main eik file le aaon.."

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While waiting geet was in a big dilemma,why did she hug maan like that?It had just complicated things for her.She could not get rid of the feeling in her heart.She never opened up to anyone,so why was his presence having such a effect on her?Closing her eyes,geet quietly thought about what would happen if she agrred to the engagement.Maan was a sweet guy,and it made her feel guilty that he waited for her alll his life.

"chalo"

"sab ji radio on kerdoon?"

"haan bikul"

Tujhse naraaz nahin zindagi hairaan hoon main
Tere masoom sawaalon se pareshaan hoon main


Geet start to cry,but since she was looking out Maan had no idea.She thought about her parents,and how she missed them so much.She thought about her life before their death,but wasn't she the one who wanted to start over.


jeene ke liye socha hi nahin, dard sambhaalne honge
muskuraayen to, muskuraane ke karz utaarne honge
muskuraaooN kabhi to lagtaa hai
jaise honTon pe karz rakhhaa hai


Wiping her tears away,geet listened to the words.For some reason the song gave her a reason to be strong.So many peopel get hurt in this world,yet most of them move on.She needed to put her past behind her and move on!


aaj agar bhar aai hain, boondein baras jaayengii
kal kyaa pataa inke liye aankhen taras jaayengii
jaane kab ghum hua kahaan khoya
ek aansoo chhupaake rakhaa thaa

From the corner of her eye,she looked at maan,a person who was going to dedicate his life to her.Someone who wanted to make her smile.She could not lose him,and maybe that's why she stayed away from him.Resting her head on the seat,she slightly turned to look out out the window.With tears wanting to escape her eyes,she took a deep breath and watched the people on the street.



zindagi tere gham ne hamein rishte naye samjhaaye
mile jo hamein dhoop mein mile chhaon ke thanDe saaye..

Her eyes caught a young couple,with a girl who looked to be 3 or 4 years old.Her parents were both playing tag with her,she was so happy.This reminded geet of her time with her parents and the way dad would twirl her around in circles.

"Geet,hum agayen hain" Maan said pulling her out of her trance.

"hmm,han chaliiye"

"Geet,tumain yeh kerne ki zaroorat nai hai.Main tumhe ase hi accept ker loon ga.Tum yeh sab mere liye kar rahi ho.Magar geet aaj tumne itne dino ke baad apne mama or paa ke bare main baath ki.Geet agar tumhe lagta hai ke tumhare ateet ki waja se main tumhe chor doon ga,toh tum galat ho.Meri bachon ki maa,eik asi larki honi chaiye jo bohot mazboot ho dil se.Aur dekho aaj tumhare bare-pann ki waja se,priya kitni kush hai.Aur mujhe patha hai ke tumhe bhi kush ho.Toh ishe kushi ko labon per lao."

"Dar lagta hai"

"Apne aap se ya duniya se"

"Dono se"

"kyon"

"Maan,meri waja se tumhe kuch hua toh?"

"Kuch nai hoga"

"kaise patha"

"kyoki agar tum mujhe ijazat do gi,toh main tumhe kuch nai hone donga.Tumhari raha pai dat ke kara rahoon ga,tumhare dil ka marham ban ke."

"Maan...."

"hmmm"

"mujhse dosti karoge"

"ummmm"

"batao na"

"sochna parega,tumhare se dosti ker keh,babysitting toh nai kerni pare gi?!

"Babysitting?"

"haan na,tum eik maa ho ab"

"haw,acha!Priya ko phone kerti hoon abhi,woh toh tumhari behn hai...usko toh ker sakthe ho na babysit:P."

"anyways maan sooche ke bata deina"geet said while walking to the office and cancelling her appointment.

"Geet"

"Hmm"

"Sooch liya"

"kiya"

"Dosti ka"

"hmmmm"

"what do you say,best friends?"Maan said extending his hand for her to accept it.

"pake!Thank you Maan"Geet said taking it.

"wasaiy bhi,hum dono bffl ke rishte se shaadi ker sakhtein hain.Aur patha hai kiya humhara rishta sabse strong hoga!"

"Mujhe satoge toh nai?"

"ofcourse qiyamat tak"

"Maaan" Geet said swatting him on his arm.

"acha toh main apko bata doon,priya ka fav park idher se 2 hours away hai."

"haye,itna door"

"Jo waada kiya woh nibana parega!" Maan sang,taunting her.

"acha,acha ziada na hero bano."

"haha"

"Maan mere saath park chalo ge"

"do katernak larkiyon ke saath,hmmmmm."

"okay main tumhe ice cream dilaongi"

"pakka wada?"

"bilkul"

Few hours Later at the Park.

"priyaaaaaaa,chalo udher swings pai chaltein hain."Geet looked at priya,who felt uncomfortable because she did not know anyone at the park.

"Maaaaaannn bhaia kahan hain?"

"hmmph woh ghari main bethe hue zid ker rahen hain."

"Woh kyon mama?"

"Asal main beta,unko thori si jealousy ho rahi hai ke aap mere se ziada khel rahi ho.Aur unko gusa chara hua hai ke maine unhe ice cream nai kelai."

"Ice cream,mama mujhe patha hai yahan per eik stand hai udher se letein hain.Mujhe guse main bhai nai ache lagte."

"acha chalo pir hum jaldi se letein hain."

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Jhoote nai bholnaaaaaa.....

Maan was sulking in the car,he could not believe geet had tricked him in to comming to the park,and on the way she only paid attention to priya.As he shifted a bit in the seat he saw geet and priya holding ice cream and laughing.

Knock!Knock!

"bhaia aap guse main ache nai lagte,apko patha hai geet mama ne aapke liye ice cream li!"

"Acha priya,aap ko yaad agayi meri!"

"oho,aap ko toh main nai bhool sakhti naa.Eik din eik chote se ghar main.Main aap or geet mama rahen gi!Toh hum khoob khelein ge.Abhi toh mama sad hain na,isliye main unko ziada attention the rahei hoon."

"Priya apne age ki batein kiya karo."Maan watched as priya pouted.She sounded like geet.

"are maan,woh tumhare liye ice cream lai hai,khaa lo"

"Nai"

"acha aao priya hum idher beht ke ice cream khaa thein hain"

Maan watched as priya sat on geet's lap and and kept her head on her chest and licked her ice cream.It was a breath taking moment.He watched as geet smiled at priya and wishpered something in to her ear."hmmm priya itni achi ice cream"Priya and geet were trying to make up with maan for ignoring him.After a few minutes Maan gave up and looked at priya who was holding on to his ice cream.

"priya woh ice cream melt ho rahi hai main khaa leta hoon."

"LOl dekha priya kiya kha tha miane."

"tum chup raho main guse main hoon"

"Mama,yeh jhoot bool rahe hain"

"yeh jab zaida woh woh kertein hain na,toh hamesha kush hotain hain"

"priya,beta thank you for telling me."

"Mama abh chalo,bhai ne ana hoga to ajayen ge.Lets go on the swings!"

"Haan chalo beta."Geet started to feel very dizzy.

"Geet tum theek toh ho na.Geet ki--" Maan was interupted when he saw her falling to the ground.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww that was really sweet an amazing update and I'm falling in love with priya man shes cute and live the relationship between her and geet cho sweet anyways loving the fact that maan is more fun here and not angry young man but also hd us starting to fall for her, continue soon 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so sweet & amazing between Priya & Geet the way they bond quickly infact this time Maan is not angry man pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update!!
Thanks for the pm
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really gud
update soon
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