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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Beautifully written....I love reading such beautiful stories! Do continue. <3

--Nidz

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Mahima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

amazing beginning

but can't wait to know wat nupur did

why did mayank accuse her

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Beet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Hey Fatima 🤗

This sounds like a beautiful story. And the first part was absolutely fantastic! Beautifully written. <33

Please do continue soon.

And if it's not too much to ask could you add me to your PM list.

Love

Daania

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Fatima, let me tell u the defination of a short update according to a MNian... well, a short update is one whoch has minimum 6-7 paras of medium size and 3-4 long paras.. And both these definations do not suit your update.. SO, to be precise, I want a longer update next time.

Coming to the contents of the update, it was beautifully written.

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

hmmm nice start plz cont soooooooon plz

thx alot for the pm

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Lovely concept! And i really like the Name you chose. Update as soon as you can

-Natasha

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Loved the First Part. But it was too short ! Update as soon as you can.

-Natasha

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Fatima, let me tell u the defination of a short update according to a MNian... well, a short update is one whoch has minimum 6-7 paras of medium size and 3-4 long paras.. And both these definations do not suit your update.. SO, to be precise, I want a longer update next time.

Coming to the contents of the update, it was beautifully written.

haan I know...but kya karein I cud not extend it or rather say I did not want to divulge more at this point of time...I know everyone wants a longer update...and I assure you I'll have it...but at this moment I just want to keep things crisp or rather bit enigmatic ....hope ur getting....I want to express every emotion specifically...and I've not done this before so it's a bit challenging for me I guess... but don't worry after some 3-4 parts I'll come up with good long updates 😊

And thanx a lot dear ...for liking the update !! :)

-Fatima

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

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Please read note at the beginning !!!

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#60

*Edited*

Man, this is SO beautiful! 😳 You're an awesome writer.

Alright, so Nupur confessed. Eesh, I respect women with such a spirit a lot. I liked what she said and I loved Mayank, all throughout. You've penned down his pain remarkably well. And by far, I find both the characters drawn pretty nicely. =)

Waiting for you to update us with longer chapters, keep writing! Continue soon. 😃

-Kanks

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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