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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Congrats di,
love reading ur ff
👍🏼😛🥳☢️😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
congrats for your thread !!!!!!!! waiting for ur updates ........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Congrats on the 5th thread 🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

😳fabi - thanxs dear..thanxs for the lovely song👏

lallulal2010 - thanxs sweet heart😃

vrsharma - thanxs...really glad to see ur post😃

simran - can't thanxs u enough...ur a darling..reall motivator👏⭐️
there have been times when I just posted for u..like on ur request

Dhara_s - yah!! is it the longest running story..😲.
thud !!! muskan faints🤢😳

Soumya - thanxs sweet heart😳

Kaval05 - thanxs dear😃

MrsMaanKhurana - thanxs dear..hope I keep upto ur expectations😳

fijianbabe - thanxs dear😃

nilu - thanxs a lot darling😳

pop77 - thanxs dear..I just realised..I read ur post every single update
but u r not there in my PM list...OMG OMG OMG....i am flattered👏😳

tanya_vi - WOW..after long time😲😳

sweet scorpio - thanxs😃

smiliey - thanxs darling😃

muskaan_22285 - thanxs u were the first one on this thread..yeppy😆😃

vinithaa - thanxs a lot vinitha😳

sireesha.- love u darling😳

raisa159 - thanxs😃

Maneetkraze - thanxs a lot for that😃

reenasv - wow..thats so cute😳

JULIEL - wow..first time u added that..thanxs👏⭐️

muniza75- thanxs..welcome to pyar ka ehsaas👏

JRia - thanxs...dear...😃

mrk_1 - just working on that...

kooliio - thanxs dear😳

thanxs guys..thanxs a lot for such a warm welcome to the new thread...

love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
congrats fr the new thread!! great ff..update soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
CONGOO! I just love ur FF!
its amazingg.
keeeeep it upp! :)
will try to comment regularly! super busy! ;(
update sooonn please.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
hey muskaan congo....gud luck n thanx a lot for the wonderful ff..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28


maan could read her eyes she was happy..thats wat he wanted...
he droped her home & moved onto his meetings..

part 117

geet calls pooja..
poo I have have something for u..
pooja - kya??
geet - saturday ko Maan ke magazine a launch hain..& PM media is doing the
designing for their magazine..so I have an extra invite to the disc..
pooja - wow...thats perfect..Maan Khurana & Arjun Punj under one roof...
u just made my day
geet - but u have to do some thing for me..
pooja - I know...u will never do anything without reason
geet - pooo
pooja - aacha bool
geet - plan a party at ur place ..call smriti & kavya..don't tell them I am coming
pooja - tu mujhe jootha kilane ke plan main hain
geet - invite !!!
pooja - teehk hain teehk hain ...aaj hi plan karthi hoon

geet caught up with krish & his school work..she got a call from his principal
regarding the play....as followed up with worksheet

next day geet went to the mansion..
daadi - where have u been? how is ur new job?
geet - every thing is fine daadi
daadi - I thought u will be joining our family business
geet - nahi I am not comfartable with that
NT - daadi ..phir vedi veerji ghar hi nahi aayengai..
daadi - very true..now atleast he comes back home because of her
geet blushes..


it was 2pm..maan comes home...picks up the files & goes to the study
he looks for geet..& then remembers she has joined office..
maan opens his laptop & continues with his work..
geet sneaks in ..comes close to his ears & wispers
geet - little birdy said u r missing me!! how can that be!!
maan smiled..tumhara office nahi hain
geet - I don't go to office every day...
maan was suprised..then
geet - I work from home...only have to attend client meetings..rest of the time
I am hear..attending my hubby!!!
maan - u don't have a client meeting today
geet - I only take a single client at a time...
& as I checked last...Mr. Khurana is not meeting us today
maan - wat if he decides to meet mrs khurana...and nibbles her ears..
moving her curls....
geet - at ur service ...
maan - yeh aacha kaam hain
geet - hain na!!!
maan understood wat she meant by least commitment..and was really happy that
she found exactly wat she wanted...
geet - shall I get ur lunch here
maan - please sweetheart..bhuat kaam hain
geet went down & got his lunch..
maan - i have meeting at 6pm..untill then I will be working from home
geet - umm!(feeding him)
maan - with launch this weekend..kaam ka pressure bhaut hain
geet looks into the files...he was working on & still continues to feed him
maan - tum kyun nahi khaa rahi? (guides her hand to feed her)
she smiles..
after they finish the lunch..maan was held up with his work..
geet gets a call from pooja
pooja - yaar...pyjama party at my place 8pm sharp..
geet - I can't stay back...
pooja - I know...tere liya 8-12pm
geet - ok ok..see u at 8 then

geet comes back to see maan was on a call...
geet looks into maans files & continues to work...she completed the basic things...
which otherwise would have eaten his time...arranged his mails..checked the final copy of the
hand outs..invite list...reminder list...
maan came back ..bend down next to her & noticed wat she was doing..
his breath caresed through her neck...she could'nt type a letter..her hand were shaking
she blushed..maan kissed her neck & wispered ...tum mujhe kyun nahi join karthi..
tum sara kaam karna..aur main tumhe aise hi dehktha rahoongha...


geet cuddled into a hug...phir main aap ko kab dekhoonghi...?? tum mujhe kanha dekhthi hoo!!
geet - ummmmm cried ..(she realized wat was he hinting to)
maan - thanxs...
geet - yeh to koi bhi kar saktha hain..
maan - nahi...sirf tum kar sakthi ho..
geet - don't flatter me...
maan - nahi geet..dehko..this is wat my assistant would do...this is her stlye of working
& this is wat u have done..& this is wat I have done...(pointing at the mails & listing)
geet tries to understand
maan - u do it exactly the way I do it...because ur doing it for me...(geet kisses him)
geet - coffee???
maan - umm!!
geet gets the coffee for him & continues with her work..maan leaves at six
geet was getting nervous to face her friends

geet reaches pooja's place..smriti & kavya were already there...
smriti - why is she here?
geet - yaar I am really sorry..
kavya - we were the ones behind ur life asking u to pick up a job & u did'nt even bother
telling us...
geet - nahi..I wanted to personally meet u guys & tell u..
smriti - when geet..u never have time for us..
geet - aise nahi hain...
kavya - u know u behave as if ur married having children & running a big house
geet gluped her saliva..
smriti - pooja...yeh tera ghar hain...u can invite whom ever u want..
I am leaving
pooja - yaar relax..picture dehkthe hain na...
I have managed to get a real nice adult movie
kavya - really...
smriti - are u sure...
pooja - I thought u guys need some exposure before the wedding night!!!
geet was totally embarressed..
geet - ok I will leave then
smriti - geet yaar ..its ok...we love u...& hugs her kavya & pooja join the hug
kavya - yaar next time don't do like this...please..it really hurts..
geet - sorry..holds her ears..

precap
ADULT MOVIE!!!😉

thanxs for all ur mails & support...hope u like the update...please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
musks,

i guess i read the update even without ur PM... 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

lovely update sweets...!!! cant wait to read the next part...!!!!

soumya

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskanp

😳fabi - thanxs dear..thanxs for the lovely song👏

lallulal2010 - thanxs sweet heart😃

vrsharma - thanxs...really glad to see ur post😃

simran - can't thanxs u enough...ur a darling..reall motivator👏⭐️
there have been times when I just posted for u..like on ur request

Dhara_s - yah!! is it the longest running story..😲.
thud !!! muskan faints🤢😳

Soumya - thanxs sweet heart😳

Kaval05 - thanxs dear😃

MrsMaanKhurana - thanxs dear..hope I keep upto ur expectations😳

fijianbabe - thanxs dear😃

nilu - thanxs a lot darling😳

pop77 - thanxs dear..I just realised..I read ur post every single update
but u r not there in my PM list...OMG OMG OMG....i am flattered👏😳

tanya_vi - WOW..after long time😲😳

sweet scorpio - thanxs😃

smiliey - thanxs darling😃

muskaan_22285 - thanxs u were the first one on this thread..yeppy😆😃

vinithaa - thanxs a lot vinitha😳

sireesha.- love u darling😳

raisa159 - thanxs😃

Maneetkraze - thanxs a lot for that😃

reenasv - wow..thats so cute😳

JULIEL - wow..first time u added that..thanxs👏⭐️

muniza75- thanxs..welcome to pyar ka ehsaas👏

JRia - thanxs...dear...😃

mrk_1 - just working on that...

kooliio - thanxs dear😳

thanxs guys..thanxs a lot for such a warm welcome to the new thread...

love
muskan



just read it simply superb.Muski u r getting very naughty haan....................................adult movie bechari geet ke to adult movie ke naam se hi pasene chotne lagge dekhegi toh kya hoga.kahin geet ko lessons dene ki tyari toh nahin ho rahi hai 😉😉😉.maan jaise hi ghar aye attack likje kank scene of rani and abhishek
Edited by simzzzzcool - 14 years ago

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