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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
HEY MUSKAAN,

LOVE YOU YAAR, AWESOME UPDATE...LIKED IT VERY MUCH......YA I THINK GEET SHOULD JOIN MAAN TO HELP HIM IN HIS WORK...ATLEAST THEN HE WILL GET MORE TIME TO SPEND WITH HER...

anyways plzzzz tell me the address of pooja house.....even i want to watch the ADULT MOVIE🤣🤣ANYWAYS I AM ALONE MY HUSBAND IS NOT HOME THIS WEEK.......

love you-----------vinithaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
hi....
awesome updates yaar.
srry didn't replied 4 so many days..
actually there ws some prob with my comp..
khair.. loved ur updates yaar......
update soon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
adult movie...😆. This is gonna be one funny update 😆. Thanks for the update!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
I was a silent reader of ur fanfiction from when u have started writing it..never commented before...but now it will be really unfair from my side to not say anything...because ur writing style is just awsome... a continuous flow which always attracts a redaer's attention...and maintaining continuity through more tah 100 episodes is not a matter of joke...really appreciable work....hats off to u..whenever i become online i always come to geet forum for checking whether there is any update in two of the fanfiction among which one is this one...i really love d way u r presenting dis...
thanks from a reader's side...
lots of love...


deya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
😲😲😲😲 ADULT MOVIE??? I wonder what that entails... 😉

BTW Congrats for your 5th thread!
We really do love you, this FF and I'm sure your new FF too 😃😃😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

smriti - geet yaar ..its ok...we love u...& hug her kavya & pooja join the hug
kavya - yaar next time don't do like this...please..it really hurts..
geet - sorry..holds her ears..

part 118

they all move to pooja's room & cuddle up in the bed..
pooja plays the movie..all of them were excited & thrilled ..
geet was feeling shy...as the story moved on...pooja could not stop commenting
on the guy & his naked looks..smriti & kavya where getting nervous &
anxious...about their near future...
geet left the room at once...
pooja - geet yaar kya kar rahi hain
geet - nahi I am fine..mujhe nahi dehkna..

pooja - yaar iska kya hoga?
smriti & kavya were too lost to respond..
geet went & sat in the drawing room...she picked a magazine to read...
she just kept turning the pages...& there was an article on Maan Singh Khurana
with his pic...she could'nt stop thinking about their intimate moments..
maan passionately kissing her..trailing her bare waist..& uff his desires eyes
she closed the magazine & tried look away..she could feel herself getting
wamer & wet...she went to the washroom & walked into the pooja's room
closed her eyes...took a deep breath & said...
I AM MARRIED ....I AM MARRIED TO MAAN SINGH KHRANA
there was no noice..perfect silence..she slowly openned her one eye to
see their reaction..& then opened the next one..pooja had chips in her
hand & her mouth was wide open..her eyes was literally poping out..
geet - poo poo..
smriti & kavya kanha hain..
pooja does'nt respond..geet rushes out to look for them..
smriti was in pooja's parents room talking to ranbir
& kavya was in the guest room talking to ajay
geet comes back to the pooja's room & stands in the balcony
pooja - tu pagal hain kya???(shouting at her)
geet keeps mum
pooja - how can u marry him? atleast u should have asked my suggestion
geet - but u always admired him
pooja - I am sure ..he would have talked u into it..
oh geet..why are u so innocent
geet - aisa kuch nahi hain
pooja - don't do this to ur self..u deserve some one better
geet - I thought u always said he is the best...
pooja - agar main kise ko bhi best bolonghi tu use shaadhi karleghi kya?
geet - nahi ..woo
pooja - u crazy..maan is like a fantansy ..real main how can u marry a guy
who has a son..who is 10..itna attitude..temperment
geet - krish is going to be 11 now
pooja - tu serious hain kya?
I always knew there was something fishy I should have warned u..
pooja hugs her...geet yaar ek baar to bola hota...pyar ke chakar main
kanha ja kar phas gayi tu
geet - it was an arrange marriage...its been 4 yrs now
pooja faints..thud!!!!
geet gets some water & sprinkles..poo poo..yaar itna melodrama mat karna.. please
all the while in college u were married...
why did'nt u tell us anything about it...
geet - phir tum loog meri itne aachey friends nahi banthe
pooja - nahi geet main paka banthe..how could a lose a chance of being saali to Maan Singh Khurana
geet cleares her throat
pooja - ok..mrs maan singh khurana (geet blushes)
geet - yaar main smriti aur kavya ko kaise batvoonghi..
pooja - ek min..so ranbhir..tera
geet - devar hain
pooja - ur the bhabhai he went ga ga about...she laughed loud
tu to gayi...smriti will kill u...
geet - yaar to kuch kar na..please..
pooja - sorry..ise bar main kuch nahi kar sakthi..
geet - where are they...
pooja - picture deehk kain..they are having phone S** with their respective...
would be's
geet - wat is phone s**
pooja - teri shaadhi hogayi hain na?..suhag raat nahi howa kya??
geet - Poooo!!!(geet was red)
pooja - then ask ur hubby
geet - main unse kaise pooch sakthi hoon
pooja - are u sure u guys really married..i mean real real sence
geet - tu aise kyun bol rahi hain
pooja - phir pooch..
geet - teehk hai main ghar jaakhe pooch loonghi
pooja - nahi aabhi mera samne pooch
geet - nahi..I can't call him now..he will be busy..
pooja - raat key 11.30 he is busy..not with u..then with whom???
geet - pooja yaar please stop it..

geets phone rings..she looks at the number & cuts the call
pooja - kise ka phone hain..
geet - kisi ka nahi...
pooja snatches the phone & sees it was maans call..
geet snatches the phone & cuts the call again..
maan really gets worried & tries again & again..

pooja keeps teashing geet...& geet keeps cutting the call
pooja - nahi tu abhi poocha ghi
geet (shouts)- main unse ghar jaake pooch loonghi & turns around
maan stood there with his hand crossed in front of his chest
geet closed her mouth
pooja initially was mesmerised looking at maan in her bedroom balcony
she blinked her eyes twice & then pinched herself
& then she moves close to geet..pooch na..
maan - kya poochna hain tumhe geet..
geet - woo..phone..phone phone..(clutching her duppata)
maan - tum phone ..3 bar bhool chuki hoo
pooja smiled..naughtly..maan saw geet turning pink & red..
geet - mujhe kuch nahi poocha na..
maan - phir tum aapna phone kyun cut kar rahi thi bar bar..I got so worried
pooja - how romantic..u came looking for her because she was cutting the call
wow..perfect!!!
geet - tu chup kar poo..tujhe se main baath main baath karoonghi..
aap pipe chat kar aya ho??(questioning maan)
maan - aur kaise atha?
pooja looked down..jiju u actually climbed that pipe..I am impressed..
maan smiled at her..geet glanced at poo & then maan
pooja - yaar tu aab pooch hi daal ..I can't wait ..
maan - kya pooch na tumhe?

they hear a moment at the door..pooja asks geet & maan to hide behind the curtains
maan - hum chup kyun rahen hain
geet - aap yanha kyun aaye (he cups her face)
maan - I was worried..for u..(geet looks into those eyes & gets lost..or was it she was missing
his closeness..she blinked her eye lashes once & moved closer to his lips)
pooja cleares her throat they snap out..
pooja - tum loog nikloo..I will tell them u were getting late..
I have locked their room doors..u can use the main door to leave

while in the car..pooja calls..again..poocha??
geet - kaha na pooch loonghi..
maan smiles at her innocence..

geet changes & quickly slips inside the spread..avoiding his questions..
maan slips next to her on the other side & calls her on her phone..
geet looks at the number & answeres the call(inhe bhi kya kya sooj tha hain)
maan - wat are u wearing
geet - night dress..(maan aap kya saval kar rahe ho)
maan - GEET
geet - teehk hain (all confused)..my pink night suit
maan - zip wala(in a husy voice he replies)
geet - ji (she gets concious..turns around & looks..maan was facing the other side
she turns back & lies down..wondering..)
maan - tumhare baal mujhe kula aache laagthe hain
geet - umm!(she opens her plats lost in his voice)
maan - i get lost in the exotic scent of urs..
geet cuddles up breathing heavier..
maan slowly slips his hand & pull her closer...into him
moves her hair from her neck & wispers..this is..phone s**
she cuts the call & covers her face with the spread..

precap
party time!!!

thanxs for all ur supprt...hope u like this part too...please do comment...
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

ahahah phone s**!! that was sooo awesomee!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
the phone part was amazing update soonnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
wow muskaan kya update tha awesome......loved the way maan entered pooja's room....and i way he explained her abt phone s** was just so romantic....loved it...amazing update👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
it was really nice.....
so poojs really know now...
and phone s** was so funny...
loved it
keep writing
awesome

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