FF: IRREVOCABLY YOURS #2 Will you? pg 124 - Page 7

I m totally agree with geet,that while we have thoughts like that,baba ji plz don't read our minds.Plz plz.

OMG...HOW CAN I EXPRESS MY LOVE FOR YOU?????
This was simply wonderful.....
You've described the kiss and EVERYTHING so so heavenly,it seemed so magically..I am going to read this again and again..Love you loads yaar...
Please please please please update soon...
love you love you love you love you love you love you

Okay I read it 6 times already,I think now I am stable enough to give a proper comment..

Really loved the kiss.I must say again,your vocabulary is simply fabulous...You might not believe but my English had improved tremendously reading FFs,to be exact urs and Pallo di's (no offense to others).I really love the wide vocabulary range you have.

Even during the kiss,Geet was thinking silly stuff.... 🤣
Some things never change 😊
After the kiss,Geet started the conversation with such a comment...That is soo Geet,no no that's so you..I mean you're the one with all this humour...
Some things never change 😊
Again more dry humour.. Love you for this 😊
Loved the whole truck scene..Loved how he hid her protectively...that's SO Maan
Loved how he slid his hand on her waist and said 'Mine' and she felt so good and said 'Yours'

I must hug you...*hugs you tightly*
A few days back,they met...He has already saved her from death and then paid her landlord,saved her from gundas and they've even KISSED and enjoyed it...This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really really LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!
Thanks a lot,please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

very nice update...loved it.....when they both will confess their feelings.... waiting for next

wow i juts loved
hot kiss and that comical moment was too good
maan considering geet as his was wonderful
do continue
bye sumi

luving the story so far. its so funny w/ their "witty" comebacks and both of them calling each other animal names. What is the meaning of the loong word Maan used before chicken? lol im going to google it hehehe luved Geet's comeback for tat comment too.

n of course I have to say something abt the KISS. Now now Maan do you actually think you cud have control over yourself when Geet is ard you? lol

I was laughing so hard when Geet didn't know how to respond to a kiss. It sounded kidda realistic - Im mean how do you know how to respond to a kiss if you haven't been kissed before? nnn the comment abt her finding out that you do not get babies just by sleeping beside a man was hilarious! hahahah u made my Saturday afternoon =)

Tat was an awsome update realy lovd it do cnt sn.

Congrats!!!for the new threat!!
Loveeeeeeeeeeeee the part.
Tooooooooo gudddd update.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


fatima

Dayum Grl...the last part was HOT HOT HOT!!!! if only this happened!!! n what u said about...why u highlight Maan's name in red ..... so true for me tooo...!! he is insanely....ufffff..heheheh

Congo on the 2nd thread 😛