OS - Kahin toh hogi woh...updated part 3 pg 12

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Sananya09

What to do yaar, she's too good! 😆

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Tanya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Wow,this's exactly what I wanted!!! Thank you so much for this lovely post😊

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#43

Originally posted by: blueyRu
😭 😭 why do you make me have tears?
seriously, this is SO SO GOOD!!!
its just so emotional and just so good and ❤️
i love it!
WRITE MORE PLEASE! 🤗

I don't know yaar. When I start writing a piece I get too emotional. And I've been so engrossed with Geet and Maan that I can read between the lines and feel all their emotions. I cannot help but take it to the next level. I'll try not to be too emotional next time I write something up.

Thanks a lot for the comments though😊

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311578

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#44

Originally posted by: desigurl953
wow...this is great yaar...loved it

Thank you😊

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311578

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#45

Originally posted by: tanya_vi
Wow,this's exactly what I wanted!!! Thank you so much for this lovely post😊

I'm glad to have lived up to your expectation. Thank you😊

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Sireesha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Both the Parts are Awesome

Loved them

Thats so well written

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Jazmin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

you must do an epilogue...pls pls pls...*jaz on knees pleading*....you will just make my day if you do more on this...i have work tomorrow...gonna miss geet for hours...thoda sa mujhe rehem khao...pls!! *makes sad eyes*..........................is the blackmail working...he he

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

you did it again.... OMG!!! i could feel their pain, their anxiety and their urge to be together all along .. and i loved the way you tactfully handled the whole pari staging the whole beating up ... you are getting better by the day .. will you kill me if i ask you to continue .. ??? i mean the pains okay ! bring in pain .. but please continue ... pleeeejj !!

love,
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311578

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#49

Originally posted by: .sireesha.
Both the Parts are Awesome
Loved them

Thats so well written

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Thank you😊

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Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

OMG what have you done!!! it was just brilliant!!! OMG i got soo lost in it, like totally!! it was just perfect!! and the two of them sitting together by that windowsill and the sun setting in the background, just wow!!! and loved how Pari played cupid again, such great flow to ur writing!!! Now i never want this OS to end!! could u continue it pretty please!! and yea thankoo for the PM😳