OS - Kahin toh hogi woh...updated part 3 pg 12 - Page 13

loved da update

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

loved da update

it was beautiful

Thanks so much 😊

ok.....so first off......ummmmmmmmmmm how come i was the last to know about this ONE SHOT?? lolz


it was amazing!!!! I loved it.....each and every part!! the distance between the two......Maan dying because he can't stay without her....Geet sitting by her window wishing praying to see maan at least once!!! Dol....u have described the feelings of maan and geet sooooo well!! I can feel the pain they were in....it was hurting me to see them being sad...and miserable!!! The first two parts were ughhhh killers......i loved though how Pari helped Geet settle her life in Mumbai!! I also loved how the drama queen got maan and geet together.....Maan got punched.....but that punch got him to geet!!! I loved the part where he hugged her tummy......it was soooooo beautiful....i can imagine Maan doing that!! Now i wish to see this on screen....i hope they show this!!! Finally they are together.....and finally the baby gets both of his/her parents!

Can't wait until the next part is up! do continue soon!

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

ok.....so first off......ummmmmmmmmmm how come i was the last to know about this ONE SHOT?? lolz


it was amazing!!!! I loved it.....each and every part!! the distance between the two......Maan dying because he can't stay without her....Geet sitting by her window wishing praying to see maan at least once!!! Dol....u have described the feelings of maan and geet sooooo well!! I can feel the pain they were in....it was hurting me to see them being sad...and miserable!!! The first two parts were ughhhh killers......i loved though how Pari helped Geet settle her life in Mumbai!! I also loved how the drama queen got maan and geet together.....Maan got punched.....but that punch got him to geet!!! I loved the part where he hugged her tummy......it was soooooo beautiful....i can imagine Maan doing that!! Now i wish to see this on screen....i hope they show this!!! Finally they are together.....and finally the baby gets both of his/her parents!

Can't wait until the next part is up! do continue soon!

Awww..you are not the last one to know. 🤗I usually don't inform people that I wrote something...so once people start commenting, it rolls that way. And then more people find out about it.

I enjoyed writing it myself..it was different, emotional...I tend to put too much emotions. When I heard the song, I'm like this will be perfect for them. And then things started rolling and words started flowing. Bas...yehi hai meri kahani. BTW this OS ends here. I just cannot leave it on a sad note...hence the 3 parts😊

brillint update pls cont i love it the yu way put the words together pls i will be waitting thanks see soon

Thanks guys....yeh toh OS tha....no can't continue...and its old...thanks so much though.

Excellent...loved it!!!👏