OS - Kahin toh hogi woh...updated part 3 pg 12

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-Premeena-

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Posted: 15 years ago

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omg absulutely loved it... wowww.... that was simple but magical... i cud feel what you were trying to write so heavens right here .. u did amazing...!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: simzzzzcool
simply fabulous

Thanks so much😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: uzmam1
I wanted to create such a meeting such that the 7 heavens will remember...but unfortunately it didn't turn out that way.
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I am not really sure why you didnt think you made a profounf impact ... you brought two lovers together in such a beautiful way ..

it shook me to the core!!

delighted you continued!!

BRILLIANT!!!

Uzma xx

Actually words just kept flowing and it turned out the way it did. I did not picture anything for their meeting. But I was most certain that I did not want them to meet at the Dargah or the clinic. I wanted to give them private space and I also wanted to keep Pari out of it. So here it was. What I think I didn't do justice to was 'Kahin toh, kahin toh, hai nasha teri meri har mulaqat mein'. I wanted to create the nasha...you know what I mean?

But thanks so much for the comments..I'm glad you liked it anyway😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

oh so beautiful...out of this world.....i loved it is so touching....have tears in my eye.....thx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: seema05
nice very nice love it 👏 keep posting

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nikki_C
amazing OS hun👏
i absolutely loved it

do pm me next time, i love your writing style

Thanks so much hun😊

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Originally posted by: -Premeena-
omg absulutely loved it... wowww.... that was simple but magical... i cud feel what you were trying to write so heavens right here .. u did amazing...!!!

I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks so much! 😊