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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Lovely update😊... hope everything wil sort out between maaneet
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Dear I really enjoyed it.😃😃😃
Though its a sad Part thats so Beautifully Written.👍🏼
Thats Awesome......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.........
Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️
I really felt bad that Geet misunderstood Maan............
One day she will surely come to know abt Maan's Pure Love and then she will feel bad.........
Prem is a True Friend for Maaneet.....😊😃............
He will surely make Geet realise Maan's Love.....😊😊..........
Loved this line soooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
"Maan,teri Kasam.Main ushe pyar kerta hoon magar,jaise tum kertai ho,shiad main kabhi na ker paon.Magar main hi isko is ghar main laoon ga.Woh aye gi wapis Maan,tumhara pyar ushe laye ga idher."❤️
Eagerly waiting for the next part.............
Pls Update Soooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very sad and shatterin 4 maneet, very nicely written
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thx 4 the pm.sorry 4 ur loss.may his soul rest in peace.well really sad part.the main thing is u hv presented it vry well wit right choice of words.thx 4 it.i m sure geet will realise maan didnt knew nything n she will accept his luv
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey thank you everyone for the prayers:)
and ummm
to those wanting to read my new ff...
here it is
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Nice update or too senti i can say
Geet took all thgs wrong
Liked the way Prem was there for Geet n i hop he does gets back Geet to Maan
Maan was broken
Hop evrythg gets well soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you everyone for liking my story so much...Im writing right now...It will be up before I go to sleep.:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys Thank you for liking my story!!!!!!!!
Umm and thank you for the prayers..
here the link to my new storry..
Starting over.
Enjoy and good night!
When the Sun shines.

"Geet tum se eik baath puchoon?"Prem asked sitting beside her in the taxi.

"Sure pucho Prem"Geet asked looking out the window.

"Tumne kabhi yeh soocha hai ke,shiad Maan ko kuch nai patha tha?" He asked concentrating on his friend.

"Hmm,tum uski side per ho kiya?Ab mere paas dost bhi nai rahe ga kiya?Khair bohot dafa dil ne kaha ke woh nai ho sakhta ase.Magar prem tumhe pata hai,Dev bhi asi hi tha wedding night per.Bohot pyar se boltha tha.Jab main Maan se milti thi toh woh total opposite tha.Aur ushe raath,mujhe udher maan bhi mila tha!"Geet said recalling the night.

"Nai dekho main tumshe sache dil se kehta hoon,meri dost per maath shaak karo!Jitne saal mein tumse door raha hamesha tum hare bare main soocha.Aur Geet dekho asa bhi ho sakhta hai ke Maan ko bhi na pata ho.Woh sachi tumse bohot pyar kerta hai.Uske pyar pai shak math kerna"Prem said trying to make her understand.

"End of convo Prem"She told him sternly.

Everytime she closed her eyes,she would see Maan.She tried to forget him but it was becoming harder and harder by the moment.She really di fall in love with him,for her his smile were a gift.He made her feel like she was a queen,but sadly it was all an act.It felt so real though,it felt like it was meant to be.WOW Maan was an awesome actor.

"Chalo,agaye hain hum idher,tum jao...Main bags lata hoon."Prem said while taking her stuff out of the taxi.

Geet stepped inside the house,and was hit by Maan's scent.He was here,it had to be him.She quickly looked around,but found no one there.For some reason she felt disappointed,but why?He hurt her didn't he,then why did a part of her want to return to him.She was going to go mad,she needed to keep her self busy.First thing tommorow she will have to go look for work.

Maan on the other hand sat in geet's room and held the sari she had left behind.He would not be able to live without her,her scent was every where.This was bad,first he lost his brother and now Geet.WHY ME?Maan thought,there had to be someone out there who did not like him.He needed her,and prem promised to bring her back.Prem really did turn out to be a good friend,it was hard to find honest people now a days.His only hope was Geet would return in a short period of time.No he would not sit here,he was going to make Dev pay and go explain to geet.With that thought he dozed off in to a world of happiness.

The next morning Maan made his way to the car,and pulled out Geet's address."Dev Singh Khurana,I want you to get in the car behind me and let the driver take you to geet's new place.We are going to explain to her today.No you are going to explain to her.This is not how we were raised understood.Now Im hanging up you have exactly 7 mintutes to be in the car damn it."Maan nearly yelled in to his blackberry.Closing his phone,he rested his head on the seat and turned the radio on.His favourite track was playing.

Tum mujhe yuh bhula na paoge

haan tum mujhe yuh bhula na paoge

Jab kabhi bhi sunoge geet mere

Sanng sanng tum bhi gungunaoge

Haan tum mujhe yuh bhula na paoge

Ho tum mujhe yuh ...

(Woh baharein woh chandani raatein

Humne ki thi woh pyaar ki baatein)-2

Un najaroon ki yaad aayegi

Jab khayaloon mein mujhko laoge

Haan tum mujhe yuh bhula na paoge

Ho tum mujhe yuh ...

(Mere haatho mein tera chehra tha

Jaise koi gulab hota hai)-2

Aaur sahara liya tha bahon ka

woh shaam kis tarah bhulaoge

Haan tum mujhe yuh bhula na paoge

Ho tum mujhe yuh ...

(Mujhko dekde bina karaar naa tha

Ek aisa bhi daaur gujra hai)-2

Jhooth manu tho puchlo dil se

Mein Kahoonga tho ruth jaoge

Haan tum mujhe yuh bhula na paoge

As the song came to an end,Maan had tears in his eyes."Main tumhare bina maar jaonga geet.Aaj baath sun leina meri"Maan said to himself,as he turned around he saw Dev running to the car and sitting down in the back of the car.Maan finally closed his eyes and thought,"Hum apke dil ko wapis nai denge Geet Handa,Aaj tum majboor hogi mere saath ane ke."With that he was off to his ladylove's place.

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Geet got out of bed in the most weirdest mood,she really wanted to be in Maan's arms.She still had her doubt Maan was involved in this in anyway.Opening her closet,she chose a simple yellow sari,everything she owned reminded her of Maan."Maan I love you so much that it hurts to be away from you.Ajao mujhe bana ne Maan.TUmhein nai patha main kitni tooti hui hoon" Geet said finally realizing she did not let Maan explain.She wanted his explanation.Going to change she only wished to see him downstairs when she was ready.

Prem had woken up to the weirdest dream,he saw a girl in his dreams.Someone who was not geet,she was beautiful just like geet but something about her was different.Actually it was not different because it was Pinky,he remebered his last encounter with Pinky.She was awesome,well actually kind of annoying.Why was he thinking of her?He decided to come downstair and make geet breakfest,nowing that miss patakha would get up in a bad mood.As he turned on the oven,he heard the doorbell ring.Going to open the door he saw Maan and Dev standing there.

"Prem jii,aap humein undher boologe yah asi hi,mandak ki tarah goor goor ke dekho ge" Maan said with a slight grin on his face.

"Oye yaar,chalo koi toh kush hai,wasaiy abhi apki mrs khurana,ayi nai neeche.Magar aapko dekh ker zaroor kush hongi.Woh maane ya na maane.Poori raath meri saath wale kamre main chakar lagati rahi hai."Prem said trying to look alive,he was kind of tired.

"Yahan pai bhi wahi hisab the Romeo ka"Dev mumbled.

"Acha,zara fee math ho! tumain patha hai na hum idher kis liye ayen hain!Chal prem yaar kuch toh bane ke kila!"Maan said

"Wasiay tum kuch zaida nai kush ho aaj,koi plan hai apke paas.Hameri bhabi ko bana ne ka.I mean hone wali magetar ka!;)"Prem said winking.

"Dev aaj boole ga,or woh sune gi" Maan said casting a look in the kitchen.

"acha tum loog behto main lata hoon kuch" Prem said.

"Premmm tumne mujhe uthaya nai,tumain patha hai na ke mujhe job doonde ne jana tha.Ajeeb insaan ho!Ab tum mujhe ice cream dilaoge ge!' Geet said not realizing that maan was standing right infront of her as she was trying to put her hair ina braid.

"Geeeeettttt agar tumeeee samne dekho gi na,toh tumhein 1 nai 1000 ice cream ki zaroorat hogi!Itni garmi lagegi."Prem yelled from the kitchen while chuckling to himself.

"Tu-"Geet stopped in her tracks!

"Geet kya haal hai,tum per yeh saari achi lag rahi hai!"Maan said while looking stunned.

"M-a-a-n..tu--um yahan per kiya ker rahe ho!"Geet said

"Geet tumhe poori saachiae suni hogi,main dev ko laya hoon woh tumhain bataye ga."Maan said while grabbing her hand and pulling her to the dinning table.Where dev waited.

"Chalo shoro hojao dev werna tum aur naintara ka jo main hashar karoon ga,woh bohot bura hoga.Tumhare tookre tookre ker keh kuth ko kila doon ga!Agar boole toh tume simply jail ki saza mile gi." MAan looked at dev pointedly

Geet,Im sorry.Main asal main bohot sharminda hoon!Paisa ache achoon ko karab ker deti hai.Maine apne biwi per lakoon gawa diye,aur pir mere paas kuch nai tha.Geet main Canada main rehta tha,udher maafi nai debt ki!Toh naintara ko eik rasta mila,maine uska saath diya.Mujhe nai patha tha ke meri ki hue ki saza tumhe aur maan ko katni pare gi.Maan aur meri larai hoi hui thi,toh main canada shift hogaya.Jab maan ko patha chala mere debt ke bare main usne ka ke woh help nai kere ga!I had to do something geet.Woh tumhari property maine asal main kisi agent ke through bikwayi thi.Mujhe nai patha tha ke Maan ne kaaridi hai woh!Maan tumse bohot pyar kerta geet.Pehli dafa maine uski ankhon main tumhare liye itna pyar dekha hai!Pehli dafa uski darkhane kisi ke naame dekhi hain.Pehli dafa maan singh khurana ko kisi se itna pyar kerte hue dekha hai.Geet meri galti ki usko saza maath dena!"Dev said looking at Geet.

Geet slowly looked at Maan with tears in her eyes.She suddenly walked up to Dev and slapped him."Tumhari waja se maine apne pyar per shak kiya!DEV!Woh tum the jisne mujhe pyar sikya tha,magar woh maan hai jisne mujhe tootne se bachaya!TUmhari waja se jo dil per zakhm hain,Maan ne unko marham lagaya.Tumhara bara bhai kabh takh tumhare galitiyoon ko sudare ga! Kab thak...Tumhari waja se,maine maan ka ghar choora,uski gali choori.Maine apne hi oyar ko rulaya!Tumhari waja se main maan per wishwas nai ker payi.....TUMHAri waja seeee.Main bohot buri hoon."Geet said while slowly falling down to the ground.

"Are geet woh dekho,woh yahin pai hai,tumhara pyar tumhare saath!Chalo utho!Main nashta laya hoon.Khud kao or ushe bhi kilao.Moon dekho uska...Roo roo ker pagal laal hogaya hai.Chalo utho darling"Prem said while making her sit in the chair and slowly looking at maan who was frozen in place.

Silence......

"Maan I am so sorry!Main bohot buri hoon,tumhain main bhi chor ayi sammera ki tarah!MAine toh tumse promise kiya tha mujhe maaf kardo."Geet said while sitting on the chair not being able to get up and look at his pained face.Suddenly she was lifted off the chair.

"Pagali,tumhe toh ab mujhe pay kerna pere ga!Mujhe tum kaise choor sakhti hooChalo mujhe favor chaiye."Maan said pulling her into a tight embrace.

"Kuch bhi Maan,bolo kiya chaiye"Geet said looking up at him.

"Jo puchoon ga woh do gi?"Maan asked

"Haan,abh pucho bhi" Geet said impatiently

Maan took a few steps back and got on his knees."Geet Handa,Ever since I have met you,you have done nothing but make me a better Man.ou came in to my life and turned it upside down.Before you came in my life,I thought there was no such thing as true love.Then when you showed me the different colors of life,it made me realize how much I was missing!Geet mujhe pyar ke bare main ziada kuch nai patha,but all I know is that I want to learn it from you.I want to watch you grow old,and I want to tell my kids about how I met you,I want the whole world to know your my territory.Geet I promise to stand by your side through everything,I want to be the person you turn to when your sad!I want to be the one by your side when your happy.I love you so much geet.Will you Marry Me? Maan asked feeling better that he told geet how he felt.

"Hmmm soochna pare ga...Poori zindagi eik khadoos ke saath,pir khadoos ke bache palne parenge"Geet said teasing Maan

"hahaha Geeeet thats mean"Prem said while falling to the ground and laughing his head off.

"Geeeeeetttttttt ki bachiii" Maan said nervousily

"Oye Hero Ring pahenoe..Zara Maan Singh Khurana ki choie toh dekhoon main..."Geet said to Maan while faliing to the ground and hugging him.

"Yeh chale gi" Maan said sliping on a simple yet very elegant ring.

"Aye Haye mere hone wali pati ki toh choice bohot achi hai"Geet said trying to make everyone happy.

They were interupted as the police came in,Geet was worried."Dev Singh Khurana you are under areast.Your wife is also being arrested."Dev was shocked,but he knew he deserved it."Im sorry bhai."Dev said to his brother and with that they had left.It took mere seconds to get him arrested but it made Geet feel better.

"TOh Mrs Khurana,kahan the hum"Maan said pulling geet towards him.

"Jahan pai bhi the,yaad rakho idher eik nuna muna innocent sa bacha hai."Prem said covering his eyes.

"Prem"Maan and Geet said

"hahaha"Prem smiled.

Thank you Prem,mujhe patha hai tum mere se pyar kerte ho,magar tume patha hai na ke sirf maan mujhe handle ker sakhta hai.Yo will find someone I will help."Geet said

"Kya tumhain kaise patha"Both the men replied.

"Mera bffl hai yeh,iski har baath ka mujhe patha hota hai.Aur jise din isne mujhe per yell kiya tha.Mujhe ushi waaqt pata chal gaya tha" Geet said while going to hug Prem.

"Geet Maan ko kush rakhna"Prem said finally hugging her tightly.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thx 4 the pm.gr8 update.thx god.all is well now.dev n nt r in jail.serves them rite.maan n geet r 2gether.wow
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

awesome..really awesome..

totally rocking...i loved it..
it was superb update...do keep writing



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