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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
This was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee.. OMG i loved it.. I love how romantic Maan is.. Loved it when he chose the saree for her and left her a note.. thats sooo adorable!!! OMG please update soon.. this is too Good!!! <3 it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thx 4 the pm.nice part.update soon n pm me.thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Btw here is the sari I had in mind for geet..Except its alittle more lighter
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats Fabulous Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it soooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved Maan's Notes..........❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
They are soooooooooooooooooooooooooo Romantic❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved this line soooooooooooooooo much
."Maan do not worry,meri zindagi main sirf eik insaan ke liye pyar hai.Woh ho tum Maan.Aaj main jo bhi hoon woh sirf tumhari waja se hoon."❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Thanq so much for the PM
Pls Update Sooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you sooo much niharika_87,Im reallly happy you liked it... sireesha,we all love the romantic maan,instead of devdas maan...... Im updattinggg now soon time .....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok guys here is the sari:
Now this is kind of more about prem,but he has a strong role in this ff,so please spare my explanation on him.He is a positive character so dont worry...Tissue warning,Maan and Geet are gonna face a lot of problems soon!
The song is Humain itna pyar by jal and Sayyian by kaliash kher.
Love loads .....
Humain itna Pyar na karo.

Prem had been moved in to maan's house.He was living right next to Geet.He was so happy that she still considered him a friend,but something felt different.Somewhere in between her constant rubbish and laughs,she seemed different.There was something missing from the Geetu he knew,she seemed composed and a little reserved just like Maan.He had to find out what was wrong with her,but it was pretty late and he needed the sleep.jumping in to his bed,he grabbed his Ipod and played his all time favourite song.

Heere moti main na chaahoon
main toh chaahoon, sangam tera
main toh teri...saiyyan
tu hai mera ....
...saiyyan ...saiyyan

tu jo chhoo le pyaar se
aaraam se mar jaaoon
aaja chanda bahoo mein
tujh mein hi gum ho jaaoon main
tere naam mein kho jaaoon
saiyyan ... saiyyan

mere din khushi se jhoome, gaaye raatein
pal pal mujhe dubaaye jaate jaate
tujhe jeet jeet haaroon
yeh praan praan varoon
hay aise main nihaaroon
teri aarti utaaroon
tere naam se jude hai saare naate
saiyyan ... saiyyan

banke maala prem ki, tere tan pe jhar jhar jaaoon
baithoon naiya preet ki
sansaar se thar jaaoon main
tere pyaar se thar jaaoon
saiyyan ... saiyyan

yeh naram naram nasha hai...badhta jaaye
koi pyaar se ghungatiya deta uthaaye
ab baawra hua mann
jag ho gaya hai roshan
yeh nayee nayee suhaagan
ho gayee hai teri jogan
koi prem ki pujaaran mandir sajaaye
saiyyan ... saiyyan
Saiyyaaaaaaaaan...saiyyan

heere moti main na chaahoon
main toh chaahoon sangam tera
main na jaanu
tu hi jaane
main toh teri
tu hai mera
main na jaanu
tu hi jaane
main toh teri
tu hai mera
main toh teri ............ tu hai mera

With that,Prem was dreaming about a girl who he loved so much.......

Geet's Room

"Yeh harkat sirf Maan ki ho sakhti hai..Meri salwar kameez kahan hai!Main yeh night gown main nai so rahi.Ho nai sakhta!"Kiya samjha hua hai mujhe.Aye Baba ji kahan pas gayin hoon main.Eik toh yeh pyar bhi na bohot ajeeb cheez hai."Geet said while pouting and throwing all her sari's on her bed.

Knock!Knock!

"Ajao Prem,tumhari hi kami thi!"Geet yelled in a rude tone.

"Hmmmm toh main Prem kabse ho gaya,aur itne guse main kyon ho tum!Doctor ko call keron?"Maan said in a teasing tone,knowing in 2 seconds geet would burn him a live.

"Haan Haan,mere kapre replace ker diye!Are aapne nai pehne mere kapre!Main toh samjhi ti ke apko zaroorat per gayi hogi.Main sari pehn ke to soo nai sakhti aur..aur yeh night gown toh mer jhooti hi pehne gi"Geet said while throwing objects at Maan.

Are Geet,sorry,per tum sari main itni achi lagti ho!Mujhe agar chote lagi toh khud ko hi dard do gi!"Maan said ducking from any objects thrown at him

Maan was suddenly hit by a stuffed animal on his eye.He used it to his advantage,and made it look like it hurt him."Uff GEEEEETTTTTT"Geet suddenly stopped and rushed to his side,and started blowing in his eyes."Im so sorry Maan,tumain toh pata hai na main bohot guse main hoon.Wasaiy bhi I think your rubbing off on me."Geet said while using her sari to rub his eyes.Maan on ther hand was enjoying the heat of her body,she truly was amazing.Finally he pulled her closer,making her stop and look in to his eyes.He brought his lips to her mouth and gently wishpered "I love you Geet,tum mera kitna kyal rakhti ho."He placed a soft kiss on her lips and tried to move away but Geet had different plans.She grabbed his hand and said "Its only fair if I tell you how much i love you."Grabbing his had she pulled him to her bed and pushed him down in laying position.She lay beside him,moving his hand so she could rest her head on it."Close your eyes Maan."Geet said to him

"Main batao kitna pyar kerti hoon tumse?Jitna eik maa apne bache se kerti hai.Jitna raath ka andhera inhe taroon aur chaand se pyar kerta hai.Maan you make me stronger,you make me whole.Pehle kabhi yeh ehsaas nai mehsoos hua.Ushe NRI se bhi nai,aur main toh use apna samjh behti thi.Apka ghum ab mera ghum hain,apki kushi meri kushi hai.Jab apko chote lagti hai toh main dard main hoti hoon.Apka approval mere liye bohot mayne rakhta hai.Maan......Main sirf apki hoon,aur apki hi rahoon gi.I love you Khadoos!"Geet said to Maan,who had tears rolling down his eyes.

"Really?Waada karo mujhe kabhi chor ke nai jao gi,waada karo is khadoos ke saath hamesha raho gi!Geet jitna tum mujhse pyar kerti ho,koi nai ker sakhta sivaye dadi ke." Maan said pulling her in to a tight embrace.

The two couple lay in content,knowing that they no longer had to hide their feelings.The house seemed to feel peaceful,but only for them.Someone stood by the entrance of Geet's room in pain,Prem had woken up to banging sounds.when he made his way to Geet's room,he saw it slightly open.Opening it,he saw Geet confessing her love for Maan,and Maan returning those feelings.He never thought someone could love maan in that way.MSK,was a cold man to whom life meant bussiness.He only talked about bussiness,but it was not his fault.Sameera broke him,to an extent.She turned out to be such a two faced b****.Prem felt like crying that Geet was taken,he waited all these years to find her.He wanted to be someone,Prem had found a very good job here in Delhi,his qualifications were definately a must to any company.Something was missing though,something MAAN had and he didn't.He should of put two and two together,when that stupid annoying PINKy talked about his two friends.Everyone seemed to see it except him,but now it hurt a lot.He could not blame geet,because she never knew what he felt for her.Damn it!He couldnt even blame Maan,because he never told him about Geet.Prem was broken beyond belief,but he would never get in between the two lovers.He would keep his pain to himself and smile through everything.Silently making his way to his own bed,Prem Picked up his ipod only to see the song that was playing.He used to hate this song,but a friend had put it in his Ipod for him to listen.It was a pakistani band known as "Jal"..They were pretty popular around the world,but you had to really give there music a chance.There vocie was simple yet,soothing.So he played the song from the beginning...

Hamein itna pyaar na karo ke hum mar jaayein
Hamein itna tanha na karo ke ji na paayein

Koi dil ka qaraar jaane na
Koi mann ki yeh baat bataaye na
Koi aankhon hi aankhon mein keh de yeh baat
Ho ho
Chal chalein uss paar, jahaan koi na ho
Sab khushiyaan hon paas, sitam na ho
Aur sitaaron se karte rahein hum baat.

Kya yehi hai khataa pyaar maine kiya
Ab yun na sataa o mere piya
Tu hi mera dildaar tu dil ka qaraar
Nahin iss baat se mujhe koi inkaar

Kabhi kabhi tum yaad aatey ho toh dil bhar aaye
Yeh kaisa hai khumaar jo kum na ho aur barhta jaaye

Hooo ho??

Dekha hai har mausam teri aankhon mein
Beeta hai har lamha teri saanson mein
Yeh saansein toh teri amaanat hain
Ho ho
Kuchh ajab hai yeh haal mere seene mein
Haan par sur hai aur taal mere jeevan mein
Bas issi jeevan se hai mujhe thoda pyaar
Teri aahat hai sarsaraahat hai
Kucch aur nahi yeh chaahat hai
Nainon se nainon ko tak ke phir
Tumhein aankhein churaane ki aadat hai

Hamein itna pyaar (itna pyaaaaar) na karo ke hum mar jaayein
ke hum mar jaayein
Hamein itna tanha na karo ke ji na paayein (ke ji na paayein)

hooo hooooooo

Hamein itna pyaar (itna pyaar) na karo ke hum mar jaayein
Ke hum mar jaayein

That night prem cried himself to sleep,knowing that he could not live without Geet,but he had to learn how too.The next morning Prem's mood was not good,but thats when he realized something.He could not let Geet's silent rejection,hurt him that much.He was not going to throw away her hard work just because of her rejection.It took her years to make him the man he is today.He was not going to tell her how he felt because she would leave Maan for him.That was a promise they made long time a go.

Flashback

"Prem wada karo,ke agar tumhain mere liye koi bhi ehsaas mehsoos hua to tum mujhe batao ge"A 16 year old geet asked her best friend.

"Per tum kiya karo gi Geet?"Prem asked her with great interest.

"Main tere liye sabko choor doon gi,aur tumko apnaon gi!"Geet said in a serious tone.

"Waada"Prem asked

"Paka Waada Prem"Geet said while putting her clothes away...

Present

"Kuch waade nibane bohot mushkil hotain hain geet"Prem wishpered to himself.with that he left for the main house,where everyone had breakfest.

Making his way to the dining table,he watched as Maan looked at him with confusion and sadness.He knew Maan would try to get information out of him.Although Maan was not the only one who noticed,Geet came to his side to pour some coffe in to his cup,and looked at him with pain."Are Prem tum main kiya hua hai,tum toh itne happy se rehte ho.Aaj itne chup."Geet asked while touching his head trying to find out if he had a fever.

"Geet,apne kaam se kaam rakho samjhi tum"With that Prem took his coffe and left out of the house.

Geet on the other hand had tears streaming down her face.Maan made his way towards her and let her cry."Shhh Jaan woh pereshan lag raha tha.Chalo aab yeh anso ko rokho.Tum bhi eik ankh se Atlantic ocean bah rahi ho,toh dosri se pacific ocean.acha baba main baath karon ga.okay"Geet noded her head while hugging him tightly.

Savtri Devi knew something bad was going to happen soon,she saw it comming.She knew Prem for a couple of years and he had never yelled at anyone like that.The only time she saw someone yell at their friend like that was when Maan..."oh no!"This ca not be good,I have to talk to Geet.

Maan went searching for his friend,he knew now that he liked Geet more then anything in the world.He already knew it a long time ago,but he let it go.He could not watch Prem hurt like that,he was always there for Maan.He would do anything for him,but he wanted his friend back.

"Preeeemmmmm,kahan hai mera jigeri yaar?Aao na chalo batao kiya hua.Geet roo roo ker pagal ho rahi hai!"Maan walked in to his room,and saw him sleeping.

"Sari raath utha raha hoga,yeh pagal larki sirf mujhe nai pagal kerti."Maan slowly saw Prem shivering and put a blanket on him.

Maan made his way to Geets room and saw her in the biggest dilema of her life.Can anyone Guess?She could not choose the right sari."Geet kiya hua,sari koi si bhi pahne lo na"Maan said while comming up to her and wrapping his hands around her waist.

"Maan,mera mazak maath urao!"Geet said while wiggling out of his grasp,clearly in a bad mood.

"Acha dekho main chose kerta hoon,tum jao aur shower lo,aur haan apne baal khule rakhna.Mujhe in se khelna acha lagta hai.Especially jab yeh tumhare chehre ko chupati hain.Mujhe tumhein choone ki excuse milti hai!"Maan gave her a peck on the cheek and pushed her in to the washroom.

Maan chose a simple yet elegant black sari,it would make her look goregous.He was putting away the sari when something fell out of the closet.It was a picture of geet in her wedding dress,and the man beside her looked familliar.No Way!That man looked like Dev,and thas when his world began to spin.Quickly composing himself,he put the picture back.OH NO NO NO!It was Dev who decieved Geet,but Dev was already married and......Naintara,it was her who did this.It all made sense,Naintara comming to his office and taking Geets file.Oh no no noo!Geet will hate him now!

Flashback

"Main baghwan nai hoon,per main kabhi bhi ushe admi aur uski biwi ko maaf karoon gi.Aur uski family ko bhi nai."Geet said while making soup for herself and Maan.

"Na kerna,uske agar behn bhai bhi hue toh bhi na kerna Maaf."Maan said in anger.

Present

"Maan sari abhi do ge,yah kal."Maan snapped out of it and handed the sari to Geet.

"Geet mujhe koi kaam per gaya hai,tum tayar ho ker office chali jao!"He shouted to Geet and rushed out.😭

Sorry for any errors guys!

Edited by Noori93 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
wonderfull work..really grt effort..prem 😆😆😆
good choice ..another hunk in geets life..hmmm
plz continue soon
love
muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
excellent.thx 4 the pm.the update is awesome.do pm me the next part.thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
really enjoyed ur updates looking forward 2 more 😊 great job
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
awesome..totally rocking...
loved it really nice
keep writing 👏👏👏

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