SR OS: My Take! (It end here: page 93) - Page 3

😲 whaattttttt???? i am too shocked to respond......as i was reading it...i hoped this wldnt happen......then riddhima decides to tell sid her feelings...n i get this hope...just like riddhima..bt then..........

thanks for the pm though n plz continue soon

Originally posted by: nine2

😲 whaattttttt???? i am too shocked to respond......as i was reading it...i hoped this wldnt happen......then riddhima decides to tell sid her feelings...n i get this hope...just like riddhima..bt then..........

thanks for the pm though n plz continue soon

LOL! keep reading and dunt worry none of the other planned twists are this heart breaking everything is gonna be smooth frm this point forward bt a bit more effort on my side. Hope i dnt disappoint u guys!

Originally posted by: Dsntmatter

Part 2 (okay ppl this is very long AGAIN! sorry)

Story moves as:
After their talk in the hospital Riddhima sees a different Sid, she begins to see the Sid she taught she had lost due to her mistakes. The cheerful lively and understanding Sid ws back in her life.

Date scene (SR)
Riddhima: aaj hum kahan jaa rahey hain?

Sid: chup jhap beitney ka kya logi? Main kabse samjha raha hoon ke SURPRISE hai! Surprise hai riddhima surprise hai.

Riddhima: aisa bhi kya surprise? Ghar se nikley huey addha ganta hua hai aur tum abh tak mujhe sarkon par gooma rahey ho! Wait a minute! Sid kya tum raasta bhool gaye ho?

(Sid shakes his head and smiles at her as she stares at him waiting for a reply)

Riddhima: Sid!

Sid: kya?

Riddhima: bano mat! Batao raasta bhool gaye ho? Hum gum gaye hain? Tumhey pata hai ke hum kahan jaa rahey hain? Yeh road kahan jaata hai?

Sid: pehley wala sawal kya tha? Bhool gaya.

Riddhima shoves him playfully

Riddhima: mujhe chalaney do ghadi! sid mujhe car chalaney do.

Sid: do bar bologi toh matlab nahin badley ga.

(Riddhima close to her chudail mode)

Riddhima: Sid gadi rokho! Mujhe chala na hai

(Seeing tht her cries werent really paid much heed she decides to take the matter in her hand and wrestles for the steering wheel. Their hands touch and they share a quick eyelock. Sid thn looks ahead and saves the car frm a forth coming lorry. he looks at Riddhima and amused by her frightened expression)

Sid: arrey meri senior doc dar gayi?

(pulls her for a hug)

Sid: waisey bhi waqt kam hai aur meri to aaj....

(Sid decides to let go of wht he ws abt to say)

House scene (SR)

Sid stops the car near a someone's house and Riddhima dazed looks around.

Riddhima: yahan kyun?

Sid: well meri senior doc aapkey pati dev raasta bhatak gaye hain.

(he gets out of the car b4 Riddhima gts a chance to speak)

Riddhima: Sid hum aisey kaisey aadhi raat ko kissey ke ghar jaa saktey hain? Agar woh so rahey ho toh?

Sid: ghar ki khirki zyada oonchi nahin lagti hai. Leken Riddhima tumharey heels problem ban saktey hain?

Riddhima: kya? Merey heels? Problem?

Sid: abh khirki se andhar jaana ho toh thodi bohot zehmat toh karni hogi.

Riddhima: Sid!

(They reach the door and find a lock on it)

Riddhima: abh kya?

Sid: abh khidki!

Riddhima:Sid! Seriously abh kya karein?

(she find him looking at the khidki and measuring the height)

Riddhima: Sid!

Sid: dekho Riddhima hum koi dhaka toh daalney waley hai nahin aur thaandh se marna ka irada mein rakta nahin toh situatuion mein best outcome yahi hai!

Riddhima: Sid mein kuch bhi karoongi leken woh nahin. Car mein wapas chaltein hain

Sid: haan takey phir se AC sey harmful gas nikhley aur mujhe sheesha todh ke tumhey bachana padey

Riddhima: Sid main....

(her voice trails off as she begins to consider the idea)

Sid: come on (takes her by the hand and pulls her toward the window. Sid takes off his sneaker and makes Riddhima wear)

Sid: abh yeh hospital hai nahin toh peron mein cuts aayeingey toh mein kya karoon?

(Riddhima smiles seeing his care and love for her. She climbs the window first with Sid's help and thn Sid climbs in. All of a sudden the lights turn on and Riddhima is shocked to see Anjali and the whole hospital there)

Sid: acha laga?

Riddhima: merey liye?

Sid: nahin pados ke billee ke liye!

Sid: waisey acha laga?

Riddhima: haan

Sid: mujhe location sey problem thi leken Anji ney kaha key yeh jaga best hai iss liye.

Riddhima: kya location?

Sid: aapkey naye ghar ka Mrs Modi

Riddhima: What?! sid par yeh kab aur....

Sid (cuts in): neighbours achey hain, mall bhi paas mein hai aur sabse achi baat mein bohot door i mean paas hojaoonga.

(pulls her for a tight hug. Riddhima taken aback by his gift still think tht they have alot of memories in their previous home)

After Party scene (SR)

Riddhima at their home packing. She is packing not only packing her clothes bt along with tht her memories. Sid clearing the room hastily, sid banging on the door and their date! Thinking of all this tears roll down her eyes. Sid enters.

Sid: Riddhima main tumhey khush karney ki koshish mein laga hoon aur tum....

Riddhima: Sid tumse mujhe zindagi har khushi millee hai. Sid mainey kitna tumey hurt kiya leken tumney ek bar bhi mujhe....

Sid: Riddhima tumney kabhi mujhe dard deney ki koshish nahin ki woh haalat hi kuch aisey the

Riddhima: hamari bohot yaadein iss ghar mein hain

Sid: ghar mein hain ghar se nahin! Nayi yaadein banjayi gi!

New house scene (SR and Anjali)

Sid: aur woh picture wahan lagao

(Anjali confused looks at her and Riddhimaz picture)

Anjali: Sid iss picture mein main achi nahin lag rahi!

Sid: Anjali shayad tumey mainey abhi tak bataya nahin leken mujhe Riddhima ka chehra dekhna hai. Tum toh picture mein ho issliye bear kar loonga.

Anjali: how mean!

(enters Riddhima)

Riddhima: yeh sab kya hai?!

(shocked to see all the walls and every possible space for picture filled with hers and her family. She stands there absorbing all tht with her wedding picture [yes fellow SRians its the same one they always look at] in her hand. Sid on the other hand looks at her confused as though he hadnt realised wht she ws talking abt)

Riddhima: Sid tum jaantey ho main kya keh rahi hoon!

Sid: kya? Tumey pictures achi nahin lagi?

(a hopeless Riddhima looks to anjali)

Riddhima: Di! Aapsey yeh umeed nahin thi

Anjali: Ridzy yahan meri pictures bhi lagi hain

Sid: takkey jab main aapsey bore ho jaaoon toh Saali saheba pe concentrate karsakoon

(Riddhima stares him down and Sids grin wipes off)

Riddhima: par tumhari ek bhi picture nahin hai.

Sid: mujhe tumhey dekhney ka shoq hai khud ko nahin!

Riddhima: par mujhe toh hai na!

(she looks down as soon as she realises wht she has said and Sid's face brightens up)

Sid: meri...

Anjali (cuts in): please merey samney yeh sab nahin ho sakta!

(Anjali walks off)

Riddhima: Sid! Mujhe iss picture keliye jaga chahiye. Mujhe hamari shaadi ki pic ke liye jaaga chahiye. Yeh kahan raahega?

Sid taps his chest (heart area): yahan.

Riddhima: Sid aisa nahin ho sakta!

Sid: aisa hi hoga. Yeh tumharey pati ka aadesh hai.

hospital scene (Sid and Anjali and ArSh)
A little update on ArSh. Armaan has realised tht he loves Shilpa bt Shilpa on the other hand is pissed at him for using her to fool Siddhima

Anjali: kab batao gey ussey?

Sid: himmat nahin ho rahi.

(tears roll down her eyes. Enters ArSh)

Shilpa: Sid mujhe iss ke saath duty nahin karna

Armaan: dekho Sid mujhe iss elava kissi ke saath duty nahin karna.

Shilpa: Sid please. Aur Armaan please mujhe ghussa mat dilao

Armaan: ghussa? Aur main? Sid mujhe samajh mein nahin aata ke log mujhpe itna ilzaam kyun lagatey hain. Tu bhi waisey ilzamwaley list mein shamil hai.

Sid: apology ke taur par aaj Shilpa Malhotra ki duty Armaan Malik ke saath hogi.

Armaan: waisey Sid Malhotra ke jagey Shilpa Malik zyada acha nahin sound karta?

Shilpa: bilkul nahin!

Armaan: main tumhey propose nahin kar raha bas bol raha tha ke acha SOUND karta hai. Log bhi aaj kal baat ko kahan se kahan leke jaatey hain.

End of part 2. Hope i didnt disappoint u guys!

Believe me I was not bored to read this beautiful OS. I enjoyed every part and think myself there when I was reading your OS.

Originally posted by: barkha_31390

<font color="#990033">nice update..........</font>

<font color="#990033">plzzzz dont kill sid yaar.....& update it soon....
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ASAP! will try!

And @papia : thnx! I really did appreciate ur coment and btw thnk u for correcting me! I dnt noe the difference between an OS and FF! so thnx!

Originally posted by: sidma_love

<font color="#cc0099">Nice update dear</font></strong>

<strong><font color="#cc0099">but plzzz don't kill Sid 😭</font>

<font color="#cc0099">continue soon.......</font>

Thank you, and dunt worry Sid is my personal favourite. I wnt do any injustice in his share of my OS!

😭😭😭😭😭 Today i just started ur OS

Originally posted by: kiran255

😭

</div><font color="#cc0066">Today i just started ur OS </font>
<div><font color="#cc0066">love it the 2 parts were awesome but the third whta have u done</font>

<font color="#cc0066">i m shocked </font>

<font color="#cc0066">plz plz make it a happy ending </font>

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<font color="#cc0066"><strong>and plz pm me when u update :pp</font>

LOL! dunt worry its a happy ending bt has sad twists! n trust me i wud want nothing more thn Siddhima so keep reading the next part is a bit more sad bt after tht it picks up pace! n ur happy endings comes too! n thnk u for liking the previous two parts!

Part 4 (i noe part 3 killed ur expectations frm me bt bear with me)

Story moves as:
Days have passed by since Sid's death and everyone expressed their sorrow in a way or another. Anjali cried for she lost a new found friend and the base of her sisters life. Shilpa cried because her sister lost her life in tht one incident she blamed her self and Armaan for. Armaan cried for he lost a brother and his best frendz husband and Shilpa seemed even more distanced as she blamed themselves for wht had happended. Riddhima hadnt cried. The one person who everyone cried for hadnt cried. Her grief had gone to an extent where no reaction could be equivalent to her pain. Life itself ws sealed for her. She had reached the dead end of life where there ws no turning back. Everything seemed lifeless when Riddhima walked by.

Hospital scene
Anjali (thinking to herself): kya karoon Riddhima ko doon ya nahin doon. Sid ney toh aisey situation ke barey mein kuch nahin kaha tha. Abh kya.

(She asks a nurse where Riddhima was and the nurse replies she had gone home)

Road scene (Anjie and Riddhima)

Riddhima in her house. She looks around the newly furnished house. The house which Sid had bought for her. The house which held none of their memories. There were only her and her family's pictures. It was as though Sid had never lived there. There was nothing to speak of his presence in the house. No playstation no cricket bat nothing tht cud be labelled as his. And this made the house empty although it was fully furnished. The emptiness provokes Riddhima to get out of the house. It was as though she didnt belong there. She takes a walk to a nearby hill front. Riddhima close to a hill top sits and thinks.

Riddhima: Sid. Woh ek naam jo meri har ek khushi aur gham ka waja ban chuka hai. Jo mit ke bhi meri zindagi seh mit nahin paya. Aisey ghut ghut ke jheeney seh toh maut behter hogi. Shayad aisey beybunyad aur bewaja zindagi seh woh maut hi behtar hogi. Akhir kyun jiyun mein kis keliye jeeyun. Kya faida aisey jeeney ka jab Sid hi nahin.

(Riddhima in a desperate attempt to exterminate the pain she begins to walk towards the end of the hill, forgetting all else tht mattered in her life bt wht ws the significance of else when compared to Sid.
Anjali on the other hand reaches and is abt to witness her sisters suicide attempt. She dsnt spare a minute and stops her in mid way.)

Riddhima: Di! Chodo mujhe

Anjali: aur kya? Takkey tum yahan seh jump kardo. Tum hari zindagi toh khatam hojaye gi leken hum sab ka kya. Riddhima kya hamara koi matlab nahin tumhari zindagi mein. Kya tumhari zindagi sirf aur sirf tumhari hai?

(Riddhima falls to her on her knees)

Riddhima: toh mein aur kya karoon Di.... Sab kuch jaisey khatam hogaya. Jaisey woh har ek ehsaas jis ke liye mein jeena chahti thi abh un ehsaason ka koi matlab nahin raha kyunki woh ehsaas abh dard dey thi hai. Sab kuch khatam.....

(Riddhima faints)

Hospital scene (Riddhima, ArSh and Anjali)
Riddhima is brought to the hospital. Shilpa hears abt wht has happnd to Riddhima and once again blames herself for it. Armaan tries to console her but she on the other hand gts mad at Armaan and a fight errupts between the two. Later on Armaan, Shilpa and Anjali are all in the cafe of the hospital discussing wht has happedned to Riddhima.

Anjali: its just so sad. Sid kabhi bhi nahin chahega ke Riddhima aisey react karey. Kabhi bhi usney yeh nahin socha hoga ke Riddhima tarah seh haar manjaye gi.

Armaan: mujhe bhi yaqeen nahin horaha hai ke Riddhima aisa karegi.

Shilpa: Riddhima di peh bohot kuch bohot kam waqt mein bheeta hai shayad issi waja seh woh haar man gayi ho.

Anjali: leken sab seh zyada jo baat mujhe darra rahi hai woh yahi hai ke Riddhima abh tak nahin royi hai. She hasnt cried Armaan.

Shilpa: kuch bhi karkey di ko apna gham express karna hoga. She needs to express in an unharmful way. Par kaisey...

Armaan: main Riddhima ko rulawunga. I will make her cry....

Room no.108 scene (Armaan, Riddhima, Anjali and Shilpa )

Armaan: hey basket (he nw says in a frendly manner, lets nt gt offended)

(Riddhima dsnt bother move or say anything)

Armaan: abh kya reply bhi nahin karogi

Riddhima: kya kahoon

Armaan: Riddhima tumhara Sid margaya hai.

(Armaan waits for a reaction bt Ridzy disappoints him)

Armaan: tumhara Sid Riddhima. Jis Sid ke liye tum ussey ladi wahi Sid abh nahin raha. Arrey Sid ki zindagi mein tum ney apni jagah zabardasti banali wo Sid iss dunya ko chod ke chala gaya..

(despite his pleas Riddhima still dsnt nt give him the reaction he ws hoping for. Armaan loses his calm and with tears flowing dwn his eyes shakes Riddhima in an attempt to bring her close to reality.)

Armaan: Riddhima tum samajh kyun nahin rahi ho...

(Enters Shilpa and Anjie)

Riddhima: dard bohot hota hai... Jab bhi saas leti toh yaad aata keh Sid abh yeh kabhi nahin kar payega...

Anjali (angry): dard hota hai. Iss dard ke liye tum apni jaan leyna chahti thi. Dard toh tabh zyada hota hai jabh dard ka ehsaas khatam hojata hai. Jab dard keh hum itney paas hotey hain ke uss key honey na honey seh hamey faraq nahin partha. Jab dard mein bhi hum haas paye tabh dard zyada hota hai. Aisey dard seh Sid guzar raha tha. Tummey kya lagta hai ke Sid ki maut achanak thi... Nahin Riddhima ussey pata tha keh woh marney wala hai. Uss keh dil mein cheht (hole) tha, ussey apni anevali maut ka khabar pehley seh tha. Jab tum dono ki dobara shaadi honey wali tabhi Sid ney kuch tests kiye they jis ka result tumharey shaadi keh ek din baad aaye aur unn results ney Sid ke bachi kuch umeedon ko bhi thod diya...

(she stops seeing Riddhima and realising wht she had done to her. Riddhima ws in an upright position in her bed but yet seemed crumbled. Her broken heart ws stabbed once more. So Sid ws going through all tht... She thought miserably and knew there was nothing she could do to console him nw. Nothing could be done to repair the damage. She saw Sid's pain thn. Much greater thn hers yet she could see an ounce of it on his face. She hadnt seen his perfectly composed expression break once. Not even once had he let go of his charade.
Now Riddhima began to understand everything. Every unexplained incident gt an explanation. Sid gt her a house when she didnt wanna move. He seemed to very inconsiderately forget the fact tht they shared their most precious memories in their old house. Not one single picture of his was in their new home. He was purposefully removing every memory of his from their home. Or more precisely from her life. It was as though he wanted rid her of all her memories, to force himself out of her life. She felt pangs of pain as she realises tht he lived for her when it was hardest and died for when he wanted to live most)

Riddhima (bearly audible): kya uss din... Pahari peh... Usko dard horaha tha..

Anjali: nahin pata... Poochney ka moqqa nahin milla.

Riddhima: par woh... He looked fine..

Anjali: he needed a heart transplant surgery par hona nahin paya kyunki ussney... apni... (she cudnt continue and didnt need to)

Anjali: Ridzy ussney tumharey liye kuch videos chod rakey hain.. Kaha tha key agar Riddhima merey baad apney aap ko sambhal nahin paye toh yeh ussey dey dena..

Cafe scene (Anjali, Armaan and Shilpa)

Armaan: kaisi videos?

Anjali: hospital seh jab sab employees chaley jaatey they toh mein aur Sid Riddhima ke liye videos bana the kyunki Sid kehta tha keh agar Riddhima ussey bhool na paye toh phir ussey wapas aana hoga.

Shilpa: par yeh videos pehley kyun nahin..

Anjali: kyun ki Sid neh kaha tha ke agar Riddhima ussey videos ke baghair bhoola payi toh phir usey woh sab deyney ki zaroorat nahin leken agar woh boola nahin payi tho phir...

(Anjali begins to cry and an already cryin Shilpa realises hw much Sid cared for Riddhima and Armaan respect grows even more for Sid)

*guys I noe this part ws a bit pakao! Bt it ws necessary for the next part. And as to wht Sid has done in his videos keep reading!
Acha n one more thing: guys I really dunno hu all wnt me to PM thm so if u guys wanna on the permanent PM list thn PM me or leave a comment which ever is more convenient.