SR OS: My Take! (It end here: page 93)

Nw wht wud we wnt if the second Siddhima marriage dsnt go according to plan? I noe it wud definitely shatter our hopes of quick bright future (point to be noted: i said quick bright future which means i lost hopes for quick bt i still hope fr a bright future). So nw hw wud we wnt the story to progress. This is my melodramatic take on hw the story shud progress:

Sid and Riddhima are all set for their second marriage. So far every rasam has been taken care of with perfection by Anjali (guys recollect! she ws supportive of 1st SR marriage). Things fall in their place like they belong there.

Wedding night scene. (Sid and Anjali)

Sid: mujhe pata hai ke woh mujhse pyar karti hai leken kabhi kabar uska Armaan ke liye yun pareshaan hona.....
(looks down and nt sure hw to continue)

Anjali: Sid shayad jissey tum concern samajh rahey ho woh shayad guilt hai. Woh aagey barna chahti hai tumharey saath leken Armaan ki haalat zeemey daar woh apney aap ko manti hai.

Sid: Anjali main nahin kehta ke woh Armaan ke dard ko bhool jaaye kyunke main jaanta hoon ke kahin na kahin hum dono uss dard ke zimmeydaar hain par woh merey saath apney pareshani ko share karna hi nahin chahti

Anjali: sid baat ko...

(enters JP huffing and puffing)

JP: Sid bhaiya riddhima phlowerji toh bhagayi. Hamrah matlab hai ke unka phone aaya aur woh daur teh daur teh chali gayi!

Sid: phone?! Kya phone? Kiska phone aaya?

JP: Armaan ka...

(Sid gives one last pain struck look to Anjali and heads off)

Story moves as:
Sid arrives at hospital to find a drunk unconcious Armaan in the general ward. Pain begins to sketch on his face when he sees a tearful Riddhima by his side.
Sid and Riddhima silently take care of the paper work due for Armaan's discharge and exchange a few formal words when extremely necessary.

Sid's place scene. (SR)
Riddhima: Sid tumey samajh na hoga ke mainey jaan bhujh ke kuch nahin kiya. Mainey tummey phone karney ki koshish ki leken Sid tumhara phone off aaraha tha.

(Sid gives her continuous blank looks with no response and Riddhima gets more tensed and desperate to make him understand. She kneels beside the couche he's sitting on and takes hold of his hand)

Riddhima: tumse zyada mein aur kissi sey bhi...

Sid (cuts in): tum explanation deti thakti nahin aur mein explanation sunthey thaktha nahin. Leken aaj nahin Riddhima. Aaj mein thak chuka hoon. Aaj mujh mein himmat nahin rahi. Aaj mujhe kuch zyada hi dard hua. Shayad hum ek dusrey ko dhuk deney ke liya miletey.

Riddhima: Sid main...

(her voice trails off as Sid walks off)

Story moves as:
Riddhima tries desperately to talk to Sid the next morning bt Sid far too hurt by last night's incident leaves for hospital.

hospital scene (SR)
a tearful Sid sits on a bench near examination room. Riddhima thinking he is pain struck because of last night walks by his side and sits next to him. Sid still in tears dsnt realise shez next to him. Riddhima clears her thraot to pull his attention. Sid looks up immediately and wipes off his tears.

Sid: tum kab aayi?

Riddhima: zyada deir nahin hua hai

Sid: der toh hogaya hai Riddhima

(Riddhima is struck with agony as she realises wht he meant)

Riddhima: Sid deir nahin hua hai abh bhi sab kuch badal saktha hai. Tumhey bas mujhe ek aur moqaa deyna hoga. Sid bas ek akhri bar mujh pe barosa karo.

(Sid puts his finger on her lips and shez taken aback by the fresh set of tears in his eyes)

Sid: akhri bar mein kab tumhey bola ke mein tumse pyar kartha hoon?

(Riddhima still in shock cnt reply.)

Sid: well u noe wht? Mein karta hoon. Bohot pyar karta hoon tumse. Sirf tumse. Kabhi bhi mainey tumse zyada ya pehley kissi ke barrey mein nahin socha.

(he bends on his knee takes hold of her hand)

Sid: tum samajh sakti hona main kya keh raha hon?

(Riddhima has tears following frm her eyes and can only reply with a nod)

Sid: aaj ke baad sab acha hoga. Main tumhey woh sari khushyan doonga. Main woh sab karoonga jo shayad main kar nahin paya aaj tak.

(the camera thn moves to the other end of the corridor where Anjali is found crying)

Should I go ahead with part 2?

*Sorry I jus realised its a bit long! bt part 2 will be better!

Part 2: page 2
Part 3: page 4
Part 4: page 5
Part 5: page 6
Part 6: page 7
Part 7: page 9
Part 8: page 11

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I have written Im jus waiting for the ending cuz it aint coming right!

Part 2 (okay ppl this is very long AGAIN! sorry)

Story moves as:
After their talk in the hospital Riddhima sees a different Sid, she begins to see the Sid she taught she had lost due to her mistakes. The cheerful lively and understanding Sid ws back in her life.

Date scene (SR)
Riddhima: aaj hum kahan jaa rahey hain?

Sid: chup jhap beitney ka kya logi? Main kabse samjha raha hoon ke SURPRISE hai! Surprise hai riddhima surprise hai.

Riddhima: aisa bhi kya surprise? Ghar se nikley huey addha ganta hua hai aur tum abh tak mujhe sarkon par gooma rahey ho! Wait a minute! Sid kya tum raasta bhool gaye ho?

(Sid shakes his head and smiles at her as she stares at him waiting for a reply)

Riddhima: Sid!

Sid: kya?

Riddhima: bano mat! Batao raasta bhool gaye ho? Hum gum gaye hain? Tumhey pata hai ke hum kahan jaa rahey hain? Yeh road kahan jaata hai?

Sid: pehley wala sawal kya tha? Bhool gaya.

Riddhima shoves him playfully

Riddhima: mujhe chalaney do ghadi! sid mujhe car chalaney do.

Sid: do bar bologi toh matlab nahin badley ga.

(Riddhima close to her chudail mode)

Riddhima: Sid gadi rokho! Mujhe chala na hai

(Seeing tht her cries werent really paid much heed she decides to take the matter in her hand and wrestles for the steering wheel. Their hands touch and they share a quick eyelock. Sid thn looks ahead and saves the car frm a forth coming lorry. he looks at Riddhima and amused by her frightened expression)

Sid: arrey meri senior doc dar gayi?

(pulls her for a hug)

Sid: waisey bhi waqt kam hai aur meri to aaj....

(Sid decides to let go of wht he ws abt to say)

House scene (SR)

Sid stops the car near a someone's house and Riddhima dazed looks around.

Riddhima: yahan kyun?

Sid: well meri senior doc aapkey pati dev raasta bhatak gaye hain.

(he gets out of the car b4 Riddhima gts a chance to speak)

Riddhima: Sid hum aisey kaisey aadhi raat ko kissey ke ghar jaa saktey hain? Agar woh so rahey ho toh?

Sid: ghar ki khirki zyada oonchi nahin lagti hai. Leken Riddhima tumharey heels problem ban saktey hain?

Riddhima: kya? Merey heels? Problem?

Sid: abh khirki se andhar jaana ho toh thodi bohot zehmat toh karni hogi.

Riddhima: Sid!

(They reach the door and find a lock on it)

Riddhima: abh kya?

Sid: abh khidki!

Riddhima:Sid! Seriously abh kya karein?

(she find him looking at the khidki and measuring the height)

Riddhima: Sid!

Sid: dekho Riddhima hum koi dhaka toh daalney waley hai nahin aur thaandh se marna ka irada mein rakta nahin toh situatuion mein best outcome yahi hai!

Riddhima: Sid mein kuch bhi karoongi leken woh nahin. Car mein wapas chaltein hain

Sid: haan takey phir se AC sey harmful gas nikhley aur mujhe sheesha todh ke tumhey bachana padey

Riddhima: Sid main....

(her voice trails off as she begins to consider the idea)

Sid: come on (takes her by the hand and pulls her toward the window. Sid takes off his sneaker and makes Riddhima wear)

Sid: abh yeh hospital hai nahin toh peron mein cuts aayeingey toh mein kya karoon?

(Riddhima smiles seeing his care and love for her. She climbs the window first with Sid's help and thn Sid climbs in. All of a sudden the lights turn on and Riddhima is shocked to see Anjali and the whole hospital there)

Sid: acha laga?

Riddhima: merey liye?

Sid: nahin pados ke billee ke liye!

Sid: waisey acha laga?

Riddhima: haan

Sid: mujhe location sey problem thi leken Anji ney kaha key yeh jaga best hai iss liye.

Riddhima: kya location?

Sid: aapkey naye ghar ka Mrs Modi

Riddhima: What?! sid par yeh kab aur....

Sid (cuts in): neighbours achey hain, mall bhi paas mein hai aur sabse achi baat mein bohot door i mean paas hojaoonga.

(pulls her for a tight hug. Riddhima taken aback by his gift still think tht they have alot of memories in their previous home)

After Party scene (SR)

Riddhima at their home packing. She is packing not only packing her clothes bt along with tht her memories. Sid clearing the room hastily, sid banging on the door and their date! Thinking of all this tears roll down her eyes. Sid enters.

Sid: Riddhima main tumhey khush karney ki koshish mein laga hoon aur tum....

Riddhima: Sid tumse mujhe zindagi har khushi millee hai. Sid mainey kitna tumey hurt kiya leken tumney ek bar bhi mujhe....

Sid: Riddhima tumney kabhi mujhe dard deney ki koshish nahin ki woh haalat hi kuch aisey the

Riddhima: hamari bohot yaadein iss ghar mein hain

Sid: ghar mein hain ghar se nahin! Nayi yaadein banjayi gi!

New house scene (SR and Anjali)

Sid: aur woh picture wahan lagao

(Anjali confused looks at her and Riddhimaz picture)

Anjali: Sid iss picture mein main achi nahin lag rahi!

Sid: Anjali shayad tumey mainey abhi tak bataya nahin leken mujhe Riddhima ka chehra dekhna hai. Tum toh picture mein ho issliye bear kar loonga.

Anjali: how mean!

(enters Riddhima)

Riddhima: yeh sab kya hai?!

(shocked to see all the walls and every possible space for picture filled with hers and her family. She stands there absorbing all tht with her wedding picture [yes fellow SRians its the same one they always look at] in her hand. Sid on the other hand looks at her confused as though he hadnt realised wht she ws talking abt)

Riddhima: Sid tum jaantey ho main kya keh rahi hoon!

Sid: kya? Tumey pictures achi nahin lagi?

(a hopeless Riddhima looks to anjali)

Riddhima: Di! Aapsey yeh umeed nahin thi

Anjali: Ridzy yahan meri pictures bhi lagi hain

Sid: takkey jab main aapsey bore ho jaaoon toh Saali saheba pe concentrate karsakoon

(Riddhima stares him down and Sids grin wipes off)

Riddhima: par tumhari ek bhi picture nahin hai.

Sid: mujhe tumhey dekhney ka shoq hai khud ko nahin!

Riddhima: par mujhe toh hai na!

(she looks down as soon as she realises wht she has said and Sid's face brightens up)

Sid: meri...

Anjali (cuts in): please merey samney yeh sab nahin ho sakta!

(Anjali walks off)

Riddhima: Sid! Mujhe iss picture keliye jaga chahiye. Mujhe hamari shaadi ki pic ke liye jaaga chahiye. Yeh kahan raahega?

Sid taps his chest (heart area): yahan.

Riddhima: Sid aisa nahin ho sakta!

Sid: aisa hi hoga. Yeh tumharey pati ka aadesh hai.

hospital scene (Sid and Anjali and ArSh)
A little update on ArSh. Armaan has realised tht he loves Shilpa bt Shilpa on the other hand is pissed at him for using her to fool Siddhima

Anjali: kab batao gey ussey?

Sid: himmat nahin ho rahi.

(tears roll down her eyes. Enters ArSh)

Shilpa: Sid mujhe iss ke saath duty nahin karna

Armaan: dekho Sid mujhe iss elava kissi ke saath duty nahin karna.

Shilpa: Sid please. Aur Armaan please mujhe ghussa mat dilao

Armaan: ghussa? Aur main? Sid mujhe samajh mein nahin aata ke log mujhpe itna ilzaam kyun lagatey hain. Tu bhi waisey ilzamwaley list mein shamil hai.

Sid: apology ke taur par aaj Shilpa Malhotra ki duty Armaan Malik ke saath hogi.

Armaan: waisey Sid Malhotra ke jagey Shilpa Malik zyada acha nahin sound karta?

Shilpa: bilkul nahin!

Armaan: main tumhey propose nahin kar raha bas bol raha tha ke acha SOUND karta hai. Log bhi aaj kal baat ko kahan se kahan leke jaatey hain.

End of part 2. Hope i didnt disappoint u guys!

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nice job...i liked ur ff...very sweet of sid to buy new house...n loved the ArSh convo...it was very cute...Plz continue soon n dont forget ot pm me