SR OS: My Take! (It end here: page 93) - Page 16

Originally posted by: monty22

nice update. i like the convo between Sid , bubly aunty ... it was hillarious. thanks so much for PM. waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: kiran255

Hey Zohal
first of all its not a odd name its a unique name
just like ur OS 😊
i though alot i was dam sure k TAm will be a lil girl
but girl u give me a shock 😭
SId getting engaged to Tam actually was going to ,
im sure it wont happen 🤢
aww my poor RIdhima just get numb seeing all this ,
and omg BUBLY aunty she is soooo much like irritating aunty
which can be found in every khandan 😉:PP
but just loved Sid answer to her :)
im super excited for next update cuz so wana know what will happen next
superb update 👏
love sid - RId and hate all (just the characters love ur os )😃
Thanks for pming dear 😳

Originally posted by: ...Noorya...

very nice update

but why tamana is back???😕 she was already engaged to aniket right? ...or did u changed the whole story??

anyways i still liked it its a good twist and Sid's convo with aunty was hilarious😆

Originally posted by: nine2

hi first of all..i'm really sorry 4 the late reply...i was really buzy past couple of days...

n back to ur part..hahaha...i loved it....well was upset the fact that sid doesnt remember anything...bt atleast he n tam didnt get engaged...loved his response to that aunty...lol...grt job n thanks for the pm n plz continue soon:)

Kiran Aunty Bubly is dedicated to all those *amazing aunts* of ours tht make an issue of every insignificant incident.

Part 13

So nw Sid is in his parking lot thinking hw did he managed to ruin everything he himself had worked so hard for. He turned to find Riddhima holding onto his arm as though she ws holding onto life itself. He forgets all else and curiosity takes his better half.

Sid: jst to let u know jis aadhmi ki andhar mangni thooti hai uska naam Siddhant Modi hai.

Riddhima: Sid tum mujhe apna introduction kyun dey rahey ho?

Sid: kyun ki normally main strangers ko apna naam bata tha hoon khaas kar un strangers ko jin ke liye mainey apni mangni todi ho.

Riddhima: Sid!

Sid: acha abh jokes aside tum batao tum ho kaun? Houston mein merey saath parti thi kya?

Riddhima: tumharah kabse seh main intezaar kar rahi thi aur tum...us larki ke...saath (tears roll dwn her cheeks)

Sid: acha acha tum rona band karo aur yeh pichley janam ka drama bhi.

Riddhima: Sid!

Sid: what?

Riddhima: chalo merey saath!

Sid: kahan?

Riddhima: ghar.... Hamarah ghar. Jis mein hum rehtey they.

Sid: hum? Main aur tum walah hum?

Riddhima: haan.

(Sid raises an eye brow waiting for her to continue and Riddhima folds her arms as if there is nothing left to say.)

Sid: aur?

Riddhima: aur kya? Abh apney ghar janey ke liye bhi reason ki zaroorat pareygi?

Sid: Houstan? Tumhey Houstan jaana hai? Woh bhi ek anjaaney keh saath? Yaar dikh ney mein toh bilkul abla nari type lagti ho aur iradey.....

(he grins)

Riddhima: Sid!

Sid: Tum waisey mujhe merey nickname seh kaisey aur kab jaanti ho.

Riddhima: aath mahiney pehley.

Sid: Kya? Sapney mein ho keh jaag rahi ho.

Riddhima: jab mujhe pata chalega toh sab seh pehley tumhey bataoongi.

(Sid bends dwn and lowers his voice and says)

Sid: drugs ka kuch chal raha hai kya?

Riddhima: Sid!

(Sid begins to say something bt thn sees Riddhima cudnt hold herself together. He gives her support and holds her by the shoulders as she passes out.)

Sid: iska intro hamesha roney dhoney walah hota hai aur exit behoshi ki halat mein hota hai. Drugs ka case lag raha hai mujhe.... Leken dhikney mein sidhi sadhi lagti hai.

(Nevertheless Sid carries her and takes her to her house where he meets Dr. Shashank and is surprised to know tht she ws Dr. Shashank's daughter.

Riddhima wakes up and is devastated to find Sid missing again. She looks around the house and Dr. Shanky tells her to take a seat next to him. He thn very carefully breaks the news to Riddhima tht Sid has lost his memory. Riddhima absorbs the news in the coming days as she begins to remember hw Sid had behaved in the past few days. But cud amnesia be strong enough to ruin wht they shared. Could it be strong enough to cause Sid to forgt his love. Riddhima ws surrounded by questions. She didnt noe hw to react bt she had to find out who Tamanna ws and wht she meant to Sid. She goes to Tamanna's house.)

Tamanna house scene (SR, Tamanna and Bubly Aunty)

Sid: Tamanna tumhey samajhna hoga ki mainey jo kuch woh halat ki wajas seh..

Tamanna: halat? Sid halat? So thts it. ur gonna blame it all on halat?

Sid: abh main kya kar sakta hoon agar...

Tamanna (cuts in): jo bhi ho Sid. Tumhey aisa nahin karna chahiye tha. Uss larki ki...

Sid (cuts in): Riddhima.

Tamanna: kya?

Sid: uska naam Riddhima hai.

Tamanna: mujhe laga tha keh tumey ussey jaantey nahin ho.

Bubly Aunty: laga toh hamey bohot kuch tha beti leken kuch log sanskar aur maryada dono bhool gaye hain.

Sid: aunty do logon keh beech mein nahin bola kartey. Yeh aapkey sanskaar aur maryaada nahin sikhatey. Iss umar mein aapko main yeh sab sikha raha hoon.

Bubly Aunty: baat do logon abh teen logon keh beech mein hai.

Sid: aap ko awkward feel nahin hota? Nahin mera matlab aap bina wajah bebunyad baatein karti hai woh bhi tabh jab conversation aapseh door door tak related naa ho.

Tamanna: tum yeh sab kehney aaye they?

Sid: nahin Tamanna. Woh tumhari Aunty har baat mein taang araa thi.... I mean interfere karti hai toh mainey bolna zaroori samjha.

Bubly Aunty: arrey tum kyun bahir karhi ho. Tumhey toh andhar aana chahiye. Actually mujhe nahir jaana chahiye kyun ke yahan baat toh tumharey barey mein chal rahi hai.

(Sid and Tamanna both turn around to find Riddhima standing by the door. Anuty Bubly leaves finally and Riddhima also turns to leave.)

Tamanna: ek minute.

Sid: Arrey yaar! Mujhe toh laga tha tumseh peecha chootgaya tha!

Riddhima: Main yahan sirf itna jaaney aayi hoon keh yeh larki kaun hai?

Tamanna: aur aap kis haq seh Sid seh aisey sawal kar rahi ho?!

Riddhima: Sid. Yeh kaun hai?

Sid: yeh Tam hai woh'

Tamanna: Tum issey sach much mein explanation dey rahey ho keh main kaun hoon? Sid kya hua hai tumhey?

Sid: Good Point.

Tamanna: Tum itni aasani seh ussey jawab deyney ke liye tayar kaisey huey?

Sid: abh woh pooch rahi thi toh main bataney wala tha iss mein itna ghussa honey ki kya zaroorat hai? Don't u think aaj kal tum kuch zyada hi overact kar rahi ho.

Tamanna: Iss larki ko bolo yahan sej chali jaye.

Riddhima: Yeh kaun hai Sid?

Tamanna: Sid tumney suna nahin?

Sid: Suna! Tum dono ka kaha suna abh mujhe sochney dogi?

Tamanna: Sid main akhiri bar pooch rahi hoon keh yeh kaun hai?

Sid: aur main akhiri baar bata raha hoon keh mujhe nahin pata..

Riddhima: Main chali jaoongi bas itna bata do keh yeh kaun hai Sid.

Tamanna: tum hoti kaun ho yeh sab poochney wali?

Riddhima: Sid ki Patni!

(The room ws filled with silence for a brief moment after the hour long fuss. Sid looked at Riddhima and shock ws crossing over his face. Tamanna chose to look at Sid.)

Sid: okay ma'am aapko immediate medical care ki zaroorat hai.

Riddhima: dekho'

Tamanna: kya? Tumhey merey mangetar ko apna pati bata tey huey dekhoon?

Sid: Tam, main baat karoon?!

(Sid takes Riddhima by the hand and takes her to a room next to the sitting area. It ws quieter here and Riddhima silently watched Sid move around. Sid on the other hand ws making sure nobody ws listening to their conversation.)

Sid: Acha! Toh abh WOH KYA THA??!! I mean yeh kaisa tariqa hai Thanks bolney ka. Main tumhari madat karta hoon aur tum''.woh larki wahan meri mangetar hai! Aur tum uskey samney! I mean do din nahin huey hai hamey milley aur tum keh rahi ho keh tum meri patni ho!

Riddhima: Kyun keh Main Hoon. Sid aur yeh baat tum badal nahin saktey!

Sid: Okay tum meri decency ka ghalat fayda utta rahi ho?

Riddhima (red with anger and already in her chudail mood): Main ghalat fayda?!! Tumhey pata bhi hai keh mainey tumhari khatir kya kuch nahin kiya sirf iss liye kyun keh mujhe lagta tha keh abh main aur kuch nahin kar sakti tumharey liye!

Pehley, Main kisi anjaan road peh bas seh utri aur miles and miles pedal chali phir main ney ek jodshi ko man handle kiya! Phir kisi shop ko mainey force kiya tumhari CDs play karney ke liye aur as if tht wsnt enough! Main Rahul seh bhi shaadi keh liye tayar thi! TUMHAREY LIYE! Aur tum yahan peh kisi aur seh mangni kar rahey ho aur mujhe decency ka bhashan dey rahey ho!

Issliye mujhe mat kaho keh mujhe kya krna chahiye!

Sid (lets out a puff of air): nw I will pretend I understood wht all u said.

Riddhima: UGHHH!

(Holds his wrist and pulls him out of the house. She drags him in the car and drives off to her house)

Sid: Man handling, yeh kya tumharey bachpan she shoq raha hai?

Riddhima: Sid!

Sid: Nahin I ws admiring keh tumney kitney confidence seh mujhe ghar seh kidnap karkey pata nahin kahan lekey jaa rahi ho? Should I be concerned regarding my izzat? I mean irada toh nekh hai na?

Riddhima: Sab kuch bhool gaya hai leken sense of humour nahin bhoola

Sid: Kuch kaha kya?

Riddhima: Nahin.

Sid: hum kahan jaa rahey hain?

Riddhima: jab phonche jaayengey toh bata doongi

Sid: tabh toh mujhe bhi pata chal jaaye ga.

Riddhima: in tht case kindly patience bar qarar rakho.

Sid: Patience?! Word aati hai tumhey?! Mujhe yaqeen nahin horaha! Spell karkey batao!

Riddhima: Sid!

Sid: theek hai spelling nahin toh satisfaction keliye definition toh dey hi sakti ho.

Riddhima: Sid!

*Sorry this ws a bit longer thn usual!

Originally posted by: monty22

u made my weekend....... 😛

hai Mrs. modi kidnapped my Siddy Widdy....😲

amazing part...... update soon......plzzzzz

nice update.......🤗😊

Atleast v can b happy reading SR OS's .......coz d show sucks ryt now.........

update soon...........