SR OS: My Take! (It end here: page 93) - Page 18

Originally posted by: xxdevilishxx

I wanted to press the like button a thousand times! It was just that good! :)

You better update soon, because quite like Riddhima I have no patience. :]

Thanks for the PM, btw.

Originally posted by: QueenbeePallavi

hehehe... riddhima actually kidnapped sid then!!!

mazaa agaya... good work there and the way she sadi "sid ki patni"...

wow tamanna was just bowled out...keep it up

Originally posted by: nine2

hahah loved it..had been mssing sid ridz nok joks....thanks for writing a beautiful part even after that crappy news...i loved sids answer to that aunty...n rids mein sid ki patni hoon....n the expression on sid tams faces...love this playful sid...worrying abt his izzat...lol...n of course the patience spelling n definition...lol...thanks once again...can't wait to read next part...is ridz gonna show them their marriage pics n pics/videos of their life n the CDs he left for her?..really looking forward to next part..plz continue soon :)

Part 14

Riddhima had dragged Sid inside her car and driven off to their home. Their actual home where thier memories resided. Riddhima grabs Sid's hand who ws confused and looking for way to escape.

Siddhima house scene (SR)

Sid: mujhe pata hai keh tumhey explantion deyney ki aadat nahin hai par phir abh jab tumney ek nojawan koh aagwah karhi liya toh ussey bata bhi do ki usskey saath kya honey walah hai.

(Riddhima jst gives him drop dead look)

Sid: Meri tasalli ke liye bata do..... Please?!

Riddhima: hamari kuch yaadein hain yahan jis ki madat seh main tumhe tumhari yaadasht deyney ki koshish karoongi.

Sid: oh kay leken let me warn u in advance keh mujhe kuch yaad aaney walah hai nahin.

Riddhima: aisa kaisey keh saktey ho?

Sid: tumseh pehley mainey khud bohot koshish ki keh mujhe kuch yaad aajaye par nahin aaya! Mujhe jis din doctors ney bataya keh meri yaadasht ka ek hissa hai jissey main yaad nahin kar paraha tabh seh mainey bohot koshish ki leken believe me there ws nothing i cud remember. Its like jab computer mein koi virus phel tha hai aur sari memory khatam kardey thi hai bilkul waisey hi mera system crash hogaya hai!

(Riddhima ws looking at him bt didnt take his warning seriously she ws thinking of wht all would help him gt his memory back)

Sid: u noe wht? aaj takh mainey itna khulkey kisi sey apni memory ki baat nahin ki. Tam seh karta leken phir ussey lagta keh main apney aaj seh zyada kal mein interested hoon... waghairah wghairah. But with u, its easy. Tu shayad utni buri nahin ho jitna main soch rakha tha haan kabhi kabhar darra thi ho leken phir ur nt totally unbearable.

Riddhima: toh abh jab itna keh diya hai toh yeh bhi bata do keh main issey compliment samjhoo ya insult?

Sid: insult kam compliment.

(They both laugh quietly. Riddhima for the first time in a long time laughs again. It felt good to by Sid's side again. She may hav nt been in his good books bt she enjoyed it every bit. Just knowing tht he is there ws all tht mattered. she takes him to their room which is upstairs)

Sid: toh yeh mera kamra tha?

Riddhima: Hamarah, Mera au tumharah yaani Hamara

Sid: okay... abh tumhari expectations phir seh bhar rahi hain

(with a jolt Riddhima throws a box towards him with their wedding card and marriage certificate and all sorts of documents. Sid walks over and picks up the box.
He holds the box uncertain whether to open it or nt. Bt he opens it anyways. He sees the documents, his name and signature on each one. And shock crosses over his face)

Sid: yeh main hoon? Yeh main kiya hai! par kyun?! main aisa kyun karronga? Main toh Tamanna keh saath tha..... par woh chali gayi usske baad....

(Riddhima comes forward when she sees Sid cnt hold himself and cups his face in her hands)

Riddhima: uskey baad hum milley!

(Sid pulls back)

Sid: toh isska matlab hai keh tum meri patni ho?! Mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahin aaraha hai! Meri shaadi hui hai? Main shaadi shuda hoon. Aur main kissi aur seh.... Aissa kaisey aur kyun?! Mujhe toh bas itna yaad hai keh main Tamanna ko pasand karney lagaya tha... aur uske baad kuch nahin.

Riddhima: kya matlab?!

(Riddhima begins to realise tht Tamanna ws a part of Sid's past. The past she did nt exist in anymore. She wanted to know more)

Riddhima: Tamanna aur tum? kabseh Sid?

Sid: meri shaadi... kab?..

(She realises tht he ws forcing himself to remember and as a doctor she knew it wud nt a hav a healthy outcome.)

Riddhima: Tamanna keh baarey mein batao.

Sid: Tamanna? Seriously?! Tumharey pati ko aaj pata chala hai keh tum uski patni ho aur tumhey Tam keh baarey mein jaanna hai?

Riddhima: Haan.

(she knew tht she cud make Sid talk about Tam to gt his mind off the marriage deal all she had to do ws be persistent and stubborn)

Riddhima: toh tum aur TAM kahan milley

(Sid laughed at the way she stressed when calling Tamanna by her nickname)

Riddhima: I take it th u dnt wnt to tell me

Sid: nahin its nt like tht par it jst tht mujhe abhi pata chala hai keh meri SHAADI hui hai!

Riddhima: toh ur jst gonna avoid!

Sid: OKAY! Tamanna aur main bohot mpehley milley they. Kaisey poocho mat kyun keh mujhe yaad nahin.

Riddhima: abh yeh bhi bhool gaye?

Sid: mujhe chot lagi aur main yaadasht bhool gaya iss mein meri kya ghalti hai? leken nahin iss mein bhi meri ghalti dhoondh lo... dhoondh ney wale koh toh sab kuch milta hai

Riddhima: iss mein chalo maan liya tumhari ghalti nahin hai leken uss din jab main behosh hui thi toh tumhey utt keh jaaney ki kya zaroorat thi. Rookh nahin saktey they merey lliye?

Sid: Im sorry leken kal thak mujhe pata nahin tha ke main tumhara pati hoon iss liye mujhe nahin pata tha keh mein kiss haq seh rukh tha.

Riddhima: Jaisey tum rookh naa chahtey they

Sid: Good Point.

Riddhima: toh phir?

(Sid raises his eyebrow)

Sid: phir kya?

Riddhima: Tamanna....

Sid: oh haan woh... well hum milley dost banney aur main ussey pasand karney lagg gaya

Riddhima: pasand?! tum ussey pasand karney lagg gaye? itni jaldi tum ussey pasand bhi karney lagg gaye?

(Riddhima ws furious with jealousy)

Sid: pata nahin.... I mean confused tha main! Kuch pata nahin tha ke kal kya karna hai aur phir Tamanna seh milla aur toda bohot samajh mein aaya..

Riddhima: toh it ws an attraction thing ryt!...

Sid (now offended): nahin nahin it ws love!

Riddhima: was?

Sid: oh meri grammar teacher Maaf Kardo mujhe!

(Riddhima's heart ws nw at peace because she ws assured of Sid's love fr her)

Riddhima: acha phir?

Sid: nothing. Bas usskey baad mujhe yaad nahin... Tamanna neh batay keh she left for Canada cuz we had misunderstanding and nw everything is cleared. Seriously speaking main jaanna hi nahin jaa tha keh hua kya tha cuz back thn I had regualr head aches everytime I tried to remember anything or anyone.

Riddhima: aur abh?

Sid: Not so bad! waisey tum mujhseh kab milli thi?

Riddhima: jab tumhey sab kuch yaad rehta tha!

Sid: Funny! Hilarious!

Riddhima (laughing at Sid's sarcasm): hum airport peh milley 9 months ago..

Sid: hey! tht ws around the same time Tam had left!

(Riddhima's jolly and excited expression gets ruined and Sid laughs)

Riddhima: Main nahin ata rahi..

(She gts up to leave. Sid follows her)

Sid: Come on! bata do na.

Riddhima: TAM seh kyun nahin poochtey? waisey bhi usski yaad bohot aarahi hai tumhey.

Sid: haan leken ussey yeh sab toh pata nahin hoga naa? Aur meri memory todi weak hai...

Riddhima: Toh main tumhari last resort hoon?! no other options issliye mujh seh baat kar rahey ho?

Sid: toh tumhey kya laga?

Riddhima: Yeh (she stomps on his foot and walks away)

(Sid crouches holding his foot and calls out her name)

Sid: Riddhima itney lambey heels pehney ki kya zaroorat hai? aur itni kya jaldi hai tumhey? kaunsa Mars peh jaa kar india ka jaandah ghaaar ney jaa rahi ho?

Riddhima: Heels lambey hain kyunkeh stomp karney mein zyada maza aata hai aur jaa iss liye rahi hoon kyun keh rookh ney wajah nahin hai.

(Sid glides past her infront of the exit. Puts on an innocent face and widens his eyes)

Sid: nahin hai? mujhe yahan aakela chodo gi?

Riddhima: acha?! Sid ko company ki zaroorat hai? akela par jaye ga Sid?

(Sid nods keeping his innocent face in check. Riddhima takes a step forward)

Riddhima: well then TAM ko phone karo cuz u need to noe keh main saath deyney wali larkiyon mein seh hoon company deyney walon mein seh nahin.

(she turns and walks away and Sid laughs again at hw she stresses on "Tam")

Sid: par main toh company deyney waley larkon mein seh hoon naa.... Arrey Riddhima kahan jaa rahi ho?

Riddhima: tumharey barey mein ek chota sa fact tum company deyney walon mein seh nahin ho! Aur btw main doctor hoon toh kaam toh hoga hi abh sab keh paas sick leave toh nahin hai naa Dr.Siddhant Modi!

Sid: urawoh urawoh meri bimari ka aur mazaq urawoh.

(Riddhima laughs and leaves while Sid tries till the very last moment to persuade her to stay with him with his innocent home sick looks but she leaves.
He is left behind and he thinks of wht he had done during the day! He found out he has a wife. The person he thought ws a druggy till yesterday ws nw his supposed wife and instead of reacting in a natural way, he laughed with her. He thought of hw they had met for the first time on the bench. How her frightened yet joyful expression taunted him for nights. How he had wished to see her once more and bingo she appears! He didnt understand wht or why he felt this "something" for her bt it ws definitely there. He believed he loved Tamanna bt cudnt deny tht Riddhima had already become some special to him. Someone he termed as friend bt deep down he knew tht it wsnt friendship, it cudnt be because in order for u to like a friend tht much u need to know but Sid didnt noe her!
He tries to nt smile at her thought bt he cudnt since this smile ws given by Riddhima and he cudnt stop nor sense wht ws happening to him)

*Alryt ppl this ws long and may nt hav been as funny as the others bt thnkx for viewing and Noori I wud like to use ur anjaana anjaani VM in one of the parts if thts nt a problem with u! hope u gt this! And nine2 the reason why she didnt show him the CDs is because Sid in the previous parts had asked her to burn thm and she did so she didnt hav anything of tht sort!
Kiran dnt worry I havnt bid farewell to ur favourite aunt! shez still in the picture!

And I shall be adding alot of ppl as buddies since I keep forgetting to PM alot of ppl! One of the victims of my memory jab ws sidma_love!! So dnt reject my buddy invitation!

(nw the last line sounded so desperate! lol)

nice update..........🤗

loved it nd loved d jealous Riddhima Modi.........

update soon..........