FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 4

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sona rai

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Posted: 15 years ago

#881

sorry for late reply yaar😊loved both parts a lot👏enjoying office romance again👍🏼awesome writeup👏

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ansah

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Posted: 15 years ago

#882

hey...that was so good 👏👏👏

i really loved it....maaneet

romance was so good....

this pari is so annoying....

hope no misunderstanding....

between maaneet....

keep writing.....😳

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febinyusuff

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Posted: 15 years ago

#883

hmmm hmm.. dear I can't stop myself from reading it over again n again.. I will comment l8r honey :)

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jyotesna

@JYOTESNA

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Posted: 15 years ago

#884

nice update...but still waiting for those three magical word. after the bomb blast maan was so willing to hear those words but what had happen now he look least interested......

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Aleena

@cute-aly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#885

me again

part 113 is

relly like 1st scene

maan - tum kabhi kuch nahi poochthi? maan comes closer to her
geet - ise liya uska faida utha the ho? she turns away
maan - geet tumhe patha hain aise kuch nahi hain..
geet was having fun troubling maan..she smiled inwards
geet - mujhe to kabhi kuch pata hi nahi challen dethe aap...(that was deeper)
maan calms himself..tumne yanh job kabse join kiya (maan was not liking this
sudden distance between them..he wanted to be part of everything atleast after
he took the oaths again)
geet - kyun aap ke jaasos ne nahi bathaya aap ko?
maan - GEEEEET he is ur body gaurd not ur spy...
geet - wat ever..she walks away...
maan - (wat ever..he mummers)main kuch pooch raha hoon tumse?
geet - its been a week now..
maan - mujhe bathna bhi zaroori nahi samjha?(his voice had pain)
geet - aap ke paas time knaha meri baathoo ke liya...(complaining..tone..maan actually liked
that she complained..) maan kept quite...he knew he was little too preoccupied over
the week & geet did try telling him in the afternoon too..

Arjun looked at the details & handed over to geet..he wispered few points to her
maan could'nt stand the sight of Arjun actually being warm towards geet

maan voiced out..tum aise kaise soch sakhthi ho...
Arjun - kaun kaise soch raha hain Mr. Khurana?
maan was dumbstuck...he looked at geet..complaining eyes..(phasa diya na mujhe)

maan - tum usko sir kyun bolthi rahthi hoo
geet - maan ..woo mera boss hain...
maan - mera ko khabhi sir nahi khaha ?? main bhi to tumhara boss tha?
geet - aap bhoolen honghi ki humari shaadhi hui thi..main to nahi bhooli thina
phir main kyun aap ko sir kahthi...

geet wispered yeh kya kar rahe hain aap....
maan - main kya karoon..tum samne aathi hoo to mujhe patha nahi kya hoja tha hain..
geet opens the file..& points ...maan looks at her..& takes in her forever seducing scent.

geet got to a point where Arjun was to take over
she looked at him.. Arjun continued the accounts part..maan continued
looking at geet..she avoided meeting his gaze..she knew if she sees him..
she won't be able to hold back..her gaze..she looked at him for brief moment & their
eyes stuck..

conti soon

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bluedreamz953

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Posted: 15 years ago

#886

just read the previous two parts...they're great...lolz maan was really cute di...lovely updates..thanks

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Noor Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#887

nice update

geet has started kissing maan in office 😆

loved the update

cont. soon

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uzmam1

@uzmam1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#888

Muskan,

always love your updates ..

in fact they are my daily dose of Maaneet so that i can cope all day .. till the episode in the evening!!

love the jealous interaction between Geet and Maan!!

and she kissed him in the meeting!! lol!!

eagerly awaiting your next update!!

Uzma xx

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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#889

great work muskan 👏when maan says ktm kb bata rahi ho apny boss ko hamary baray mein then geet replied k ap kb bata rahy hain pari ko i loved that lines😆hmm and the picxx are also gud😊waitmg for next part muskan😍