FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 4 - Page 36

Originally posted by: muskanp

sweet cherry - thanxs yaar..working on the update

arthirajendiran - nakul...i know..cute na..

FIRESafiReFIRE - yah that will be perfect..just working on that part..

lovelycutietedy - keep guessing

rituka7 - thanxs

sireesha.- my fav. too..

loveangle_4ever - weekend was busy..shall pm u soon...
waiting for ur response

ansah - that is really motivating..

desigurl953- maan does'nt know wat to tell her...

fatima - thanxs yaar

navpreet - trying to make it a special..not sure how but..

kashndsel4eva - glad u liked did..geet is crying UMMM!!!

JYOTESNA - thanxs dear

raisa159 - thanxs

Tressa - glad u caught up..

Uzma - thanxs ..glad u liked it

susana - working on it..dear

simran - thanxs dear

dhrashtee - geet crying..umm!!!

jennifer1993 - thanxs

wajiha-1 - thanxs dear

Sigma - another tiny miny twist

thanxs u guys... love muskan

beta why don't u guys have some coffee..
all of them move to the hall..geet excuses herself ..tells smriti she needs to arrange for
evening pooja..she says bye to every one & leaves

part 104

it was 6pm ..maan was wondereing where geet was..he called her phone
maan - where are u geet
geet - humesha ki tarah aap ke peecha maan..
maan turned ..their eyes met...their gaze were locked..his hand
reached for her waist & pulled her closer..
maan - tum hamesha mujhe kyun chood kar chali jathi ho?
she was lost looking into his eyes which had become deeper since last night
& his touch was adding to his emotions..
geet eyes seem to weaken & close..maan held her arms
geet - I am feeling dizzy
maan - why did u have to do nirjal vrat
she did'nt reply..& probably he knew the answere too..

maan took her to the bed room & made her lie on the bed..
he sat next to her & continued to work...
she got up at 11pm...
geet - why did'nt u wake me up..we had to go to the temple
maan(looked concerned) - how are u feeling now..
geet - mujhe mandir jaana hain..
maan - but u are quite weak
geet - we are going now...
maan - aacha ..let me change

they changed & reached the temple..they sat through the bhajan
aarthi ..geet sat next to the ladies..& maan stood across..near the pillar
there was also a complete narration of lord krishna's birth
and his childhood ..it was past midnight..the narration was stopped
to be continue after celebrating krishna's arrival...
The cradle containing the divine infant's idol is rocked, conch is blown..
maan & geet togather rocked the cradle..maan looked at geet..she looked
pale & weak..strangely she looked sad...maan got concernd
Devotees sing Krishna arti, some people read out 108 names of lord krishna
They get totally immersed in the name and praise of Gopala...

then they continued with the narration...they came to the part of
yashodha & krishna..yashodha's love ..motherhood..

geet became restless..maan suggested if she wanted they could go home
geet silently accepted..she was quite & looked disturbed..
maan kept glancing at her..silently..he knew wat bothered her..did'nt
want to say a word..that could break the ice...

as they reached the house..geet walked in first..maan parked the car
& rushed to the room..she was not their..he knew where she was..
he closed his eyes in pain & ran to the guest room..
he could'nt see her breaking down..this is wat he wanted..
he wanted her to come out of her hidden sorrows..but seeing her

geet - nahi aap kuch kaa loo(in a weak voice)
maan took her to the kitchen instead..made her drink some water first..
he served the dinner in the plate & fed her..
geet - mera man nahi hain..& cried again
maan wiped her tears & mera bhi man nahi hain..
geet took a small portion & fed him he turned his head..geet
took her other hand & pulled his hand & guided him to feed her..
then maan opened his mouth too...they had their meal feeling lighter
at heart yet heavy in their eyes..

they went to their room..geet was restless & turning in her sleep..
maan tried comfarting her..every time she turned..
this is was the first time they ever spoke about khushi...
that had taken him ..moved him really close to her walled heart..
he realized how much she holds back her feelings & pain..this out busrt
was much needed but maan was touched deeply by her emotions..how much
she feels lonely & insecured he realized..

precap
geet job hunting

a brillinat and heartbreaking update.........

Originally posted by: revav

a brillinat and heartbreaking update.........

the pics added to the intensity of the sequence...........

overall a beautiful and emotional update

thnxxxxxxxxxxxxx

reva

Originally posted by: kooliio

Amazing update!!! It was really an emotional part!! Poor geet!!!
Can't wait for the next part. Pls cont.soon!!!