~IBAADAT~ New FF. Part 2 Pg. 17

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shalini_s

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Pallo.. nice start.. do PM me..

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Maria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

continue soon yaar...............

do pm when u update

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

omg! After reading the prologue, i can't wait to see what happens next. I really hope that you continue. And please pm me when you update this. thanks

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Hi all....
Okay Pallo whipped up ur first part....Hope it shocks you people!!! Those of you who are looking for the tears....a little patience huh....I calculate the tear rate after analyzing the laugh rate!!!! Fair enuff ryt?🤣

PART 1

"What did I do to deserve this lifetime penalty???" Sam stomped into the dining room.

Viren Handa looked up at his 13yr old son. Samar Handa was a 'BOY'.The introduction said it all. Sports, buddies, X-box, junk food, treats, pranks, fights, bruises...His life was packed. Sam woke every morning complaining about his sister and hit the bed cursing her.

Viren saw his daughter follow Sam into the room. She was dressed in a baby blue white striped tee shirt and a white skirt that fell just below her knees. She looked downright pretty with a capital P. Geet Handa was what every father hoped his girl didn't turn into!!!

She was always the talk of the town and never for the right reasons.

"What has Geet done now?" Viren asked looking at his son.

Sam hoisted himself on the chair and picked up an apple.

"Made me believe is the KARMA theory. What we do goes around and gets back to us," Sam sighed and dug his pearly white teeth into the fruit.

"That's an achievement Geet and your only one at that. I am sure now Sam's occasionally used brains will now have better mileage."

Viren was tired of being the refree of their never ending match. He hated standing as jobless spectator while the crossfire ceaselessly continued.

Geet rolled her eyes and picked up the newspaper lying on the table. She didn't want to indulge in another worthless fight with her whacked up brother. Today was an important day. She needed to remain calm and composed.

"Geet, the offer from Mr. Khanna is still open," Viren tried to drum up genuine concern in his voice.

"Pa I already told you that I will take my final decision tonight."

Viren shrugged his shoulder and offhandedly informed "Tonight you have to be there are Piyush's engagement party. Don't make a late entry..."

Sam's eyes lit up at the mention of party but he resisted the urge to burst into words. They could wait till his snob of a sister made her much waited exit.

The clear ringing of the door bell shattered the heavy silence that has enveloped the dining table. Geet threw the paper down and hurried to attend the bell.

" We are getting late....You ready?"

"Bye Pa...me going for my social work. Will be back at night" Geet's voice floated to the dinning room where the two males sat with expressions dipped in 'Like-we-care' mode.

Geet left.

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"Google....!!!!!"

Maan pushed open the doors and strode in. It wasn't everyday he got past the Main Hall without Google forcefully accomplishing his LICKy job!!!

Maan's eyes digested the sight before him. The hall was a mess. Crystals crashed and Google standing amidst the mess with a constipated expression. "Google" his pet Alsatian was looking upwards suspiciously and as if he was in pain.

"Google" Maan hurried forward sensing something amiss in Google's expression. But the dog refused to budge. "Strange..." muttered Maan. Till date he never had to walk upto Google. It had always been the other way round.

"Wonders never cease," he muttered and scooped the creature up in his strong arms.

It was then he noticed the gooey substance flowing forth from Google's mouth. He rubbed his fingers over it and felt the viscosity.

"Adhesive...Fevi-quick?!!!?!?!?!" he wondered aloud.

It took two minutes for the fact to sink in....He had been burglarized.

"Great timing!"

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"Where are we? 1970s?" Geet sneered surveying the massive fort that stood before her. The place yelled antiquity. Somehow Geet's brain couldn't imagine a party being held in there.

Piyush was their elder cousin. Geet stifled a yawn and entered the fort.

She was greeted with blasting music. She could see thousands of known faces she would be obliged to smile at, but she decided to skip the chore. It had been a tiring day.

And to add to her misery Viren had been constantly calling her up giving timely reminders of this party. Geet had slipped into a black halter neck dress which complimented her skin richly. Her hair was tamed by a clip with some loose fringes falling on her face.

She decided to slip out and reappear in another hour or so. She messaged Sam and made for the door she had just come in through five minutes back.

"Ouch!"

Geet dashed into a figure just entering the party. She looked up to see the "BLIND MORON" but her string of names withered in her throat.

He was wearing a Armani suit that emphasized the width of his broad shoulders and fitted his lean body to perfection. He stopped cold and cut her a quick impatient look.

Geet's eyes trailed over him. His mouth was beautifully sculpted...just to kiss a girl senseless. His discerning mocha eyes were staring back at her. An spicy scent emanated from him creating a weird tingling in Geet. His looks rivaled with Grecian Gods. An unsettling carnal energy laced with an impossible raw masculinity wrapped around him.

A businessman who oozed SENSUAL charisma....Correction who defined sensual charisma.

Geet noticed that little furrow resting on his forehead. It signalled impatience or bad mood. His face felt vaguely familiar. Geet searched the depths of her brain...and excavated the shocking information-MAAN KHURANA!!!!

"I am sorry."

His voice reached her, thawing her frozen senses. Geet gulped in a deserving breath of air. He shot her another look and walked into the party.

He was the guy she had tediously robbed at noon. The guy with an insufferably sharp dog!!!!

Pallo😆

Edited by livelygal - 15 years ago

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Updated.......

OMG.....Pallo...brilliant!! Geet just robbed Maan......hmmmmm!! I would love to see Maan's expression if he only knew!!! Yeh Geet to ITEM hain.....truly One of a Kind.....and i dear say we have just seen the first layer to her character. Looking forward to the next part!!!!

Edited by --Nargis-- - 15 years ago

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Nice pro

Liked Maan n Geet's meet

It was Geet who did that halat of Maan's dog

Liked Geet n Sam's relation

Update soon😉

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

yay doggy's nam is google soon we'l have face book tooo nice update baak ka with next update!!!

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

SHE ROBBED HIM?!?! Now I'm very amused with this story; enjoyed the first part and continue soon please!👏👏👏👏

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uzmam1

@uzmam1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Hay!!

Gutsy Geet but chorni bhi!!

Ab to Maan ke ghar ke saath saath .. uska dil bhi churai gi yeh!!!

Now i am curious to know whats gonna happen next!!!

Uzma xx

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152265

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

PALLO?

Earth to Pallo where do u get such ideas from??? 👏
She robbed him? Awww bad girl Geet LOLZZZZ!? Her characterization is horrednously different!
The ROFL factor in ur update remains there though! UGHHH SIGH
MSK has made an entry fellow friends!
Sam is her lil bro? HHAHAHAHAHA he seems to have more sense than his older sis who is a supposed robber . . . . .
Very interesting . . .
Can MSK fall for Geet first in this FF? Just wondering LOLZZZZZZ
GREAT AS USUAL! UPDATE LIKE NOW!!! It was to short and u waited 10 pages and than updated! PSHHH

LOLZZZZ and jks
No tears yet? I am good with that 👍🏼

Love,

LIZ

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