~IBAADAT~ New FF. Part 2 Pg. 17

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smiliey

@smiliey

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

pallo,
thanks for the pm.. n congrats on ur new story... sounds interesting...

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Endless_sky

@Endless_sky

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#82

this is a really interseting ff update soon and do pm i liked for last ff and i am sure i will like this one to. good luck

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

simply awesome........

thanks for churning out such yummy FF and updates.......

looking forward for some action, drama in upcoming updates

reva

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@Mrs.Hulk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

hey pallo😛

Loved the part
maan-geet 1st meeting was great😃😆
will love to read more😳
keep continue
thanks for the PM😛

love ya
prinz😳

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love_lavnya

@love_lavnya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Hey,

poll great to see u with new ff It's looking intrested I know u r great writer hope this ff will also rocks gud luck dear and do pm always to me

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Aakriti Srivastava

@aakritisri1111

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

awesome update pallo loved d maaneet first meet. pls update next part soon

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deejagi

@deejagi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

Hi Pallo, nice beginning. Great yaar, here people do Social work (theft) in the morning and socializing in the night. Reverse technology to the normal set of People. Wow what a nice idea to stop the dog from barking. None the thieves new this technology Pallo, why don't you file technology for royalty. You will good lot of money. Or give me the rights, I will write this in, in any one of the Kannada online paper and we will find the technology be in use in less than 2 days. All along they knew to feed the dogs Biscuits, meat balls etc. None had your super brain to use Fevi quick. hats off Pallo.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
btw, how did Maan manage to clean it up, I mean Google's mouth. Aks him to use luke warm water that helps a lot.
So their encounter was yet another disaster. btw what does she do with the loot? distribute the same to the needy? rob the wealthy and feed the under privileged"

it is quite interesting. Will wait for the next.

Jaya

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saranya

@nehara

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#88

hey..

awesome update...

loved the first chapter...

geet robbed maan... he he... woder if he will get to know abt it...

i really cnt wait to read the next update..

pls update soon... 😃

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Anju Sharma

@amitasaily

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Posted: 15 years ago

#89

Goodness Pallavi, I know that I'm going to get addicted to this one too. But I've no complaints. Just one request.

Please don't abandon the FF you started in DMG Forum, Miss the Kiss. I read all the seven parts in one go and suddenly there were no more. The storyline was very interesting and I'd really want to know what happened next. So Pleeeeaaaasssseee.