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Hi all
Pallo back with another FF.
WARNING- This FF is totally different from ma previous FF. If you like change and can bear to see GEET and Maan is different light..Then only go ahead with this FF.
I must also inform you all that I will update only once a week. If I find time only then I can try updating twice or maybe even thrice. But you must be patient with me.
PROLOGUE
Geet stared into his eyes....they were the eyes of a total stranger.
"I need to go," his voice was strung with a high level of icy anger.
Geet was stumped. She had never seen this side of him. It scared her...
His eyes which had one rivaled the sun now flashed back at her in a wintry cruelty.
He pushed past her and made to walk off but she was quick enough to grab his wrist. The feel of his skin under spiraled a familiar heat through her. He froze.
"No one is perfect. Haven't you ever done anything you regretted afterward?"
His frosty gaze never wavered. "Yes."
And with that one word he knifed a gash so deep that Geet marveled she was still standing.
He regretted her.
Okay Pallo needs comments on the prologue...then only she can decide if she should continue with this FF.
*Biting her nails*
Pallo
Pallo back with another FF.
WARNING- This FF is totally different from ma previous FF. If you like change and can bear to see GEET and Maan is different light..Then only go ahead with this FF.
I must also inform you all that I will update only once a week. If I find time only then I can try updating twice or maybe even thrice. But you must be patient with me.
PROLOGUE
Geet stared into his eyes....they were the eyes of a total stranger.
"I need to go," his voice was strung with a high level of icy anger.
Geet was stumped. She had never seen this side of him. It scared her...
His eyes which had one rivaled the sun now flashed back at her in a wintry cruelty.
He pushed past her and made to walk off but she was quick enough to grab his wrist. The feel of his skin under spiraled a familiar heat through her. He froze.
"No one is perfect. Haven't you ever done anything you regretted afterward?"
His frosty gaze never wavered. "Yes."
And with that one word he knifed a gash so deep that Geet marveled she was still standing.
He regretted her.
Okay Pallo needs comments on the prologue...then only she can decide if she should continue with this FF.
*Biting her nails*
Pallo
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