***ROAD TO LOVE*** (sk ff) pg 89 lst prt - Page 60

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved to see ur update after a long time. sorry dear forget abt ur bd, actually I didn't know. a belated very Happy Birthday. the update was superb. loved the shopping scene. now wht abt sujal's makeup. will he do it. continue soon............
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Posted: 14 years ago
U took soo long but the wait was worth it !
The part was very lovely !
Kashishs demands were soo sweet , but Sujals reactions were more sweeter !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

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Posted: 14 years ago
a kissssssssssssssssssss and the stupid guy!!!!
and the mehandi scene was so sweeett!!!! clearly k is head over heels for the guy
and so far gone tht she suggested he apply makeup for her...
i doubt there isnt much tht wudnt do for her.. but c'mon the man has soe dignity and above all he doesnt need it.... our bhiyaji is handsome enough.... we dont want the bride/fiance fainting if he becomes more handsome ;-)
thanks fpr the pm.... its been a long time since u updated.. now i think i shud do somehting about my own ff....
it was great reading the part... please update more now...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
Welcome back
update was very good.
Sujal and Kashish enjoy shopping together.
Kashish wants Sujal to find his name in her mehndi and how could sujal refuse.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 47 (last part)

The shaadi ka mandap is decorated royally with flowers and incense

Sujal looks like a charismatic prince in his light embroided sherwani.

Kashish enters the mandap dressed beautifully as a bride.

She looks at her groom as she is made to sit beside him after the varmala session.

She wonders why does he look gloomy , why isn't he chuckling & smiling like her. Kashish ko to effort lagana pad raha hai ki wo hass naa pade. She doesn't understand how can sujal maintain such a serious face.

The marriage happens in a grand manner, in full aristocrat style. Its complete big fat Indian wedding.

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Kashish is sitting inside her new bedroom, on his....on their bed.

She looks around the huge room which is decorated with flowers, but somewhere has a manly aura to it.

She looks at the soft bed. She thinks of choosing the side she wants.

But postpones the decision as she hears the sound of sujal's footsteps approaching her.

Sujal slowly opens the door & comes in locks the door, kashish looks down coyly.

He enters hesitantly, as he is used to finding his room empty and in a full mess.

But, today he was awestruck to see his dream come true in front of him.

He walks and sits on the bed near kashish.

Kashish looks up at him and smiles.

s-kashish

k-hmm

s-mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha

her cheeks acquire a pinkish hue.

k-kaho

s-kashish, honestly and truly main tumhe naa kabhi dukh dena chahta tha aur naa hi kabhi bhi chahunga. Main nahi chahta ki...tumhe koi....agar tumhe iss shaadi se...tum abhi bhi mujhe chodke...wo..dont worry parivaar walon ko main sambhal lunga.

Kashish is looking at him wide eyed. She cant believe a groom can say such a thing to his bride on their suhag raat.

s-kashish....i...

before he could complete his lips are sealed with her, as she locks her lips with his.

He is shocked to even react, he didn't expect this specially from kashish.

Kashish gives a nice supple kiss on his lips.

k-shhhhhhh muhh band rakha karo apna

she looks at him in an inviting manner with her eyes twinkling with seduction.

She slowly puts her hand on his cheek, slowly going close to him , almost sitting on his lap.

k-[says in a seducing whisper, with he nose touching his] jab dekho bak bak karte rehte ho, wo karo naa...jo karna hai

s-huh?...tum..ye..?

k-main to aisi hi hoon

she almost climbs on him putting her arms around his neck.

k-tumhe bina bole, I love you samajh nahi aata kya? Huh? Ullu.

s-you? You love me?

k-aur nahi to, kyun shaadi ki tumse

sujal has a stupid typo smile on his face.

K giggles seeing his cute face.

s-i also love you...a lot

she chuckles with a small blush

k-i know. Chalo ab shuru ho jao. I mean start, chalo jewellery nikaalne se start karte hain. Chalo pehle ye necklace nikaalo.

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THE END

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Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
cool part loved it neelu ab jaldise ek nayi ff shuru karo
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Posted: 14 years ago
😲 😲..last part 😲😲😲........... i am surprised 😲..... being a writer its ur wish .but wud have liked to see more in it 😊😊😊..........will miss my Suzaaal 😳😳...........
as 4 part it was good 👏👏👏........... so finally the weding 👏👏.......... u almost give sujal a heart attack 😆😆😆... oops not u kashish 😆😆..... silly boy still felt she doesn't love him 😆😆😆.....
liked the confession 😛😛😛......

wud have loved more if it wud continued more 😛😛😛........... anyways ...... an end to this means.... 😛😛😛😛..... a new 1 from u soon .....will eagerly wait 4 new 1 😃 😃..how abt a new1 in new year itself 😃😃😃.........
wishing u & ur family a very happy new year 😃😃😃



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Posted: 14 years ago
mujhe samaj nahi aa raha which ff to strt...suggest ..wht type u ppl wanna read🤓
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Posted: 14 years ago
mindblowing FF
khair i want to read some thriller,usme thora romantic shade hoga,
i know its new for u,coz tumi er aage erakhom FF lekhoni
come on, think about it, try kar sakte ho
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi
the ff is ended ohhhhh my god
but yaar tune main point pe he kun chor diya are jis ke liye itne din se wait kar rahe the us suhaag raat ko thora aur describe karte aur romantic banate par nahin
anyways i told u that write something romantic on sk and plz us mein sujal yeh druker matttttttttt banana tere har fic mein yeh sujal sharabi banta haai very monitonous plz make him a decent guy

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