FF: Admit that you love me! Part 4 Pg.14 Nov 4 - Page 6

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Hey it's very nice

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OMG that was awesome the romantic scenes between maan and geet fab i hope something like this happens in show as wel. OMG the preview!!!!!! plsss update soon and pls add me to ur pm list as well
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First of all thank you all so much for all of your comments! I wish I could have responded to them all individually but I got busy!

However to thank you here is Part 3!! It's a little short but I hope you like it!

Part 3:

Geet surprised at this abrupt change nodded slowly and took a deep breath, her fingers clutching his tightly. Then she started to tell him her story, staring with the first time Dev came to see her, their wedding, his betrayal, finding out about being pregnant, Naintara telling her to get an abortion, her family and everything else she could remember.

Maan stared at her in growing horror, his hands losing their grasp of hers. Geet didn't notice his reaction, her eyes clouded by tears as she recalled every single memory she had was trying to forget.

Finally Geet feel silent and then noticed that Maan was no longer holding her hands, she turned to look at him and noticed him staring into space, a stony look in his eyes. She lightly whispered, "Sir..."

Maan just gave a slight nod refusing to acknowledge her further. Geet bit her lip, trying to hold back tears, tired of crying all the time. She didn't say anything more waiting to see his reaction. She turned away from him unable to bear the look on his face.

The minutes seemed to move by slowly and it seemed as though hours had passed when Maan finally spoke and the only thing he said was, "What were their names?"

Geet lost in her own world, was surprised to hear him speak and just whispered, "Dev and Naintara..."

"Their last name?"

"Khuarana..."

There was no response made to this and she turned to see Maan walking out of the room without acknowledging her. She ran after him, wiping away tears and yelling his name.

"Sir! Sir! Maan!"

Her voice seemed to make no difference to him as he continued to walk down the stairs and away from her. Her steps faltered as everything seemed to blur and spin. She held on to her head as her knees buckled, unable to hold her weight and she whispered, "Maan..." before everything turned black.

***

Geet woke with a start taking in her surroundings, noticing that she was in a room she had never seen before but everything in it screamed out Maan's name. She sat still as what had happened before she blacked out came to her. She pushed the covers off herself and shakily got to her feet, holding onto the bed post. She started to take a few steps, tears starting to flow as she remembered Maan walking away. Her heart seemed to be torn in two and she wondered how she would live with such pain. Just as she took her first step, Daadi walked in.

"Geet beta! Get back into that bed right now...do you know how worried we were? And why the tears? Are you in pain?"

"We?"

"yes of course, both me and maan. "

Geet's heart skipped a beat when she heard his name but she couldn't stop the tear that escaped as she remembered him ignoring her when she told him the truth and him walking away.

Daadi noticing this came up to Geet and gently forced her to sit down on the bed and then sat next to her.

"What happened Geet? Why are you crying?

"Daadi, he left me...I told him the truth and he left..."

With that said, Geet turned and buried her face into Daadi's shoulder, her body shaking as she cried, sobs wracking her body.

Daadi surprised at this, wrapped her arms around Geet, making soothing noises and rocking her to try and calm her down.

"Geet..."

Both Daadi and Geet turned to face the door, their eyes widening in surprise.

Preview: "But I love her!"


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Edited by sakuraa - 15 years ago
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Sooooo sad part wating for the next part and thanks alot for pm
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amazing dear........... add me to your PM list
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wow that was short but nice plz cont ....
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Thats so touching
Loved it
pls continue soon

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