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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
hey anamika
awesome update
sorry 4 late reply
now arman falling 4 ridz nice nice he is so loving and caring .
ridz plz yaar kuch tu bolo tna chup chup rehna bhi accha nahi hota hai.
thanks 4 pm
update soon.
waiting 4 next update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
A DUKE AND A DUCHESS' STORY

SEGMENT ---16


MORNING

Riddhima ki need khooli to as usual arman window se aate dhoop ka torture sah raha tha....riddhima ne oothker curtain laga diye....oose night ki baaten yaad aayi....arman was singing ..........he has a sweet voice...like mohit chouhan .....

Lekin gaane ke bol ko riddhima achchi tarah samajh rahi thi..........

Kya arman ne jaan boojhker ye gana choose kiya tha or riddhima hi galat samajh rahi thi!.....but wo arman ki nazron ko achchi tarah pahchanne lagi thi........kaise pyar bhari nazron se oose dekhta hi rahta hai......ooski kitni fikr karta hai...........kabhi-kabhi gussa jaroor karta hai but kabhi bhi riddhima ko hurt nahi kiya...............

Pahle jab night ko arman room mein aata to riddhima ko bahoot dar lagta tha......agar arman ne ooske saath kuch galat kiya to bhi wo kisi ko bata nahi sakti thi....keunki arman ooska husband tha......but ab to paas mein arman rahne se khood ko jyada safe mahsoos karti hai......

Like kal night ko jab arman ne ooske joolfon ko sameta...feer ooske lips ko apni fingers se touch kiya...to oose bilkool bhi dar nahi laga.......aur feer arman ne oose bahon mein oothaker sofe per soola diya...........feer kaha "mai toomhara intjaar karoonga duck".....

To kya arman apni whole life ke liye ooska saath chahta hai?.....lekin wo to bahoot moody hai….jab chaha galey lagaya....….jab chahe chor diya………..agar wo bhi ooske papa ki tarah chorker chala jaye to?.........aur feer oonke riste ki booniyad hi jhoothi hai.....to feer wo stable kaise hoga?...........

Nahi...wo ab ye sab nahi sochegi...........jaisa chalta hai chalne do.........abhi ooske exams per concentrate hona hai..................


Aaj riddhima aur sabhi frnds atul ke ghar gaye they....……jise jo problem hota,atul solve kar deta………….

Atul : "hmmm…sabke problems khatm hue ki aur kuch baaki hai?
Rahul :"haan..…atul…humari koi problems nahi hai...….but muskan ko to kuch bhi samajh nahi aaya....…lagta hai ish baar bhi cheating karke paas karegi………….
Muskan : "choop baith kunkhajoore……………
Atul : "riddhz..kya ish baar toomhari koi bhi problem nahi hai?..her baar to sawalon se mujhe mad bana deti ho………..
Riddhima : "nahi…actually…mai roj night ko arman ke paas padhti hoon na……….
Pooja: "kya wo achcha padhata hai?
Riddhima : "bahoot achcha….wo apne year ka topper tha………
Muskan: "dekh rahul......kuch sikh arman se…....but tu to gadha hi rahega……
Rahul : "dekh muskan gadha mat bol...…..pichli baar dating per gayi thi ish liye 'idiot' bolne ka permission diya tha………

Aryan :" arey toom log fight ker time waste mat karo...……waise bhi ish baar frndship day ki party gayi..……exam jo hain……chalo guys kya kisi ko frndship day ke liye kuch kharidna hai?
Riddhima : "haan…mujhe book-shop jana hai…………

Riya:" kal se exams hain aur toom ab books kharidogi?

Riddhima:" nahi ..nahi riya…mujhe kuch comics lene hain….arman ke liye ….oose bahoot pasand hai…..
Muskan aur riya(ek saath): "hayye…mai mar jawa!!!!to ab arman ke liye bhi!!………



FRIENDSHIP DAY


Shantanu ,arman and their frnds are chatting....….

Shantanu: "pata hai arman….aaj soni ne phone kiya tha….
Arman :" very good….ooska gussa kum hua kya….
Shan: "yes…kah rahi thi…mai pahle toomse naraj thi...…but ab samajh gayi hoon toomhe farak nahi parta....…but mujhe parta hai…..ish liye ab aisa kooch karoongi ki toom mujhse jaan choota na pao……
Arman : "phone per hi sab kooch bol gayi….

Shan :" arey tujhe to pata hai….kitni bak-bak karti thi…..ab pata nahi ooske sararati dimag mein kya chal raha hai………..
Arman : "lekin dill ki bari achchi hai…….
Shan :" haan arman…ish liye mere type ki nahi hai feer bhi oose itna chahta hoon…..
Lily :" arman…aaj raat ko 'frndship day' ki khooshi mein ek party ho jaye...………

Arman : "sorry lily….feer kabhi….kal se riddhima ke exams start ho rahe hain….
Lily : "to toomhe kya?
Arman : "agar study mein koi problem ho to mai bata deta hoon…..so mera jaldi ghar jana jaroori hai……


AT NIGHT

Arman : "duck...toomhare to kal se exam hain.....kuch problems to nahi hai na………..
Riddhima :" nahi…..
Arman :" aaj frndship day tha…toomhe pata hai?
Riddhima :" haan…………
Arman :" mai humari frndship per aaj kuch dena chahta hoon….plz.mana mat karna………..
Arman riddhima ko ek painting deta hai…………

arman : "toomhe painting pasand hai na……kaisa hai dekho……






riddhima :" bahoot khoobsoorat…but ye ducks ke pic…………..
arman (naughtily): "kya karoon,duck ke pics dekhte hi toom yaad aa jati ho….what is the sign of 2 ducks?
riddhima : "nahi…….
Arman : "ye pyar ki nishani hai…..
Riddhima (changed the topic):"ye meri taraf se……….

Arman :" so sweet!toomne mujhe comics diye!....apni frndship per?.
Riddhima :" ya toomhe comics pasand hai ish liye atul ne kaha………

Arman sab samajh raha tha….khood hi layi thi aur atul ka naam le rahi thi…….
arman : "aur kiya kiya frndship day per?
riddhima : "kal mere exams hain………..
arman : "ok,sorry……but promise me exam ke baad ish tarah choop nahi rahogi……….mujhse baat karogi….
riddhima : "mai jyada nahi bolti………
arman :" ok,but meri soonogi to........
riddhima nodded her head…………….

Riddhima ke exams kal hi khatm hue they....….arman ne socha tha…papa se kahker riddhima ko lekar wah mom ke paas jayega....….isse 2 kaam honge…first---- frnds samjhenge wo honey moon per gaye hain...….secondly,shayad oonke beech jo doori hai khatm ho jaye…......arman riddhima ko achchi tarah samajh sakey and ooska dill jeet sakey………

NEXT DAY


Dr .mallick: "beta…riddhima…neeche aao beta….dekho to koun aaya hai!….
Riddhima : "ji papa……

Riddhima neeche aati hai……per wah kise dekhti hai!...ye koun oosse milne aayi hai!...ooski di! Anjali di!.......

Anjali :" kya ab meri bahan mujhe pahchan bhi nahi rahi hai?...

Riddhima aaker di se lipat jaati hai…:" di,toom mujhse milne aayi ho?...
Anjali : "mai apni bahan se mill bhi nahi sakti kya?......
Riddhima (rote hue): "itne deeno baad apni bahan ki yaad aayi?
Anji : "nahi riddhzi…but padhai chorker to nahi aa sakti thi aur tu to janti hai mom ko...….but ab mujhe wo rok nahi sakti…….

Riddhima (anji se lipatte hue):" di,ab mujhe chorker mat jaana………
Anji : "wo sab baad mein...abhi chal mere saath.... maine dr.uncle ki permission le lee hai...kuch deen hum bahne apne ghar ek saath rahenge………
Riddhima : "per arman……..
Dr.mallick: "ooski fikr mat karo....….wo mana nahi karega….toom ready ho jao…...wo aate hi oosse baat kar lena…..
Anji:" ya riddhzi…mai evening ko aaoongi...…arman se mill loongi aur toomhe le jaoongi….
Riddhima : "jaldi aana di…………..




( ANJI-RIDHZI)

Arman ne air tickets manga liye they….....ab bush papa se riddhima ko saath lekar paris jaane ki permission le lega…..papa ke kahne se riddhima bhi mana nahi karegi……..wo aaj bahoot khoosh hai……….kuch days ke liye hi sahi..riddhima ooske saath her pal rahegi……aur oose pata hai…wo riddhima ka dill jaroor jeet lega....………wo jaldi se ghar aata hai………

Riddhima kitchen mein hai…….

Arman (ander aate hue): "toom yahan ho aur mai toomhe dhoond raha hoon…...thank god!…mujhe toomse kuch important baat karni hai……….
Riddhima : "mujhe bhi……..
Arman : (khooshi se): "toom mujhse baat karogi!….kaho kya kahna hai….
Riddhima :" nahi toom apni baat kah do……….
Arman : "arey mai start kar doonga to rookoonga kya?...toom pahle apni baat kah do feer mai kahoonga.....
Riddhima : "anji di aayi hai....…mujhe di ke saath kuch deen apne ghar rahna hai….
Arman (surprisingly): "kya!...lekin…..

Tabhi peeche se dr.mallick :"beta mana mat karo...….anji ne mujhse request ki hai aur riddhima ke exams bhi khatm ho choke hain...…rahne do kuch deen bahno ko saath……….

Arman kuch nahi kahta...…bush kamre mein aata hai aur tickets ke tookre kar fenk deta hai....……ooska riddhima ke life mein koi importance nahi hai.....riddhima ki apni dooniya hai jahan wo khoosh hai...wahan arman ka koi entrance nahi.....wahi hai jo pagal ho raha hai....oonke dill kabhi nahi mill sakte.....never!!!!!..........


hey frnd....simple_sweet, jannat4ever, sasya, dhruvikaluvsKSG, Iqbal Neha1, spvd, sammy4u, ARMAANKSGFAN, moon light,riddhs and all frnds.....a lot of thanx for your lovely comments.....plz.do comments if you like it..and press the like tab also........love....

love you all
love you always
punam
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.


love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
awersome update
loved it
loved the painting
sdo sweet
armaan falling in love
felt a bit bad 2 armaan at the ending
cant wait 2 read more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
nice part par armaan has understand and take things slowly rather than assuming things and acting fast on that.................cont soon dear.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
hey anamika
nice update
feel sorry 4 arman
thanks 4 pm
waiting 4 next update
update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
its vey nice
i loved it
but plz update soonnnnnnnn
nd ya dis time a biggggggg updateeeee
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
nice update dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! armaan luvs riddhima so much but has anger management issues!!!!!!!😆.......i hope he doesnt ruin their relationship in anger.....
do continue soon....woiting eagerly for next part!!!!!!!!!!!

anindita
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
Segment 17: A Duke and Duchess' Story






Anjali aur riddhima bahoot der se arman ka intjaar kar rahi thi…..per wo ghar nahi louta tha…..dr.mallick kai baar mobile per try kar choke they…but no response…..

Anjali : "uncle,raat bhi ho rahi hai…..
Dr.uncle : "ek kaam karo beta ,toom log chale jao….arman ko to pata hi hai…..
Anjali : "thik hai….ridhzi,ja apna saman le aa….

Riddhima arman ko bina bataye jana nahi chahti.....kahan gaya?..itni der tak to aaj kal bahar nahi rahta......wo room mein aati hai.....wo itni der tak bahoot khoosh thi...per apne kamre mein aate hi pata nahi oose kaisa ajeeb sa feel ho raha hai.....pata nahi kaisi taqleef ho rahi hai.......lag raha hai apna ghar chorker wo kahan ja rahi hai!.........

Riddhima arman ki photo ko dekhti hai...aj tak jis photo ko wo kabhi bhi nahi dekhti thi...oose aaj apne bag mein bare pyar se rakh leti hai.....feer ooski nazar bed per air tickets ke tookre per jati hai.......riddhima oose ootha leti hai....ab oose arman ki narajgi samajh mein aati hai...wo kya kahna chahta tha ...samajh mein aati hai.....ab wo kya karegi!....tabhi anji ki aawaj soonai deti hai.....

Anji : "riddhzi,jaldi kar......
Riddhima :" haan di aa rahi hoon.......


..........................................




arman shantanu ke saath baitha hai.....aaj wo choop chap hai aur shan bole ja raha hai.....aaj shan bahoot khush hai…………

shan : "janta hai arman ....mai pahle samajhta tha ki mai khood ko samjha loonga...aur sohini se door rah paoonga....per aaj jab wo mili to mai samjh paya ooske bina mai kitna adhoora hoon........
arman : "sohini toomse milne aayi hai?..........
shan : "haan...wo riddhima ki sis anjali ke saath aayi hai....arey tujhe wo smart si larki yaad hai....apne class ki topper...wahi dr.sashank ki beti hai........tu mila nahi?
Arman :" nahi.............
Shan : "sorry arman aaj mujhe thora jaldi jana hai....soni mera wait kar rahi hai.......
Arman : "ok……bye…..

Shan chala jata hai……….arman sochta hai…"pyar bhi kaisa change lata hai!...shan jaisa choop rahne wala bhi aaj kitna bol raha hai!….arman ke liye her waqt fikr karne wala shan aaj ye samajh bhi nahi saka ki arman kitna sad hai…....…to kya arman khood bhi badal chooka hai!...nahi to jis riddhima ke saath bus kooch hi month hue hain mile....…ooske jaane per wo itna sad keun hai?..kya ye pyar hai ya sirf ek aadat!……


Arman feer se bhatak raha tha!…manjil koi nahi tha..….wo arman jo duty khatm hote hi ghar ki taraf bhagta tha...…aaj idhar-oodhar ghoom raha tha...…beena matlab ka….ooska khyal rakhne wala koi nahi tha...….papa busy...…mom apni life mein busy...….shan ko apna love mill gaya hai...….aur riddhima apni di ke saath khoosh hai...…ooska koi nahi hai……….wah jaker ek park mein baith gaya……….aaj sooraj bhi kitna oodas lag raha tha…....nahi…...wo riddhima ke bina nahi jee sakta...….wo ooski life hai….ooski manjil hai….per kya riddhima ye samajhti hai!….pata nahi! ..but wo to janta hai ab wo apne 'duck' se ek pal ki doori bhi nahi sah sakta...………ooski aankhon mein aansoo aane lagte hain…....wo larki jise wo hate karta tha...…pata nahi kab,kaise ooski life ban gayi...…ab ooske bina sab kuch bekar hai…….saari dooniya bejan hai….








(Song)---(I can't take the distance)----

The sky has lost it's color

The sun has turned to grey

At least that's how it feels to me

Whenever you're away

I crawl up in the corner

As I watch the minutes pass

Each one brings me closer to

The time when you'll be back

You're coming back

I can't take the distance

I can't take the miles

I can't take the time

Until the next time I see you smile

I can't take the distance…

And I'm not ashamed

That I can't take a breath without saying your name

I can brave a hurricane

And still be standing tall when all the dust has settled down

But I can't take the distance……

I still believe in feelings

But sometimes I feel too much

I make believe you're close to me

But it ain't close enough

Not nearly close enough


I can't take the distance

I can't take the miles

I can't take the time………



Arman apne ghar ki taraf chal parta hai…..abhi bahoot raat ho chooki hai…shayad riddhima apni di ke saath chali gayi hogi...……ander aate hi oose kaki deekhti hai…...

Kaki : "beta riddhima chali gayi..….toom kahan they?…..
Arman : "ji kaki mujhe pata hai….mai thora kaam mein busy tha…..
Kaki : "aao khana kha lo………
Arman :" mai khaker aaya hoon……….

Wah apne room mein aata hai.......after wedding aaj pahli baar riddhima nahi hai.......ooski banayi paintings rakhe hain....ooske saari cheejen! ......arman caressing his hand softly on these things...mano wo hi riddhima ho!.....wo bahoot tired hai ...dill aur dimag dono se....bed per sote hi oose need aa jati hai.........

..........................


riddhima : "arman......
Arman (happily): "toom aa gayi riddhima....
Riddhima : "haan..…kya karti…toomne dinner bhi nahi liya aur feer abhi need mein bed se geer jate..….
Arman : "ish liye to aisa karta hoon...…jisse toom mera khyal rakhne ke liye kahin bhi na jao……..toom kya nahi samajhti...….
Riddhima : "lekin aisa karoge to mai door chali jaoongi aur kabhi wapus nahi aaoongi....….agar ab kabhi gusse mein khood ko taqleef pahoonchayi to...….mai sada ke liye chali jaoongi…..
Arman : "mat jao…duck...…toom jo kahogi manooga...…toomhe chorker mera khyal rakhne wala koi nahi hai....…..

Riddhima ja rahi hai……
Arman :" riddhima…duck….meri duchess…love you….mat jao mujhe chorker………….."

...............

Arman ki need khool jati hai…..oose bahoot bhookh lagi hai…..wah kya kare?....ooski nazar sofe per jati hai...…roj ki ye aadat hai...…but aaj wahan "sleeping beauty" nahi hai…..sofa arman ko chidha raha hai…."dekho toomne oos masoom ki kadra nahi ki…wo chali gayi"….…arman se ab bhookh bhi bardast nahi ho raha hai....…..wah light on karta hai…..pani peene ke liye glass oothata hai....…per tables per ye kya rakha hai?....kai containers aur oonme arman ke fav.,special ,different types of cakes……and a letter…"maine toomhare fav.cake banaye hain…hope toomhe pasand aayenge…."---riddhima……

Arman barey pyar se sabhi cakes taste karta hai…'delicious!"…thanx duck..toom mera kitna khyal rakhti ho!!.....….mai sachmooch toomhe pahchan na saka…..toom bahoot achchi ho!…lekin maine toomhe bahoot takleef di….jab se aayi ho..sofe per raat goojari..maine kabhi bhi apna bed toomhare liye nahi chora....…maine jitna diya ,toomne liya...…kabhi kooch nahi manga....…promise ab mai toomhe kabhi tang nahi karoonga...….toomhara jitna deen dill chahe di ke paas raho...….toom meri ho,mai janta hoon....…toom jaroor mere paas wapus aaogi...…mai oos deen ka intjaar karoonga....……..

Arman jaker sofe per so jata hai..….mano riddhima ka ahsaas se hi oose need aa sakti hai…..

hey frnds.....simple_sweet, salinashah, jannat4ever, sasya, spvd, sammy4u, Iqbal Neha1, ARMAANKSGFAN...thanx for your comments...your comments make my day...and make my ff beautiful.....so plz.....hope you like this part....

love you all
love you always
punam



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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
yipee !!!me first
loved it a lot
armaan is cho chweet
Edited by sammy4u - 15 years ago

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