A DUKE AND A DUCHESS' STORY - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
hey dear very nice part......................armaan was dreaming..............ha ha ha.................and their morning convo was very funny..................cont soon dear..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing parts
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Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
awesome update
loved it
loved the dream and the song
armaan is slowely falling in love
glad they r friends
cant wait 2 read more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
hey dat was awesome!!!!! basically as u know i am a silent reader but this time i took da time to say sumthing abt da part!!!!!!!!!!!!! "uncle ne bhi yahi kaha"...hahahaha...dat was so funny!!!!! 😆ridz is sooooo cuteeeeeeeee....... i love it how ridz always tries to leave da room before armaan wakes up bt is never able to do so!!!! 😆loved it!!!!!!!!
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
hey punam its fab....bahut acha update h......
nd loved ur hindi style bcoz its makes ar more close.....
uncle ne bhi yahi kaha .........
ohhhhhhhhh its superb...
thnx 4 d pm
plz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
heyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon


love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
hey wen r u going to update?????? plz do it soon...waiting eagerly for da next part!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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A DUKE AND A DUCHESS' STORY

SEGMENT ---14


arman hospital mein aaj doosri baar aaya tha....….first day's ke experience kooch achche nahi they…..but aaj wo khoosh tha...….morning mein riddhima ki smiling face oose abhi tak feel ho raha tha...….and he was wishing to see this cute face again and again....….but pata nahi riddhima kahan hai!!................

dr.aditi : "dr.arman...….aaj aapko jyada heavy duty nahi....….bus aap lab.mein rahenge aur kuch students ko aapko sambhalna parega………..
arman : "mai samjha nahi dr.aditi….
aditi : "ok,mai samjhati hoon....aaj aap 1st and 2nd year ke students ko blood-pressure,hemoglobin...something like that check karna sikhayenge....….and afternoon ko mere saath ek surgery mein mujhe assist karenge…….

Arman lab mein aata hai………..
Atul : "hai arman...how are you?
Arman : "toom yahan?
Atul : "ya, I am also here….
Arman : "kya toom riddhima ki batchmate nahi ho?
Atul : "nahi to...….meri internship khatm ho chooki hai...…mai MD kar raha hoon….
Arman : "to feer ooske frnd kaise?
Atul : "actually hum bachpan se saath padhe hain...….jab riddhima 2nd class mein thi to mere school mein admission lee and ooski mummy…I mean padma aunty meri mom ki achchi saheli thi….mai tab 4th standerd mein tha...….so oose sambhalne ki responsibility meri hui……..
Arman : "to feer hum frnd ban sakte hain………..
Atul : "sure……frnds………


Abhi 3 baj rahe they...…..arman ne canteen mein lunch kiya aur feer poore hospital mein sabse frndship ki....…..kai chakkar lagaye....……sabhi oose dekhker bahoot khoosh they...…..but ooska thora mood off ho raha tha…..oosne ek baar bhi riddhima ko nahi dekha...…..pata nahi kahan hai…….wo papa ke cabin mein rest le raha tha to nurse aayi....….dr.aditi ne arman ko boolaya tha…………

Surgery successful rahi...…..dr.aditi bahoot khoosh thi…..arman ghar jaane ke liye bahar aaya…......oosne bike nikali per wahin khara raha....……kash! Riddhima deekh jaye to wo oose apne saath bike per……shayad wo mana kare but kaise mana karegi...….oonki manjil to ek hi hai………….

Tabhi shantanu bahar aaya……………

Shan: "hey arman...….kisika wait kar raha hai?
Arman :" haan..…nahi…I mean……….
Shan : "dekh…tu choopa to nahi sakta...….kya riddhima ka ….
Arman :" haan…per….
Shan : "per kya...…mai chalta hoon...…aane hi wali hogi……….
Arman : "actually mujhe pata nahi...…wo kahan hai………
Shan : "to problem kya hai? phone kar le………
Arman : "wo mobile no………
Shan : "kya! Tere paas riddhima ka mobile no.nahi hai!....………
Arman : "nahi yaar...…kabhi jaroorat hi nahi pari…………
Shan : "ok,rook mai riya se poochta hoon….
Riya(phone per):" haan bhai....…riddhima to bahoot pahle hi ghar chali gayi……..
Shan : "ok………

(SHANTANU AND HIS GF SOHINI)






Arman ko feer gussa aa raha tha...……..aaj morning mein to dosti hui…..aur oose pata tha arman hospital mein hai...….to ek baar bhi milne nahi aayi!………aue feer bina bataye ghar bhi chali gayi…..aur bekar hi arman ooske baare mein soch raha hai....……ooska mood feer off ho gaya………………….


Ab to ooska ghar jaane ka bhi mood nahi tha…………but kahan jaye...….tired bhi hai……..wo raste mein idhar-oodhar bhatak raha tha....….feer time paas karne ke liye ek mall mein ghoomta raha....…..tabhi ooski najar ek table lamp per pari....….lamp ko dekhte hi oose 'duck' ki yaad aayi…...he bought it….oose light se need nahi aati aur riddhima ko padhna tha...…ishka solution ye lamp hi tha....…apni frndship per ye gift dega...…per aaj nahi....…aaj wo bahoot gussa hai….

Riddhima ghar aayi to arman nahi aaya tha...……ooske paas no.bhi nahi they aur agar phone karne se kuch galat samajh baithe..…..ho sakta hai apne frnds ke saath ho………riddhima ne dinner kiya aur padhne baith gayi...…..pata nahi oosh 'AKROO'.. ka mood kaisa rahe!..…..night ko padhne de ya nahi………..

Arman ne dinner kiya aur aaker choopchap so gaya....……riddhima samajh gayi abhi 'akroo' ka mood off hai...…oosne light off kar night bulb on kar di……………

AT MID NIGHT

Achanak riddhima ki need khool gayi..……….shayad bahar barsaat ho rahi thi………bachpan mein jab aisi barsaat hoti to wo aur mom barsaat mein saath-saath bheegti...…..oose mummy ki bari yaad aa rahi thi………jindagi ne oose kahan se kahan la chora!!!…….pata nahi ooski manjil kahan hai!….manjil ki tarah aankho se need bhi gayab tha……..


Ooski nazar arman ke bed ki taraf gayi...…….oosne dekha arman bekhabar so raha tha....…..ooska right hand bed se neeche latak raha tha...….perhaps he was falling from bed....…….aaj hospital gaya to bahut tired ho gaya hai...…uncle ke ish laadle ko kaam karne ki habit jo nahi hai......riddhima ko dill bhar aaya….. …she look at arman ...he was sleeping like a cute baby...……geer gaya to!!!....

Kya wo oose jaga de?..lekin kya kahker boolayegi?.....aur agar boora maan gaya to!...wah dheere se jaker arman ko thora sa bed ke middle mein karne ki koshish ki …..kisi tarah bed ke middle tak chala jaaye...….but happened its opposite!....….arman moved and fell from bed with riddhima… "DHARAMM!!!".........


at first arman can't understand what happened!..…….he is on riddhima's body!….feer wo jaldi se ooth baitha...……

Arman : "toom yahan kya kar rahi thi?........
Riddhima : "wo mai....…toom bed se geerne wale they….mai…..
Arman : "hmmm....….to toom mujhe bachane aayi thi……..feer khood bhi geeri.....………

Riddhima choop……….

Feer wo oothker jane lagi but aawaj nikli …"AAAH!!"...aur wo baith gayi...........
Arman : "kya hua?
Riddhima :"kuch nahi……….

Arman ne dekha riddhima ke ankles ke paas blood……

Arman : "jor se lagi hai...deekhao..........
Riddhima : "nahi wo bed ka corner se thora lag gaya…..
Arman : "mujhe deekhao..........
Riddhima : "nahi thik hai.....
Arman : "choop raho!!...khood ko to sambhal nahi paati aur mujhe sambhal rahi thi………..ab ek bhi word boli to…..

Feer wo oose houle se bahon mein oothaker bed per beetha deta hai………..

Arman : "deekhao kahan lagi………mai bandage kar deta hoon....
Riddhima(with chocked voice): "shayad knees mein... …mai kar loongi……….

Arman : "maine kaha na kuch mat bolna………arey yaar aaj kal ki girls to mini skirt pahanker ghoomti hai aur itni sharam! Daro mat mai kha nahi jaaoonga...….muche bandage karne do………………


Morning

Riddhima oothker ready ho chooki thi............

Aaj arman sofe per soya tha...…oosne riddhima ko bed se ootarne nahi diya tha…..
Riddhima bahar jaane lagi….tabhi as usual oose soonai para….'idhar aao'…
Wah arman ke paas jaker khari ho gayi....…
Arman : "how is your leg?
Riddhima : "its ok…..
Arman : "toom mujhe kal bata ker keun nahi aayi?………
Riddhima :"toom frnds ke saath hote aur boora maan jate to.....
Arman : "yo...…hello....…baat-baat per boora toom manti ho,mai nahi...…..achcha aaj mere saath aana...….mai wait karoonga….
Riddhima : "nahi....…
Arman : "keun? O' samjha frnds rahenge....thik hai...but apna no.to de do....aur aaj raat ko...….
Riddhima (darte hue): "kya??!!!!!!!
Arman : "arey daro mat baba....aaj night ko mai aakar toomhe anatomy padha doonga.....aaj hum dono milker anatomy ki aisi ki taisi ker denge.......aaj to anatomy ki band baja bajake rahegi............

Arman ke kahne ke style per riddhima muskoorane lagti hai.........
"Nahi....akroo itna bhi boora nahi.......bush kabhi- kabhi dimag satak jata hai.....after all he is uncle's laadla!!!!!!!!....."


dear frnds.....simple_sweet, jannat4ever, moonlight2630, sasya, dhruvikaluvsKSG, Iqbal Neha1, spvd, Sweet_Ashum, cute.arsh, sammy4u, ARMAANKSGFAN.....a lot of thanx for your woooooonderful comments....hope you will like this part...plz.give comments and press tha tab.. ....love..

love you all
love you always
punam

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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
awesome update dear
khud gussa hote rehta hai aur krhta hai riddhima baat baat pe gussa hoti hai.
loved it
Edited by sammy4u - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
very sweet update.......
loved it..
uncle's laadla really cuteeee
continue soon

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