A DUKE AND A DUCHESS' STORY - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part
hope armaan frds doesnt make fun of her
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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting..............armaan is falling for her slowly but steadily.............but both are like opposite poles....................in attitude.............cont soon dear...............
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nice concept loved all the parts😊😊

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#34
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved the churayal part
So funny
AR r so cute When they fight
Can't wait 2 read more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm and accepting me as a friend
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i really liked u ff
nice story
plz pm me when u update it..

nd plzzzzzzz update soon
Edited by jannat4ever - 15 years ago
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awesome part
Ar scenes were amazingly potrayed
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A DUKE AND A DUCHESS' STORY







SEGMENT --12


Arman ne socha tha shayad riddhima party mein jaane ke liye raji nahi hogi aur ooske laye hue wo dress bhi nahi pahnegi....''.wo yahi chahta tha ki riddhima oosse tang aakar khood hi naraj hoker chali jaaye,but wah samajh nahi pa raha tha....'.wo jaisa sochta aisa kabhi bhi keun nahi hota....''.riddhima party mein jaane ke liye ready hoker jab neeche aayi to arman was amazed!!....''wo salwar kameej wali simple si larki kahan hai!!! Yahan to ek modern apsara ooske saamne khari hai!! Itni khoobsoorat!itni hot and sexy!! 😕 😕 kahin wo bahak na jaaye!!....

Riddhima party mein bilkool choopchap thi...'..oose aisi party bilkool bhi pasand nahi...'.ye itne noise'..aise glamerous dress'.but wah kuch kah bhi nahi sakti thi'.oose dr.uncle ka maan rakhna tha'..wo kuch aisa nahi karna chahti thi jisse uncle ko lage ki ye saadi karke oonhone riddhima ke life mein problem laye hain...'.aisa pain riddhima kabhi bhi uncle ko dena nahi chahti thi...'.aur ish saitan arman se bhi bachker rahna chahti thi''choopchap ooski baat maan lene mein hi apni bhalai hai wah samajh chooki thi....''.

Mumbai se aaye arman ke frnds ko riddhima bahoot achchi lagi thi''..
Deepak: "arey yaar arman'.tu kahta tha ki teri wife ish dooniya ki sabse beautiful larki hogi'..to tune apni baat sach karke dikhaya''arey mere liye bhi aisi ek girl dhoondh kar la de na''.
Nitin: "haan yaar'..arey riddhima bhabhi'aapki koi choti sis.hai kya'..plz.oosse meri baat pakki karwa dijiye na'''
Rakesh: "yaar sach kahoon...'toone saadi mein nahi boolaya to hum sab tujhse bahoot naraj they..'.but riddhima ko dekhte hi samajh gaye toomne hume keun nahi boolaya'..
Arman : "to bata kya samjha''.
Rakesh: "yahi ki tujhe dar tha ki riddhima kahin tujh langoor ko chorker humme se kishi ko pasand na ker le''
Arman : "mai langoor hoon?'..mumbai ki saari girls mujhper marti thi'..
Deepak : "ish beauty ke saamne to langoor hi hai''
Pummy: "wo sab to thik hai'..lekin kya humare hero ke barabar ki hai?
Deepak : "kya matlab?
Pummy:" riddhima bahoot simple larki hai...'.oosko aur kuch nahi aata..'aur humara hero to sabme champion hai'...
Shantanu: "kisne kaha?....mujhe pata hai riddhima bahoot achchi dancer hai'.wah bahoot achchi singer bhi hai''
Pummy : "ok'to kaho na oose ek dance karne ko''
Deepak : "haan yaar arman'..tu to bahoot achcha dance karta hai'hum chahte hain ki toom dono saath-saath''
Sabhi : "yes arman'plz''.we want arman-riddhima dance'.we want arman-riddhima dance''''..

Riddhima ab ghabra rahi thi...''.arman ke saath dance!wah to ooske paas jane se bhi darti hai! Ab kya hoga!!!'..
Tabhi shantanu ooske paas aata hai: "riddhima ,dekho koun aaya hai'..

Riddhima dekhti hai riya and Aryan'..
Riddhima : "toom yahan ?
Shantanu: "riya meri cousin hai...'.maine hi party mein oonhe boolaya hai'.mai janta tha toom akeli thori nervous hogi''''..
Riya (dheere se):" riddhz.chal ooth'.oonhe bhi deekha de tu oonse kum nahi hai'..
Shan : "hello guys'..keep quiet'..humari duchess ab apne duke ke saath salsa karegi'..
Arman (whispered to shan): "kya kar raha hai'..oose salsa aata bhi hai?....
Shan : "ek baar dance floor per ootar to mere bhai feer dekhna toone koun sa moti choon ker laya hai'''.




Dance khatm ho chooka tha...'.but riddhima arman abhi bhi ek doosre ke saath they!'.ek doosre ke aankhon mein khoye hue!...............'.

.riddhima jaise arman ke blue ocean jaise eyes mein khood ko doobo chooki thi aur bahar aane ka rashta nahi mill raha tha'..aur arman!wah to sab kuch bhool chooka tha! Ye dooniya'.ooske frnds'.ooska nafrat'..bush oose deekh raha tha to oon bari-bari almond eyes mein apni tashbeer!!!

Tabhi peeche se Deepak mano oose jagate hue: "hum bhi yahan hain yaar'..humara bhi khyal kar'..

Riddhima jaldi se riya ke paas chali jati hai'..oose ye kya hua!wo ish tarah behave keun kar rahi hai!aaj pahli baar oose arman ki aankho se bilkool bhi nafrat nahi hua...'.aaj pahli baar oose aisa laga ye aankhe bahoot khoobsoorat hai,jisme doobne ko dill karta hai!...

Riya : "tune bahoot achcha dance kiya,ridhz...'.dekh sab kitne khoosh hain'.
Riddhima : "mujhe yahan achcha nahi lag raha riya''..
Riya(whisper to riddhima) :" plz.ridhz,ghabra mat'.aaj teri takkar in larkion se hai'.akhir ye bhi to dekhe humari ridhz kya cheej hai'..aaj inki bolti band kar de''

Tabhi oonko lily ki aawaj soonai deti hai: "ok,guys'riddhima ko ishme 100 out of 100 mile hain..'.per shan ne kaha oose singing bhi aati hai...'..hum bhi to dekhen kaisa gaati hai'''''

Riddhima ki aankho mein aansoo aa jate hain'..kya wo yahan apna majak banana aayi hai? Kya wo koi kathpootli hai?kya wo yahan apni ability ke test dene aayi hai?arman to kuch bhi nahi kah raha'..apni shan jo rakhni hai'.chahe ooski kitni bhi insult ho''.thik hai'.wo bhi haar nahi manegi'..

Lily: "kya hua bhai''.
Shan : "choro na lily,wo tired ho gayi hai''
Lily : "ye to bahane hain''
Shan : "ok,armaan tu sooro kar''

Arman saari baaten soon raha tha...'.per wo jawab dene laayak tha hi kahan!....ooske aankho mein to abhi bhi riddhima ka chehra samaya tha'..poori tarah ooshi mein khoya tha. 😍 😍😍'...shayad riddhima ke aane se ooske life mein ek nasha sa cha raha tha'..pata nahi kaisi khoosboo hai jo oose gherne lagi hai!....'..wah apne khyalon mein khoya ga ootha'..

Song---TOOM AAYE TO.....


Tum Aayye To Hawaoon Mein, ek Nasha Hai
Tum Aayye To Fizaao Mein, Rang Sa Hai
Yeah Rang Sarah Hein, Bas Tumhare
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya.......

(RIDDHIMA)-----

Tum Aayye To Hawaon Mein, Aik Nasha Hai
Tum Aayye To Fizaao Mein, Rang Sa Hai
Yeah Rang Sarah Hein, Bas Tumhare
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya....

(ARMAN)----

Tum Aay Hoon To Dekh Lo
Naya Naya Sa Lage Yeah jahaan

ho...ho..ho....ho..ho..ho..

(RIDDHIMA)----
Haseen Haseen Hein Yeah Zameen
Dhula Dhula Sa Hein Yeah Asaman
Tum Ho To Hein Yeah Samaa
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya......

Dharak Raha Hein Dil Mera
Jhuki Jhuki Hein Palkya Yeahan

(ARMAN)-----
Jo Dil Mein Ho Who Kaha Bhi Do
Ruki Ruki Si Haa Yeah Dastan
Jazbat Manga Zaban
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya

(ARMAN-RIDDHIMA)-----

Tum Aayye To Hawaon Mein, ek Nasha Hai
Tum Aayye To Fizaao Mein, Rang Sa Hai
Yeah Rang Sarah Hein, Bas Tumhare
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya..........



Party khatm ho chooki thi''arman ke paas riddhima baithi thi'apne khyalon mein khoyi hui'..aur arman drive kar raha tha...'riddhima ke khyalon mein khoya hua'..wah mirror thik karne ke bahane riddhima ko dekhta per wo to pata nahi keen khayalon mein goom thi...''
Arman:" hei '😊 .

Riddhima koi jawab nahi deti'..
Arman : "bari problem hai....hello.....kya bahri ho?
Riddhima : "mera koi naam bhi hai....
Arman : "mujhe wo naam pasand nahi...ri-dhdhi-ma...kitna bara naam.....koi aur naam nahi hai?.....
Riddhima :" meri ma mujhe angel kahti thi.....
Arman (naughtily): "mujhe to nahi lagti.....ok,ok,naaraj mat hona...'mujhe dar lagta hai...'dekho mai duke hoon to toomhara name bhi mere jaisa hona chahiye...'.but duke ki duchess'..so lengthy name'.ok.i got it...'.mai toomhe duck kahoonga.....🤣 🤣

Riddhima kuch nahi kahti......
Arman : "pasand nahi aaya?
Riddhima :" mujhe kuch nahi kahna.......


Dono ghar pahoonchte hain....arman samajh chooka hai ab ye kuch nahi bolegi...per arman to choop baith hi nahi sakta....pata nahi ye itna choop kaise rahti hai!....dono apne kamre mein aaten hain .....arman ka aaj mood bahoot achcha hai.....wah lagatar bukbuk kiye ja raha hai.....riddhima kuch bhi nahi bol rahi.....per arman ko pata hai wo soon rahi hai..........
Tabh arman dekhta hai riddhima bahar ja rahi hai''
Arman : "kahan ja rahi ho?
Riddhima : "mai uncle se milker aati hoon.........
Arman : "papa aa gaye?........toomhe kaise pata?
Riddhima : "oonhone bataya tha aur oonke room ki light on thi...
Arman : "morning mein mill lena''
Riddhima : "nahi mujhe kuch important baaten karni hai'''.

Riddhima thori der baad wapus loutti hai'.
Riddhima : "toomhe uncle boola rahe hain'''
Arman :" mai tired hoon...'kal mill loonga'.
Riddhima : "abhi boolaya hai''''
Arman : "offo!achcha meri ma'.ja raha hoon'''..

Arman dr.mallick ke kamre mein aata hai..................
Arman : "papa...aapne boolaya..........
Dr.mallick : "arman'.mujhe toomse kuch important baat karni hai'''.
Arman : "ji papa''''
Dr.mallick: "meri ek conference hai'.mai kal Singapore ja raha hoon''''10days mein loutoonga'..mere absence mein toomhe hospital sambhalna hai''''.
Arman : "per papa mai''''
Dr.mallick:" doosre sabhi senior dr.rahenge''''.
Arman : "ok,papa'''
Dr.mallick : "aur ek baat'..abhi riddhima beta ke exams hain'.oose party mein le jana band karo''''.
Arman : "per papa mere saare frnds aaye they'.
Dr.mallick: "ooski study toomhare frnds se jyada important hain'''.toomne saadi ki baat ki'''..maine maan liya..'ab ooska future barbaad mat karo'aur ek baat....'ye raat ko world cup dekhna band karo'.riddhima ke exams hain...'wo kaise padhegi?...itna khyal rakhna ki ab ooski responsibility toomhari hai'..

Arman kuch bhi nahi kahta'''..itna insult!to wo papa se yahi kahne aayi thi.........ooshki complain karne!.ishi liye choop chap party mein chali gayi! Wah arman ko papa ke najron se girana chahti hai''isse pahle papa ne kabhi bhi osse aise baat nahi ki''..ooska sare pyare feelings khatm ho gaye''.


Arman kamre mein aaya to riddhima apne books nikalker padh rahi thi'.arman ne kuch nahi kaha'bush light off kar di'''..
Riddhima : "mujhe padhna hai'''''..
Arman (gusse se): "ye mera room hai'''.padhna hai to kahin aur jao'''aur khabardar papa se kuch kaha to''.. 😡

Arman apne bed per so chooka tha'..aur riddhima apni aankhon mein aansoo liye soch rahi thi'..aakhir aisa kab tak chalega'...kya wo ish tarah apne exams de payegi ya apne papa ke sapno ko poora kar payegi?........aansoo bhari aankhon se need aur sapne dono door ja rahe they''''''.



hey frnd....simple_sweet, jannat4ever, moonlight2630, scorpio95, Iqbal Neha1, spvd, cute.arsh, ARMAANKSGFAN and sammy4u,.....a lot of thanx for your wonderful comments... hope you like this part...plz. do comments and press the like tab.....

your frnd
punam


Edited by anamika2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
diiiiiiii
gr8 part
loved the last scene for previous part
n this part is nice
cont soon
n thx for pm

luv aana
Edited by dhruvikaluvsKSG - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
hey puman
nice update
i really like ur FF
i hate arman friends.
plz counti..... update soon. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
Awesome update
loved it
hate armaan's friends
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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