GamE [MayUr FF] : *Completed* [25/Dec/2011] - Page 15

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

finally u updated

yay

that's gr8

awesome

fantastic

love it

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

hey Suja loved ur concpet n character S.

so Mayu a athlete n he winzzz n everyone is happy

but didnt realli understand how hezz a cheater??
but like Nupurz character shezz a shy person n very sweet

cant wait to read more

love title too na

do continue soon

and plezz add me in ur pm listy=D

-Lina-

Thank u for ur comment.😊

mayu is cheater or not, this matter ll reveil with time😉

its all my pleasure to pm u.😊

Hey Guys, m here again with a update ................ this time really a big one, i thought so😉😛

Part ? 4 (c)

Nupur sat front of mirror. She wore a beautiful bottle green lehenga with heavy zardai work, its look beautiful. This lehenga was very special for her, because it was specially made for her, as per Deepak's request. She wore matching jewelry, bangles, mangtika, jhumka, her hair tide in a stylish bun. She looks gorgeous.

Nupur lost her own thoughts, she's thinking about her future life. Deepak is very good person, his richness never come between his personal life, he is really a down to earth person.

"hey sweetheart, this is for you." He handed a packet, when they were in shopping mall, Nupur was never a shopping freak like other girls. But Deepak forcefully dragged her into mall. But that was a fake reason, he arranged a surprised date for her in a restaurant. Nupur was really surprised, she felt happy that she got a caring future husband. After returning form their date, Deepak forced her to shop something. She agreed in front of his stubbornness. She was roaming on bridal dress counter then he handed her the packet. Nupur open quickly, she was so excited. "OMG!!!!! This is beautiful" she almost screamed, "you know I just love it." It was the same green lehenga which she ware now. A small smile playing on her lips, Deepak is really a sweetheart. But Mayank! He is really a mean, a total jerk, moron ??. aur pata nahi kya kya! Nupur sighted. She was now really surprised, "why I am thinking about Mayank??? He is nothing for me."

But you have a crush with him. You couldn't denied that!!!

No, I couldnt. But that was just a childishness.

It doesn't matter! But the truth is you feel for him, not now, but in past.

Yeah off course. but I really didn't know that he's like that ?... A selfish giant.

Whatever!!!!! But if hw -

"Hi, sweetheart" a voice break her revere. She was so engross in her thoughts, that she couldn't realized the time of her sagai is come. She was really surprised about her thoughts, why was she thought about that moron!!!!!! He is not so important for her. The only important person in her life is Deepak, after her family.

"you look beautiful" he whisper in her ear.

She startled first, then smile shyly, it was Deepak, her would be fianc. He rested his hands on her shoulders, "you know, I thought, main yeh engagement postponed kardun."

"kya??? Par kyun??" Nupur was really shocked yet surprised.

"actually tum aaj itni sundar lag rahi ho, k I am going to faint in any moment."

"shut up Deepak." She blushed. His words always mesmerized her, literally made her blush.

"kya ho raha hai??? Hmmm!!!" Rai, Nupur's cousin entre into room with her friends, only to make them hell embarrassed.

"hmmm, toh romance chal raha hai. Not good for you my-going-to-be jiju. It injurious to your pocket." She smile mischievously, forwarding her hand to Deepak, "give me bribe, either we'll told everything in the party." She giggled, her friends joints her, "hey jijz, we are also here."

"ok.ok. dacoits." He gives them a thick amount. Nupur giggled to saw his facial expression.

They laughs and brought them into the party.

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Game village.

There was a pin drop silence between two. After Nupurs leave, Mayank getting cool down, and thought about his did. He feels really sorry.

On the other hand, Adhiraj change his attire and about to go in outside. He picked his ipod and reaching to the door.

"hey dude. I am sorry yaar."

Adhiraj stopped in middle, look behind. It was Mayank, an apologetic expression on his face. He walking towards him.

"I am sorry Adi. Really very sorry." He said, he lowered his eyes, "I didn't meant that!"

"what do you mean by didn't meant that????" Adhiraj asked in anger, "and by the way, why are you say sorry??? Aur who bhi mujhse??? I am JUST your friend na!" he said sarcastically.

"no yaar. You are my only friend. I am not afford to lose you." He look at him, "you know, you are my only friend till date. I have many friend, but they are only so called friends. You know, nobody want to befriend with me, neither boys, nor girls, if I lost my money." His eyes become moist.

"why are you upset Mayank! you have enough money to buy a friend. So just go ahead." Adhiraj said straightly. He was still hurt.

"I know, I hurt you too much. But plz forgive me, I promised, I'll never hurt you again."

Adhiraj become silence, he was no mood to talk to him. Mayank brought his palm together, "I am really sorry. Plz forgive me."

"tumhe nahi lagta, k tumhe Nupur se BHI mafi mangni chahiye!!!!"

"naam math lo uska." He growls, "I hate her."

"but why? She is so nice."

"I-I just hate her, jabhi main use dekhta hun, I feel an anger start boiling inside me." He was fuming, "u don't know her. I know her, she -" he stopped in middle.

"she!!!!" Adhiraj asked, raising his eyebrows, "she what?"

"nothing. Just leave this topic."

'very fishy' Adhiraj thoughts, there is really something inside Mayank.

"plz forgive me." Mayank's voice bring him back. He saw, Mayank still looking at him with apologetic eyes.

"plz forgive me." He repeated.

Adhiraj smile, "you are already forgiven Mayank."

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Their engagement start with full of energy with presence of their parents. Deepak and Nupur exchange their rings. All are happy. Rai come forward, "hey jijz, this is not done, engagement without dance." She gestured everyone to join her, Neel, Deepak's younger brother joined her.

They formed 2 groups ?. Boys and girls ?.. they started singing and dancing hand in hand.. Everyone looks so happy. Deepak constantly gazed on Nupur, made her blushed.

Mehndi lagaake rakhna Doli sajaake rakhna
Mehndi lagaake rakhna Doli sajaake rakhna
Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajna

Mehndi lagaake rakhna Doli sajaake rakhna

she ignored Deepak's gazed and got up ?. she joined her friends and family. She was little unhappy inside, that her only friend Suhani not attend her engagement. But she wished her last night and promised that she'll definitely attend her marriage.

Rai and Neel dancing hand in hand. Rai grabbed Neel's hand and twirled her.


Sehraa sajaake rakhna Chehraa chhupaake rakhna
Sehraa sajaake rakhna Chehraa chhupaake rakhna
Yeh dil ki baat apne dil mein dabaake rakhna
Sehraa sajaake rakhna Chehraa chhupaake rakhna

Mehndi lagaake rakhna Doli sajaake rakhna

Deepak's parents came in for the function ?.. he walked in a minute later ??. Nupur's friends made them sit with Nupur's parents and signaled the photographer to click a memorable photo.


Ud udke teri zulfein Karti hai kya ishaare
Dil thaamke khade hain Aashiq sabhi kunwaare

Chhup jaaye saari kudiyaan Ghar mein sharam ke maare
Gaaon mein aa gaye hain Paagal shaher ke saare
Nazrein jhukaake rakhna Daaman bachaake rakhna
Nazrein jhukaake rakhna Daaman bachaake rakhna
Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajna

Neel forced Deepak to dance ?.. he joined the dance floor ?. He was looking at Nupur continuously ?.. she bent her head in shy ?? but the truth is that she wasn't shy. Deepak come near and proposed her to dance, but she refused. She wasn't shy to dance, but she always feel uncomfortable with him ?.. its maybe her lack of characteristics. His presence always reminded her that she is the bride, but she isn't feel it ?. So its better option to look away ... she could feel his eyes on her, she wasn't comfortable at all, she was becoming very self conscious.


Mehndi lagaake rakhna Doli sajaake rakhna

Sehraa sajaake rakhna Chehraa chhupaake rakhna

She sighted in relief, when her cell is ringing, its was RV sir. She thought, might be RV sir going to congrats her, if he wasn't coming. Dia mam was also not here, so it was must be some problem.

'par office ka kaam to maine complete kar dia tha, phir kya hua??!!' she wonder, taking the call, "yes sir, why aren't you came here?"

RV tell something, but for loud music, she couldn't hear anything. She excused herself and went to her room.


Main ek jawaan ladka Tu ek haseen ladki
Yeh dil machal gaya to Mera kusoor kya hai

Rakhna tha dil pe kaabu Yeh husn to hai jaadu
Jaadu yeh chal gaya to Mera kusoor kya hai

In that time, Deepak's cell was also ringing. Deepak loot at the number and went from there. He went to garden.

"yes, Deepak here. Everything is all right?"

" ********* "

"that's a good news. I'll handed it tomorrow."

" ********** "

"tonight is not possible. I am in my engage ceremony. Try to understand!"

" ************ "

"thank you so much. Have a nice life." He disconnects the call and enters into the party.

Rasta hamaara takna Darwaaza khula rakhna
Rasta hamaara takna Darwaaza khula rakhna
Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajna

Kuch aur ab na kehna Kuch aur ab na karna
Kuch aur ab na kehna Kuch aur ab na karna

Yeh dil ki baat apne dil mein dabaake rakhna
Mehndi lagaake rakhna Doli sajaake rakhna
Sehraa sajaake rakhna Chehraa chhupaake rakhna

Nupur shut the door of her room, now the atmosphere become little quite.

"yes, sir, aap kya keh rahe the? Mujhe sunai nahi dia tha." She adjusting herself on the bed.

" ********* "

"KYA???!!!!!" Nupur was shocked, her mouth fully open, eyes are popped out, "what are you talking sir? Its unbelievable!!!" she couldn't believe her ear. it was next to impossible!!!

" ********* "

"are you sure sir? I mean, yeh koi rumor to nahi?"

" ******** "

"ok, sir, I'll check." She disconnected the call and switched on the TV. She surfing the channels impatiently??..there is not such kind of news, neither in hindi channel nor english.

Sha va oye, oye, oye Sha va oye, oye, oye

Sha va oye, oye, oye Sha va oye, oye, oye

She stopped at a news channel, she was again shocked to see the news. RV sir was right, its really a bad news ???.. she slumped on the bed, shocked her head in disbelief.

The news channel shows the breaking news : Gold Medal winner Indian Athletic Mayank Sharma found positive in dope test.

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Okies guys, that's enough for today.

It was sooo long & little bit boring too. I hope you yawning in between in boredom. So I stopped writing now, giving you relief.

Guys, give me ur opinion, what u think exactly about Mayank. ?.. Was Mayank really took some drugs?????? Or its just a rumor?????? Or someone took her revenge to Mayank???? Or, it was fake news to make out publicity??????

Keep guessing guys.

Love

Suja❤️

Wow nice story... story took a nice twist..

hey sujata!!

read all the parts

Hey Suja
beautiful update.
nupur got engaged with depak
haye pher mayur ki kya hoga.
i want mayur together
oh GOD mayanks dope test becme +ve
I just hope mayank is innocent
amazing update suja
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
plz update next part soon.
take cre

amazing update Suja

i thing some1 took her revenge to mayank but i so want nupur to brove that mayank is enocent thnks for the pm n the long part