Droplets (Rajeev FF) New LINK Page-155 - Page 57

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

is baar jaldi comment karr rahi hun...hai na...??? 😆Hehe....if this 'jaldi' is measured on the basis of my UD....then u r always wayyyyyyyyy too jaldi....mujhse to koi jeet hi nahi sakta...😆

fantastic...thanks...😳

pata hai Sumi...sab se jyada anokha scene koun sa tha...vohi fonewala...!!! Aww....am glad u thought so....coz that was my fav from the UD...😆😳jab dono ek dushre se bina kuch bole hi fone thame khade the...!!! par kyoun...??? adil agar us taraf se fone rakh deta...toh kya farq padta...aur ashna ko kya jarurat thi adil ki baat mann ne ki...!!! par kuch toh tha yaar...jo baht khaash laga...Hehe...they actually didnt need to pretend such a thing....but still they did....and the reason need not be justified....here!! 😉😳 Kabhi kabhi...kuch kar dena....achha lagta hai...sumtyms we just love to think...irrationally!! 😉

adil...kuch hatke hain...!!! main Raj ki nahi adil ki baat karr rahi hun...!!! Awww.....😳😳kyoun ke raj toh kuch nahi balki pura hatke hai...ha ha ha...!!! Exactly...☺️...janab ki baat hi kuch aur hai...sumtyms I wonder....if I am actually part of a planet where such a wonderful person resides...😆😆😳khair point par aate hain...!!! adil aur us ke mom ka scene...aisa laga jaise voh apne mom ki har baat samajh raha ho...!!! yeh bhi achha hua ke ashna ne sun liya un ki batain...kam se kam use is baat ka ehsaash toh hoga na ke voh jitna bura inshan adil ko samajhta hai...voh us se kahin jyada achha hai...!!! True...Ashna needs to see the soft side...the vulnerable side of Adil...to knw him better....but problem ye hai ki Adil iske saamne hamesha tough rehta hai...so she needs to eavesdrop to knw better abt him...😆😆

voh sab ki care karta hai...par us ka kya...???Ohh...I knw...uske liye koi nahi hai...(apart from us of course😳) dadi ki khushi...apne maa...sis... ashna...sabhi ki...!!! par use samajhnewala us ghar me sirf rashi aur us ki mom hain...!!! par ek baat achhi thi ke...ashna bhi ab use samajhne ki koshish karr rahi hai...!!! aur voh bhi khud ke bina jaane ke voh kyoun is inshan ke bare me itna soch rahi hai...aur jann ne ki koshish karr rahi hai...!!!Yup....its a strange pull she feels towards him....a strange feeling that prevents her from harming him anyhow...rather provokes her to knw abt him...think abt him....😉😳

adil aur rishabh ke scene na baht achhe se likha hai tum ne...!!! par ek min ke liye mujhe laga ke rishabh par ek bucket thanda pani dal dun...!!! winter season chal raha hai toh...is ka asar us par toh pakka ho hi jayega...!!!Haha....badhiya idea hai....😆😆...am sure he needs that...waise am glad u liked the scene...😳

agar adil ko un ke father ne sab kuch diya hai toh kuch soch samajh kar hi diya hoga na...!!! tabhi yeh rishabh...dadi ko bhi adil ke khilaf kar ke rakha hai...Hehe....Rishabh me itni akal hoti to wo idiot Canada jaa kar thodi baith jata...😆😆

phir se kahungi...tum ne jaisa chrch adil ko diya hai na...voh sach me sirf ek novel me hi ho sakte hain...kyoun ki aaj ki lyf me aise inshan ko imagine karna bhi mushkil hai...!!! sach me... kisi bhi ladki ka dream man hoga voh...Hehe...quite true!! But sach kahu to...his character has still not bloomed....there is more to him...tumne uski achhayi dekhi hai....sirf!! Kuch aur bhi dekhna baki hai...😉 and well...dream man ka pata nahi...but he is my dream character for sure....and I'll try my best to mould him in the best possible way!! 😳

ashna...voh bhi toh adil ko miss karr rahi hai na...!!! par us ke liye toh chalta hai...kyoun ke us ne kafi pareshan kiya hai adil ko...!!! par adil ki lyf me thodi khushi de do yaar...!!! last maine use mushkurate hue tab dekha tha...jab voh ashna ko apne car me bithane ke liye 'band ke sath sorry' bolne ko taiyar tha...ab thoda sa rehmo-karam adil par bhi kar do...!!! ab voh bhi toh tumhara fav hai na...Bilkul hai....sacchi!! Kasamh se....God Promise!! 😳 And I'll definitely bring happiness in his lyf...coz he deserves that...😉

vaise ek umeed hai ke sayad adil...vahan chala jaye...ya phir ashna jaldi laut aaye...!!! yaar...dono ko aise alag alag dekha nahi jata...!!! khaash kar ke adil ko...!!! office ka voh scene na...baht hi jyada achha laga mujhe...matlab ek ajeeb si feelings aayi...lovely...Oh...I knw tumhe kaisi feeling ayi hogi...😆...actually mujhe bhi ek ajeeb si feeling ayi....while writing that toofan and all....😳....I guess tumhe bhi wahi feeling ayi hogi..😆...and well...I knw aap log Adil n Ashna ko dur nahi dekhna chahte....usika bandobast kar rahi hu main...😉

ab tum kyoun mushkura rahi ho...!!! hassna bandh karo...aur next part likhna suru karo...!!!!! par sach kahun...mujhe na NRI ka bhi part jaldi chahye...!!! interesting mode pe choda hai yaar...!!! aur yahna toh main kuch guess bhi nahi karr pa rahi hun ke tum aage adil ke sath aur kya kya karrnewali ho...bichare ko dukhi hi karr ke rakha hai...Hehe...am glad ki tum guess nahi kar paa rahi ho yaar....sab guess kar logi to kaise chalega?? 😆😆 waise...even am not very sure abt the xact next track....but lets see...😉

ab jaldi se ud karti ho ke... main tumhara aur dimag khayun... Hehe...dimag hai hi kaha jo khaogi...😎....waise thanks for the 'beautiful' comment...sacchi me beautiful tha yaar!! 😆😉😳

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Hi Sumi.....Hey Guglu...😛

Thank you for updating this fic..... mai pareshan ho gai thi ki tu kab update karegi.... Ohh..😲...pareshan kyun ho gayi thi yaar?? Main isse adhura nahi chhorungi...😆

So beautiful....so Ashna Adil ko miss kar rahi hai par wo samajh nahi paa rahi hai....aur Adil bhi.... wo shayari achhi thi...kisne likhi hai...Adil ne.....ya tumne...😉 Hehe...glad u liked the part...and the shayri...waise wo maine NAHI likhi hai.....Adil ne hi likhi hogi...😆

Time kam hai isliye detailed update nahi de rahi hun.... but iit was an awesome part....par very less of Adil and Ashna.... continue soon dear.... and wish you a very Happy New Year....Aww...I wud surely try to include more of Adil n Ashna....and wish u the same dear!! Thanks for commenting...😛

Take care

Love

Guglu

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

So she has gone and when GD said Adil to go with her as usual he denied in his super cool way.Hehe....u found his way supercool...😆😳...gud to knw dat...😉
Ashna how much u try to deny the fact u can't my dear. U care of him and so as he, he likes u but he would never say that and now u have started liking him n missing him too.Yeah...she is definitely not going to acknowledge her feelings that easily...ab madam kitni ziddi hai...we knw that na...😉😆
It's not good manners mam to listen others discussion like this, but thank god he didn't see u there otherwise what excuse you was going to give him?Haha....arre...sahi hai yaar....agar dekh leta....tab wo kya kehti? Specially when he wud be scrutinizing her wid his eyes....and kinda challenging her as well...😉😆😆
Liked the FB as it was necessary to know why has Rishabh left the home? And second one was interesting too as Adil remembered his mom there on window. He is so alone and that quote suited & described his persona well.Am glad u liked all these things...and gud to knw that quote was suitable...😃😳
She informed Rashi that she has reached safely and came to know that Mr. Raichand has not come to home yet, i don't know why but i was feeling like he was scolded by Ashna right than but she didn't do that.Hmm...she wud like to though...😉😆
Heer came there n forced her to call him right than as she didn't want but that was good and when she called him and asked has he returned home and taken his food i liked that, like a typical Indian wife.Hehe...she does care for her hubby after all...😉
But he understood that Heer is with her there and he acted as if he is talking to her so long and both forgot the world. Till when he will live alone? Being a wife with him and others too he is alone still, i am not happy to see him like this. Aww...I knw...none is happy to see him like this...but things will change for sure...and I can assure...nothing can go worse for him...so everything has to be better...😉
try to update soon. Yeah....will surely do that...😳...thanks for such a wonderful comment Vertika....loved replying to it...😳

Originally posted by: togepe30

Lovely part !!

I feel soo bad for poor Adil !Ohh...I am sure u do....but dont worry....I'll try and make things as much gud for him as possible...😳

I loved the quote - Gud to knw dat....had actually read it sumwhere and thought of adding it here...😳

Sapno se dil lagane ki aadat nahi rahi,

Har waqt muskurane ki aadat nahi rahi,

Ye soch ke ki koi manaane nahi aayega

Ab hume rooth jaane ki aadat nahi rahi.

Luv,

Vandu

Originally posted by: rmanu7382

sooperlike :)

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Happy new year awesome part dear

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was too good.Thanks Nisha...😳

Adil's mom wants him to go with Ashna, but he tells that how could he go when he has soo much work in the office and also when he has to look after his mother. He complaints that she does not make any efforts to improve her health. But then also understands that this is her way to cope with her grief. He feels her sorrow and loss. Seeing the pain in his eyes Ashna gets disturbed. Her instincts are to comfort Adil in any way possible'but she is confused about her own feelings. She does not want to admit that she will miss him. Hmm...Ashna does feel his pain....but is reluctant to acknowledge that....and we can just hope she discovers her own feelings soon...so that she can be wid Adil in his troubles...😳

Adil's life has been very hard. First he had to adjust with his new family and just when everyone has started to accept his as a part of the family, Rishabh's father's death shatters his life. Only his mother and Rashi are concerned about Adil, whereas Rishabh and his dadi hate him and does not leave any chance to cause him pain....yeah...Adil's lyf is actually pretty hard to even think of...and he leads it wid utmost pain and suffering...

Rishabh cannot bear that his father had left everything in Adil's name. he feels betrayed and blames Adil for everything. Adil makes sure that Rishabh does not face any problems in his life. He is always there to watch over him.Well...no matter how he is treated...Adil can never wish ill of any of them....as he considers his responsibility to take care of this family....of HIS family!! 😳

Ashana is surprised to see how much her friends respect Adil. She wants to tell him something but does not know how to express her feelings in front of him. Even Adil is missing her but he would never admit it, not even to himself. Their silence speaks volumes and both of them are lost in each other over the phone. Ashna is surprised when she ends up thinking about all the times that he has spent with him Hmm...sumtyms distance make us realize things which we ignore when we r close!! So I guess....it was necessary for them....and well...admitting their feeling will take tym for sure...😆

Waiting for your next update'please continue soon Will try my best dear....thanks for the lovely comment!! 😳

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

ahem ahem am i late 😛😛😛 not much I guess' but still sowie '😈 so a happy new year to Adil 😳 😳 😳 & ofcourse to u too'.😛😛😛 & bada wala thanku 🤗for bringing in Adil in very first week of new year'😳😳😳 U r very much welcum dear....and well...dont bother abt being late...wid me!! None cant beat me in that regard I guess...😆😆

frankly loved this part more than ur previous 10 parts' reason batane ki zarut nahi hai 'coz ADIL was there throughout'☺️ ☺️ so uptil now my fav part'Aww....glad to knw dat....after all 11th part bhi maine hi likha hai...😆😆....and well lets see...if it remains ur fav till end...or things change!! 😉😆

coming to part u scared me initially 😆 when adil's mom asked Why he isn't going too '& tum use akele nahi bhej sakte I thot u'll send him too' 😛😛😛Hehe....dont worry...they wont be apart for long...😆...and aise hi kaise bhej du apne sweetheart ko...proper reasoning chahiye na...😆😆 though donno how proper u'll feel the reasoning to be...😆😆

loved adil-mom scene he is so sweet & caring '😳 & what I said in beginning of this FF Momma's boy' 😳 he really understands his mom' pweese writer ji make her well soon ..my adil is so pareshan'😔 ek pareshani toh kum ho'then he can go on week long holiday too'😃😃😃 usko thoda njoy karne do'poor guy deserves it & not only ashna me also cant see him so vulnerable'😭😭😭 Aww....dont worry...all his pareshani will go away for sure...😳...even me cant see him so vulnerable!! 😳

& Adil how can u ask a question like "mera chehra dekhna acha nahi lagta" ☺️ ask us we can stare 24*7 😍 😍 Haha...wo to hai...but then he will feel awkward....if we all stare at him 24*7😆😆

Sumiji not fair u r making adil work till 9.30pm use thoda rest karne do'. Arre....he wasnt working...was jsut staring outside....and he was looking mesmerizing!! 😳Adil's office scene was good & his love 4 facing strong visits reminded me of KTH 😛😛 'where he oops I mean Sujal 😳😳😳 said --- "toofan se darne se behtar hai uska samna karo dard kum hota hai" 😳 😳 Aww...tab to aur bhi achha hua...😆 I didnt kwn of this scene...but yeah...Adil's character has lot of similarities wid Sujal....so no wonder..😆😉😳
lovely quote 👏 in magazine & wanna say 😛 to Adil jab chahe ruth sakta hai 'me ready to manaofy him'but a big question is I wud never want who mujhse ruthe'. 🤣 Yeah...thats the main point...agar hamare saath hoga...to hum usse kabhi dukhi hone hi nahi denge...😉😉

Adil-rishab FB was emotional felt so bad 4 him..he was so caring for rishab & rishab was mean'hope he realizes soon what adil is 😳 'how much he cares 4 him'but I also agree with rishab humare liye adil kabhi galat nahi hota' 😳 😳 😳 Hehe...Rishabh is not out n out neg charc...so lets see wat happens wid him....will reveal him later on...and as of now..thanks for liking that scene!! 😃

Good u made adil reach home safe & sound inspite of stong winds warna meri bhi fikr tapak tapak jhadti' 😆 Hehe...dont worry....koi toofan mere Adil ka baal bhi baka nahi kar sakta...😉😳

As 4 ashna galat baat hai 'phone kiya toh atleast Mr.raichand 😳😳😳 ke bare mein toh poocho & mind u he is not mamuli insaan 😳😳😳 '.he is ' ahem ahem long list' kabhi personally bataenge 😳😳 Lolz...wo list never ending hai Puri...zindagi beet jayegi...though we wudnt mind still...😉😆

Liked heer ' quite bubbly & chirpy 😃😃😃 Thanks 😳

& isn't adil so thotful 😳😳😳 of calling back ashna ..he talked so sweetly with heer' Heer don't take tension adil will come soon to jodhpur 😆 ' on 1 feb' 😳😳😳 & will have long stay there '😆 Lolz....dont worry...inshallah Raj se pehle Adil pohuch bhi jayega....and laut bhi ayega....dont want them to cum across...😆😆

Adil u r too much ghraham bell ne phone baat kane ke liye invent kiya hai chup rehne ke liye nahi 🤣 Lolz....but Adil Raichand hai wo....jo chahe wo kar sakta hai...😳

FB scenes were good my fav baby cockroach 😳😳 ' I am also scared of them'😉😉😉 Aww...Adil ko bheju kya?? 😆😆 (I'm sure u r nodding ur head vehemently) 😆😆

Good ashna realized that adil is smart & innovative & has unique aura 😳😳😳 main toh kab se keh rahi hoon' 😆Yeah...but wo ladki thodi kam smart hai hum se...isliye late ho gayi...😆

Ending was cute younger adil'😛😛😛 hehe...

Phew' kafi long comment hogaya na'😕😕😕 next time will try to be shorter 😛😛😛'warna writerji mere hi comment par hi ataki rahengi toh next update kaun likhega.. 😆 so continue soon asap & make adil smile a little bechara paeshaniyon ke bhoj ka maara'. 😆 Aww....will try my best...and dont worry...Apne Adil ko main zyada pareshan nahi karungi....he is my bestest Adil...😳😳

Continue soon' 😛😛 Thanks for the lovely comment dear....loved replying to u...😳

Thank you all for pressing the 'like' button...and letting me knw that u read the part...and actually 'like'd it...😉😆 Hope u keep 'liking' the parts ahead!!

Luv,

Sumi. 😳