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Oliveya Aniston

@Illumination

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#581

sumaiya .......

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#582

Nice one !!

Ashna is realizing her feelings for him and Adil is brushing off his feelings....This wedding will bring them closer for sure..

Continue soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#583

it was a really beautiful part..........

i fell in love with adil all over again........*sigh!!!!**dreamy!!!!

hope adil and ashna's relation progresses soon....

btw

i am overwhelmed to be dedicated a whole chapter and that too such a wonderful one....and i don't mind sharing with mana, afterall she too gives beautiful uds for her fics.....

i never knew nagging grandma ban ke apko pm karne se mujhe \chapter dedicate ho jayega😉

continue soon (main adat se baaz nahi anewali....😆)

signing off

luv

vidushi...

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#584

Awesome Sumi...ofcourse main teri nahi bal ke ud ki baat karr rahi hun...!!! kyoun ki tum toh awesome ho hi nahi sakti...kyoun ki tum toh hum sab ki achhi bachhi ho na...ha ha ha😆

toh adil jee...office me kis ka wait karr rahe the...!!! sayad kisi ka nahi...phir bhi...shekhar ke aane par kuch toh hua tha...😳

shekhar ko meri taraf se ek chochlate...arre yaar itna achha kaam kiya hai us ne...aur Rashi ko 4...kyoun tumhe pata hi hoga...😆

bichara shekhar...khud ke ghar pahunch jata hai yehi baht hai us ke liye aur adil ke gahr kaise jata...ha ha ha...!!! adil ne achha fasha rakha hai sab ko kaam me...😆

n finally na chahte hue bhi adil jee pahunch gaye vahan jahan ashna hai...!!! vaise yeh bhi nahi kaha ja sakta ke voh jana nahi chahta tha...!!! bass...khud ko dushron ke samne hamesha bandh kitab bana kar rakhana chahta hai adil...!!! jab ki ashna se use bhi milne ka mann tha...😉

rashi toh sara bhanda fod deti...par sahi waqt par us ne apni zuban par break laga di...aur ashna ko kuch bhi pata nahi chala...!!!😆

aur yeh kya...tum yahan heer aur prem ki shaadi karwa rahi ho...!!! arre yaar un dono ki toh shadi ho chuki hai...aur sayad bachhe bhi ho chuke honge na...!!! main nahi dekhti thi...KDMHMD...isiliye SAYAD kaha...!!! mere kahne ka matlab hai ki shaadi karwani thi toh GEET aur MAAN ki karwa deti...!!! kab se bichare shaadi ke liye taiyar ho kar baiothe hain par ho hi nahi pati shadi...!!! aur roz raat ko 9:30 se 10 baje tak intezaar karte karte meri mamma...serial walon ko galiyan deti hai...ha ha ha😆

khair point ki baat yeh hai ke heer ne sahi waqt par entry maar kar adil ko bacha liya...!!! aur vaise...adil milne kis se aaya tha vahan par...apni BIWI se...sachhi...😛

mujhe na maza aaya adil ko vahan dekhne ke baad ashna ka reaction dekh kar...ha ha ha...!!! us ne sapne me bhi nahi socha hoga...!!! par kabhi kabhi bina dekhe hi kuch sapne sach ho jate hain...😃

phir ear rings ka scene...awesome...!!! lekin yeh adil kya puch raha tha yaar...ladkiyon ke ears hote hi hain ear rings pahn ne k liyeaur kisi ke liye nahi......aur voh sawal kya puch raha tha...ha ha ha...😆

aur ashna ko us ke lecture se kya prob hai yaar...use LRL dikha do...!!! bata do ke lecture agar raj jaisa hua toh naina ki kya halat hui thi...😆

ab aate hain achar par...!!! vaise mujhe bhi baht pasand hain...yummi...!!! aur jab achar chura kar khana ho toh us achar ka taste aur bhi badh jata hai...😆

par hum ashna ke ACHAR aur adil ke VICHAR par aate hain...!!! ashna ko heer ke mom ne achar la kar un ke room me diya...toh mujhe bhi vohi laga jo adil ko laga tha...ha ha ha...!!! par ab is ke liye bhi ashna...adil ko blame karr rahi hai...!!! stupid ladki...itna toh samjho ki adil ki wajah se tumhe yeh baat pata toh chali...varna tum toh pata nahi aur kya kya karti...!!! lo...aaj kal toh bhalai ka zamana hi nahi raha...😆

adil ka temp hamesha high rahta hai...hona bhi chahiye...!!! kitna serious rahta hai yaar.. .mushkaan bhi us ke chehre par dar kar aati hai...lekin jab aati hai main flat ho jati hun...!!! par ashna ka use le kar concern hona achha laga...!!! voh us ke for head par hath rakhna aur adil ka anjane me jhatak dena...aur voh pura scene...baht cute tha...😃😳

ek baat thi ke...dono me ab voh gussewala rishta nahi hai...bal ke aur kuch khaash ehsaas badh raha hai...jis ka adil aur ashna ka toh pata nahi par main badi be-sabri ke sath intezaar karr rahi hun...😃

ab next part jaldi se likhna suru kar do...!!! aur agar likh diya hai toh...jaldi se post kar do...!!! hum aap ki PRATIKHSHA me hain...😃

Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#585

awesome update superb thank you for pm...

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#586

Update was tooooo good.

Why is Adil so restless...what is it that he is so worried about? Par lagta iss sawal ka jawad app humein next update mein he dengi..so moving on...

Adil samaj hi nahi pata ki kaise uska plan banjata hai Jodhpur jane ka...pehle for his office work and then to meet Ashna. Rashi ko bhi mauka mil jata hai Adil ko tease karne ka.

Shekhar knows how to ease a situation...his answer to Rashi was too funny.

Adil na chate hua bhi Heer ke ghar chala jata hai and uska swagat ashlesha karti hai...only to add to Adil's annoyance. Shukar hai ki Heer wahan aakar Adil ko bacha leti hai.

Adil is shocked to hear that Ashna shaadi mein pure dil se enjoy nahi kar rahi thi balki who chup-chap rehti hai...but does not react to it.

Adil is trying his best to curtail his feelings for Ashna..because he feels that he does not have the right. He cannot see her in any pain or sorrow.

Adil, ashna ki har chotti baat ko notice karta hai. Who samaj jata hai ki Ashna ke achaar ki pasand ka sab log galat meaning nikal rahe hai. He tries to warn her but she does not understand at first. Ashna nahi chahti ki uski har maat ko Adil se kyun joda jay.

But her annoyance is forgotten when she sees him so tired and stressed. She is always worried about his well being. Hope that Adil is alright nahi toh Ashna hai hi uska dhyan rakh ne ke liye.

please continue soon

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#587

Firstly …take care of urself… updating inspite of being not well … adil will get upset…hope u are fine now…else I will have to send dr. Aamir to u…😉😉😉

Coming to update …ahem ahem abhi se adil ko jodhpur bhej diya …. Adil too… mujhe akela chod diya not fair…😔 😔

Rashi is quite lively… pulling leg of his bro … her convo with aashna was nice… rashi ke pet mein baat nahi rukti na …

As 4 adil's surprise it's a best 1 a wife wud get😳😳😳😳 … & girls reaction on seeing adil …..spclly ashlesha…. Its similar to us… the way he introduced aashna ka pati.. hum bhi jante hai …*a long sigh*😆😆😆😆

So finally heer gets to meet Mr. raichand loved their interaction… wapis chala jau…

& bestest was aashna reaction…😆😆😆😆 galat baat aashna husband itni door se aaya… & u asking kyun aaye?😕😕😕 Adil's answer was wrong …use rashi & mom ne parcel & pack nahi kiya ….. sumiji ne kiya …😛😛😛😛

Earring sequence was nice……. I thot adil will help her in wearing …but he was lecturing aashna 😆😆😆

So finally ashna realized my adil is hungry…. Thank god she asked to have lunch….But I wonder🤔 why all were staring at adil like he is a antique piece… he is just like a normal person … just a little popular😉😉😉😉

Adil's comment abt achaar 🤣…I am surprised ashna didn't realized herself…waise maine bhi notice nahi kiya tha… I thot she loved achaar so she is eating it 😆😆😆😆 …never thot from that perspective…🤣 & ashna ab adil aa gaya toh aagaya let him stay & njoy the wedding ab wapis thodi na ja sakta hai…😃😃😃😃

Waise adil wud be looking too innocent while sleeping & haila…adil ko bhukhaar…😲😲😲 😒 & I didn't knew his temperature always remains high… ab hotness ka reason pata chala…😉😉😉😉 hope he is telling truth & he really is fine 😃😃😃😃 …like aashna we all are also still trying to figure out the mystery in his expressive eyes…but everytime get lost in them…😍 😍

Will wait 4 next part to c if ladies allow aashna to dance & if adil is proved right …😛 😆😆😆😆

Waise I didn't find part too long but inspite of being unwell u managed this much & updated really deserves a spl wala thanku…🤗& let adil rest & sleep often..warna who bhi aapki tarah bimaar ho jayega..😆😆😆

Continue asap 😃😃

p.s -- ahem ahem my signature ☺️---any comments 😛😛😛

Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#588

Lovely update, love your fic.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#589

What should i say mera to mood hi kharab ho gaya kal se maine 3 times full comments likh k is pe post kiya hai and jaise hi post kiya after that unable to connect and i lost that. That net is so irritating.
Again i am trying it let's see what happens this time.
Good n cute update.
Specially want to thank Shekhar n Rashi.They made him go Jodhpur, actually he was in no mood but Rashi did wonder and he has to go there to Ashna and now if his mom knows that he is going and she is happy about it than he has to do it anyhow.
Lovely brother sister concern, he does anything for her and thank god Rashi managed not to blurt out anything regarding the surprise. But Ashna is touched by the gesture of each person of the family except Adil but soon she will be.
Now when Adil is here so stupid things are happening with him. Someone is asking you are not supposed to be here so what are you doing here and someone is staring at him like fool, funny situation. Thank god he met with his wife but she behaved stupidly too.
Lovely scene of ear ring, really kahan dhyaan rehta hai is ka? He was not happy to see her in pain. And she knew him too well that he has not eaten anything and he has to go there where all of them were staring him.
But the most funny scene was of pickle scene, Ashna love pickles and the logic Adil gave her was funny and sensible too. I was laughing hard when i read that portion and now she is panic that what people will be thinking?
Good excuse Adil gave that he came here just to have pics of marriage of both. Maano ya na maano mohabbat hone lagi hai dono ko, aadat kab mohabbat ban jaayegi kaun jaanta hai?
pls now try to update it frequently.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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C3_IF

@C3_IF

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#590

well sorry 4 being late 2 comment on ths...but wat must i say ''AWESUM'' is the word wich defines ths part...keep it up sweety & thnx 4 a loooonnnnggg part 😊👏👍🏼🤗

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