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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx for the wonderful update.......
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Posted: 14 years ago

is baar jaldi comment karr rahi hun...hai na...??? 😆

fantastic...
pata hai Sumi...sab se jyada anokha scene koun sa tha...vohi fonewala...!!! jab dono ek dushre se bina kuch bole hi fone thame khade the...!!! par kyoun...??? adil agar us taraf se fone rakh deta...toh kya farq padta...aur ashna ko kya jarurat thi adil ki baat mann ne ki...!!! par kuch toh tha yaar...jo baht khaash laga...
adil...kuch hatke hain...!!! main Raj ki nahi adil ki baat karr rahi hun...!!! kyoun ke raj toh kuch nahi balki pura hatke hai...ha ha ha...!!! khair point par aate hain...!!! adil aur us ke mom ka scene...aisa laga jaise voh apne mom ki har baat samajh raha ho...!!! yeh bhi achha hua ke ashna ne sun liya un ki batain...kam se kam use is baat ka ehsaash toh hoga na ke voh jitna bura inshan adil ko samajhta hai...voh us se kahin jyada achha hai...!!!
voh sab ki care karta hai...par us ka kya...??? dadi ki khushi...apne maa...sis... ashna...sabhi ki...!!! par use samajhnewala us ghar me sirf rashi aur us ki mom hain...!!! par ek baat achhi thi ke...ashna bhi ab use samajhne ki koshish karr rahi hai...!!! aur voh bhi khud ke bina jaane ke voh kyoun is inshan ke bare me itna soch rahi hai...aur jann ne ki koshish karr rahi hai...!!!
adil aur rishabh ke scene na baht achhe se likha hai tum ne...!!! par ek min ke liye mujhe laga ke rishabh par ek bucket thanda pani dal dun...!!! winter season chal raha hai toh...is ka asar us par toh pakka ho hi jayega...!!!
agar adil ko un ke father ne sab kuch diya hai toh kuch soch samajh kar hi diya hoga na...!!! tabhi yeh rishabh...dadi ko bhi adil ke khilaf kar ke rakha hai...
phir se kahungi...tum ne jaisa chrch adil ko diya hai na...voh sach me sirf ek novel me hi ho sakte hain...kyoun ki aaj ki lyf me aise inshan ko imagine karna bhi mushkil hai...!!! sach me... kisi bhi ladki ka dream man hoga voh...
ashna...voh bhi toh adil ko miss karr rahi hai na...!!! par us ke liye toh chalta hai...kyoun ke us ne kafi pareshan kiya hai adil ko...!!! par adil ki lyf me thodi khushi de do yaar...!!! last maine use mushkurate hue tab dekha tha...jab voh ashna ko apne car me bithane ke liye 'band ke sath sorry' bolne ko taiyar tha...ab thoda sa rehmo-karam adil par bhi kar do...!!! ab voh bhi toh tumhara fav hai na...
vaise ek umeed hai ke sayad adil...vahan chala jaye...ya phir ashna jaldi laut aaye...!!! yaar...dono ko aise alag alag dekha nahi jata...!!! khaash kar ke adil ko...!!! office ka voh scene na...baht hi jyada achha laga mujhe...matlab ek ajeeb si feelings aayi...lovely...
ab tum kyoun mushkura rahi ho...!!! hassna bandh karo...aur next part likhna suru karo...!!!!! par sach kahun...mujhe na NRI ka bhi part jaldi chahye...!!! interesting mode pe choda hai yaar...!!! aur yahna toh main kuch guess bhi nahi karr pa rahi hun ke tum aage adil ke sath aur kya kya karrnewali ho...bichare ko dukhi hi karr ke rakha hai...
ab jaldi se ud karti ho ke... main tumhara aur dimag khayun...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Sumi.....

Thank you for updating this fic..... mai pareshan ho gai thi ki tu kab update karegi....
So beautiful....so Ashna Adil ko miss kar rahi hai par wo samajh nahi paa rahi hai....aur Adil bhi.... wo shayari achhi thi...kisne likhi hai...Adil ne.....ya tumne...😉

Time kam hai isliye detailed update nahi de rahi hun.... but iit was an awesome part....par very less of Adil and Ashna.... continue soon dear.... and wish you a very Happy New Year....

Take care
Love
Guglu
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Posted: 14 years ago
So she has gone and when GD said Adil to go with her as usual he denied in his super cool way.
Ashna how much u try to deny the fact u can't my dear. U care of him and so as he, he likes u but he would never say that and now u have started liking him n missing him too.
It's not good manners mam to listen others discussion like this, but thank god he didn't see u there otherwise what excuse you was going to give him?
Liked the FB as it was necessary to know why has Rishabh left the home? And second one was interesting too as Adil remembered his mom there on window. He is so alone and that quote suited & described his persona well.
She informed Rashi that she has reached safely and came to know that Mr. Raichand has not come to home yet, i don't know why but i was feeling like he was scolded by Ashna right than but she didn't do that.
Heer came there n forced her to call him right than as she didn't want but that was good and when she called him and asked has he returned home and taken his food i liked that, like a typical Indian wife.
But he understood that Heer is with her there and he acted as if he is talking to her so long and both forgot the world. Till when he will live alone? Being a wife with him and others too he is alone still, i am not happy to see him like this.
try to update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part !!
I feel soo bad for poor Adil !
I loved the quote -

Sapno se dil lagane ki aadat nahi rahi,

Har waqt muskurane ki aadat nahi rahi,

Ye soch ke ki koi manaane nahi aayega

Ab hume rooth jaane ki aadat nahi rahi.

Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 14 years ago
Happy new year awesome part dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
wen do we get the next update????

Sorry for disturbing u but have got addicted to Adil😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

wen do we get the next update????

Sorry for disturbing u but have got addicted to Adil😳



Awwwwe...thats not disturbing at all...in fact I actually find it flattering for me....to see u all getting impatient...😳...though sounds bad....still its nice to knw sum1 is addicted to Adil...☺️....and am truly glad that u are...😉...however I need to UD NRI before this one.....and so I guess...UD will take a bit more tym....😕

Sorry to keep u w8ing....but just one more week....things will be better after this...hopefully!! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Update was too good.

Adil's mom wants him to go with Ashna, but he tells that how could he go when he has soo much work in the office and also when he has to look after his mother. He complaints that she does not make any efforts to improve her health. But then also understands that this is her way to cope with her grief. He feels her sorrow and loss. Seeing the pain in his eyes Ashna gets disturbed. Her instincts are to comfort Adil in any way possible…but she is confused about her own feelings. She does not want to admit that she will miss him.

Adil's life has been very hard. First he had to adjust with his new family and just when everyone has started to accept his as a part of the family, Rishabh's father's death shatters his life. Only his mother and Rashi are concerned about Adil, whereas Rishabh and his dadi hate him and does not leave any chance to cause him pain.

Rishabh cannot bear that his father had left everything in Adil's name. he feels betrayed and blames Adil for everything. Adil makes sure that Rishabh does not face any problems in his life. He is always there to watch over him.

Ashana is surprised to see how much her friends respect Adil. She wants to tell him something but does not know how to express her feelings infront of him. Even Adil is missing her but he would never admit it, not even to himself. Their silence speaks volumes and both of them are lost in each other over the phone. Ashna is surprised when she ends up thinking about all the times that he has spent with him

Waiting for your next update…please continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
ahem ahem am i late 😛😛😛 not much I guess… but still sowie …😈 so a happy new year to Adil 😳 😳 😳 & ofcourse to u too….😛😛😛 & bada wala thanku 🤗for bringing in Adil in very first week of new year…😳😳😳

frankly loved this part more than ur previous 10 parts… reason batane ki zarut nahi hai …coz ADIL was there throughout…☺️ ☺️ so uptil now my fav part…

coming to part u scared me initially 😆😆😆😆 when adil's mom asked Why he isn't going too …& tum use akele nahi bhej sakte I thot u'll send him too… 😛😛😛

loved adil-mom scene he is so sweet & caring …😳😳😳😳 & what I said in beginning of this FF Momma's boy… 😳 😳 😳😳 he really understands his mom… pweese writer ji make her well soon ..my adil is so pareshan…😔 ek pareshani toh kum ho…then he can go on week long holiday too…😃😃😃 usko thoda njoy karne do…poor guy deserves it & not only ashna me also cant see him so vulnerable…😭😭😭

& Adil how can u ask a question like "mera chehra dekhna acha nahi lagta" ☺️ ask us we can stare 24*7 😍 😍

Sumiji not fair u r making adil work till 9.30pm use thoda rest karne do…. Adil's office scene was good & his love 4 facing strong visits reminded me of KTH 😛😛 …where he oops I mean Sujal 😳😳😳 said --- "toofan se darne se behtar hai uska samna karo dard kum hota hai" 😳 😳
lovely quote 👏👏👏👏 in magazine & wanna say 😛😛😛😛 to Adil jab chahe ruth sakta hai …me ready to manaofy him…but a big question is I wud never want who mujhse ruthe…. 🤣

Adil-rishab FB was emotional felt so bad 4 him..he was so caring for rishab & rishab was mean…hope he realizes soon what adil is 😳😳😳😳 …how much he cares 4 him…but I also agree with rishab humare liye adil kabhi galat nahi hota… 😳 😳 😳

Good u made adil reach home safe & sound inspite of stong winds warna meri bhi fikr tapak tapak jhadti… 😆😆😆😆😆

As 4 ashna galat baat hai …phone kiya toh atleast Mr.raichand 😳😳😳 ke bare mein toh poocho & mind u he is not mamuli insaan 😳😳😳 ….he is … ahem ahem long list… kabhi personally bataenge 😳😳

Liked heer … quite bubbly & chirpy 😃😃😃

& isn't adil so thotful 😳😳😳 of calling back ashna ..he talked so sweetly with heer… Heer don't take tension adil will come soon to jodhpur 😆😆😆😆😆 … on 1 feb… 😳😳😳 & will have long stay there …😆😆😆😆

Adil u r too much ghraham bell ne phone baat kane ke liye invent kiya hai chup rehne ke liye nahi 🤣

FB scenes were good my fav baby cockroach 😳😳 … I am also scared of them…😉😉😉

Good ashna realized that adil is smart & innovative & has unique aura 😳😳😳 main toh kab se keh rahi hoon… 😳 😆😆😆😆

Ending was cute younger adil…😛😛😛

Phew… kafi long comment hogaya na…😕😕😕 next time will try to be shorter 😛😛😛…warna writerji mere hi comment par hi ataki rahengi toh next update kaun likhega.. 😆😆😆😆 so continue soon asap & make adil smile a little bechara paeshaniyon ke bhoj ka maara…. 😆😆😆😆

Continue soon… 😛😛

Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago

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