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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: akkiii

hellos ...chalo vadhiya hai k aapka result mast aayaa ... n good that u updated earlier ...Hehe...khushi ke maare raha nahi gaya mujhse!!πŸ˜†

Though this part was a bit serious ...(doesnt go with my mood ...baarish ho rhi hai delhi meinπŸ˜›)...but u wrote exceptional ...Aww...actually this whole fic mostly doesnt go wid my mood...thats why I take so long to UD...πŸ˜†...but u found it exceptional...hope in a gud way!!😳
Aashna shpuld realise that she loves him ...bothering wont help ...becoz she does love him Hehe...she will take her amount of tym to accept...tubelight hai...cant do anything wid that...πŸ˜†
N adil ..he should noe right that he loves her dearly...he fasted ..n its nowhere written that a guy should fast in karwa chauth ( except for DDLJ n now every kekta soap)...yet he did so ..n without telling anybody ..wats the point of confusion man ...may be he is scared of her reaction ..dats y not accepting his feelings Hehe...I wud say...he has his own sets of insecurities...and they r still no revealed!!😳


To Adil
Be a man ... accept ur love ...n shower her with it ..I think guy should take the initiative ...since he forcefully made her marry him (adil fans will kill me hehe)..watever her decision be ..just once for all ..Say it Man Hehe...am sure...if he cud...he wud!!😊 But no worries...main usse apne tarike se bulwaungi...πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
N he fainted ..u made him faint ladki ...awww ...I hope he is not allergic to cheeze pizzaπŸ˜‰ ..main leke aaun jaanuπŸ˜ƒ Nope...not allergic at all...U bring it...πŸ˜†...waise ye bhi badhiya hai...he faints and Nehu runs to make Palak Paneer while u r all set to bring cheese pizza!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Khatirdaari ho rahi hai...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
waise Adil is surprized becoz she cares ..yes she does ...awww summi muah muah ...Hehe...kisses for me!!😲😳 Yippie...none sends me kisses...they r always for Adil..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...thank you Dii...πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
N thanks for considering my request n not making her bash jaanu ...oh I wud have been so heartbroken Ab har baar chilati rahegi to achha nahi lagega na...and I shud thank you for making that request...I guess...it was gud and different take of their relation!!😳
N she is dumbo no 1 ...he fasted for her ...n she doesnt want to know ...Why ...she should understand right ...sumi jaan budhhi de isko Hehe...me rushing to get sum buddhi for her...next part me mil jayega...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
now once for all ... very nice update ..n I dint find it long ...(ladki tu space chhod chhod k page bharti h n budhhu banati hai hmmm😑Ahemz...aisi baat nahi hai...its just...mujhe asani hoti hai...jab fonts bade ho and space ho...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†)...but I got u ...hehe .Hehe...😳..jokes apart ...thoda bada part next time ..n thoda romantic part bhi ...tu request sunti hai na meri isliye ...again a sincere request ...(my mood's so romantic right now coz of rains ..I cant help it ...dun mind)Hehe...not all Dii...its just...iss fic ko ek jhatke me romantic banana is not really possible...but I hope to have their scenes...wid much intensity of emotions...and hope that makes it a long part!!😳
love u
akki

Thanks for ur wonderful comment Dii...😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

First things first πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...Congrats πŸ₯³

...(Dj party chaiye πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³)... on getting Golden A+ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ ...literally naam roshan kar diya πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ... hope u got A+ in chemistry as well πŸ˜›πŸ˜›... spcl best of luck πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ ka effect hai i guess 😳 😳...Hehe thanks...am all ready for the DJ party? Hope we get it soon...πŸ˜‰...and yeah...Chemistry me bhi aya A+...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...Inspiration worked!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³

coming to part iske liye shall i also give u A+ 😳😳 (here A refers to Adil) 😳😳 ...coz Adil was present throughout the part ☺️😍 Hehe...chalo gr8!! Maine intentionally usse har scene me nahi rakha tha...πŸ˜†...but guess wo aa hi jata hai...coz soch to ghum phirke wahi jati hai na...πŸ˜† ... jahan nahi tha...wahan dream sequence mein aagaya πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜†... so loved the part more than usual 😳😳.Glad to hear that Puriji...thanks!!😳.. & ofcourse ... as Dr. Chandra said...πŸ˜‰ . "update surely had slight improvement ...just a small improvement " ... πŸ˜›πŸ˜† Ashna ki tubelight jalne lagi hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... Hehe...yeah. Its just fluctuating now...give me 2 more parts tym...pura 1000 Volts ka light jalaungi...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Now i am more than determined to join Adil's office 😳😳 ... poor boy kahin bhi behosh ho jata 😭... i will surely take spcl care of Adil 😳 ...but then main behosh na ho jau πŸ˜³πŸ˜†... pata chala adil ko meri care karni padegi 🀣Haha...well...even I am pretty serious to let u join!!πŸ˜‰ And no worries...main tum dono ko sambhal lungi...bas mujhe tym to tym Raj ka dose milta jaye!!😳

wanna ask can i kick dadi too πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... tang kar diya mere adil ko ... ek toh poore dinse bookha tha πŸ˜”... Hehe...ye bhi koi puchhne wali baat hai...she is all yours!! In fact take her wid you...and practice ur kicks wid her...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

good to know...Adil's mom's health is improving .πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ... finally hero smiled 😍(thanku sumiji )πŸ˜›... U r welcum...usse ek do baar smile kara deti hu to mujhe achha hi lagta hai...πŸ˜†

Love shekhar πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜† such a caring friend πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³... dont know if he did heart attack to adil 😳...but ashna ko zaroor mil gaya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... & usse zyada mujhe πŸ₯Ί.😭😭. Adil fainted ...Aww...never mind!! He is all right...maine usse bahut achhese se dinner karwaya...isiliye I always make him eat alone...so that I can personally take full care!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Adil is such a sweetheart 😳... biwi ki zara si chot nahin dekh sakta πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... *adil my finger is also hurting* πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Lolz...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...am sure he wud take care of you too...he is a gud person after all..😳

Ashna's dream sequence was 2 gud 😳 😳... hai hai how romantic Adil gets 😍
"I love the way u look at me" Hehe...glad u liked it...and I really hope...the real romance wud have more intensity...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³

& Poor adil fir pareshan hogaya πŸ˜†...biwi kyun pareshan hai...πŸ˜†... give him one day to relax sumiji πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Hehe...pareshani to uske saath hamesha rehti hai...I was thinking main apna naam pareshani rakh lu...may be then I can be wid him 24*7πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Overall Lovely Update πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³... Njoyed reading 😍... Glad u did...thanks!!πŸ˜ƒ

continue soon πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...like this time πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ
Not that soon though...I hope to continue veryyy...soon...πŸ˜³πŸ˜†




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 20
hey honey how are ur results? hello Dii...it was gr8 Dii...thanks!!πŸ˜ƒ
awesome dear...
so Adil did fast for Ashna...Yup...πŸ˜‰
he fainted? oh no but cant blame him...
itni tension and so many planning, not taking care of himself aur uper se he fast for his dear wife...hehe...yeah...ab superman to wo hai nahi...faint hona hi tha!!πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
wow his mom is showing improvements...
thats good...Yeah...finally Adil can be relaxed abt one thing!! πŸ˜ƒ
but i didnt like him feeling so pessimistic...I knw its sad...but thats him...😳
aur Ashna dear has heard their convo too...
poor her shes trying to understand what her feelings are...Hehe...bas tubelight hai wo...to taking sum tym...πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
love the care and the love they share for each other though they are not showing or dont wanna show is nice...Glad u like that Dii...πŸ˜ƒ
cont soon dear...Trying my best...😳

All the Best for ur admissions too...Thank you Dii...for always showering so much luck...and thanks for the lovely comment!! 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Awesome , Superb and too good



Thanks dear...am glad u read the part and liked it...😳 Thanks for commenting!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

CONGRATS for performing so well in your exams. Marks toh acche aane hi the, itni mehnat jo ki thi. πŸ‘ hehe...thanks!! Ur gud lucks were also meanigful...πŸ˜ƒ
Update was SUPERB . You have expressed the confusion in Adil and Ashana's feelings very well . πŸ‘πŸΌAm glad u think so...😳
Dadi is angry with Adil for being late and making Ashna wait. But Adil does not explain himself even though he was not at fault. Rashi on the other had is confident that adil would have a strong reason for being late. Yeah...Rashi knws n believes her Ab that much...πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
Ashana accepts Adil's apology because she knows that he is sincere, and is surprised with herself for being able to forgive Adil so easily. Hehe...just his sincere sorry was enuf...πŸ˜‰
Adil does not trust his fate, he hesitant to feel any happiness out of the fear of losing it. Infact his greatest fear is that he might lose his family again, a family which has come together after a long time. 😭He has his own insecurities, his fears like everyone else!!
Ashana is worried😲 to see Adil so scared and tensed and all she wants to comfort him. Hmm..quite unknowingly though...she wants to be a part of his every feeling!! 😳
Shekhar is furious 😑with Adil for coming to office and not taking rest even after having fainted yesterday. Adil understands his concern but he(adil) does not know hot ot relax and rest.Hehe...sahi kaha!! He just cant rest!!πŸ˜†
Finally Ashna finds out that Adil had come late because he had fainted due to the fast that he had kept for her and this confuses and disturbs her the most.
Adil realises that Ashan has over heard his and Shekhar's conversation and knows the truth. Adil cannot bear to see Ashan is any pain and tells her that the only reason he did not tell her about his health was because he did not want worry her. It had meant a great deal to him, that she kept fast for him.Yup...as said in the beginning both r confused abt their own behaviours and also abt the other's behaviour!!😳
Ashana on the other hand is shocked😲 by her own thoughts about Adil. She keeps thinking of him all the time. She does not want to aceept that Adil actual cares for her and she has developed deep feelings for him. Her 😳dream narrated her passion and love for him . Hehe...it surely did...bas wo accept kar le...πŸ˜‰When will she realise that avoinding him is not going to solve her confusion. Kya dialogue likaha hai apne'" I love the way u look at me & the way u look away from me" too good and absolutely perfect.Aww...am glad u feel so dear...πŸ˜ƒ...in fact this dialogue has been liked by all...and that really serves my purpose...πŸ˜ƒ
Adil is very worried to see Ashana so restless. Mr. Adil Raichand jo business ki har problem ko samaj aur solve kar lete hai, apni biwi ki pareshani ko nahi samaj pata.πŸ˜‰Yeah...out of genre for him...πŸ˜†
When will they learn to listen to their hearts and accept that they both love each other. Rishtey ki shuruat chahe jaisi bhi rahi ho, iska matlab yeh nahi hota ki who badal kar pyar ka rishta nahi ban sakta.Exactly...and I think when two ppl are so closely connected to each other in every way...they r bound to feel a gr8 deal of emotion for each other...and most of the tym its Love!!😳
Please continue soon...waiting eagerly to see what Adil will do next to help ashana. Will try to UD soon dear...thanks for the lovely comment!! Enjoyed replying 2 you!! πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ivre

HEY SUMI Hii Sur...πŸ˜ƒ

i was really really waiting for this one... your fic is becoming better with every update.Ohh...glad u feel so...as this is wat I wud want always!! wud always want u to feel better wid each update...😊
Adil seems to be missing on some really important points here...lol.. poor guy.Hehe...now Ashna makes him confused too...πŸ˜†
That imagination scene had me wanting to burst out laughing. But I couldnt. U know why? Cuz I was reading the ud in the middle of a lecture. LOL. Couldnt resist. Damn...lecture ke bich me!!😲😲
Anyway m gonna read it again. Ohh...donno wat to say!! Am shocked...😲
thnks for pm U r welcum...and I really hope it was worth ur risk...πŸ˜•πŸ˜³

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ivre

and yes, many congrats for the great result. I hope you get the admission where you want. Note padhna bhool gayi thi ;D



Awweee...thanks for the gud luck...I definitely need that!! Btw...I never got to knw ur result...😳...hope u also got admission in ur desired place...and its ok...main bhi kayi baar note padhna bhul jati hu...bas likhna nahi bhulti...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


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Posted: 14 years ago

chalo...ab baht maze le liya mere bina...abhi main phir se entry le rahi hun...tumhara jeena haram karne...ha ha ha...πŸ˜†

yeh 129 page k update par mere uchh-vichar hain...πŸ˜ƒ

toh aage badhen...πŸ˜›

as usall AWESOME...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

dono hi apne apne office me akele baithe...ek dushre ko miss karr rahe hain...achha hai...!!! par ashna kuch jyada hi bhav kha rahi thi...matlab apne dil me uth rahe sawalon ko khud hi daba rahi hai...yaar use thoda sa aqal kisi se udhar la kar de...ke jo sawal uss ke dil me aa rahe hain...un ka jawab sochne me agar thoda sa dimag kharch kare...toh faida use hi hoga...πŸ˜†

aur rahi adil ki baat...uss se koi complaint nahi hai...!!! mujhe pata hai...voh apne feelings bahar le kar nahi aayega...kyoun ke jiss ke liye uss ke dil me feelings hain...voh hi use apne zindagi ki dushman samajhti hai...toh voh bhi kya kare...

Ashna aur shekhar ki lunch bhi badhiya rahi...aur shekhar ka comment bhi...

vaah...kya dhashu tarike se Rishabh ko Office aane ke liye Adil ne convince kiya...!!! aise jaise use...Rishabh ke ander aur bahr sab baat pata ho...!!! rishabh ko kuch kehne ka mauka bhi nahi diya...bass bol diya aur chala gaya...!!! par maza tab aaya...jab dushre din sab ko shocked karte hue voh office bhi gaya...

arey haan...ek baat toh bhul hi gayi...jab adil...shekhar se baat karr raha tha...hasste hue aur madam jee shaq karr rahi thi...!!! zara tere fic ke heroine se puch ke toh bata...ke agar use Adil ki koi parwah nahi hai toh use kyoun farq pada ke...voh kis se baat karr ke mushkura raha tha...!!! hum toh bhai baht khush hai uss ke mushkurane se...vaise bhi Sumi aur Ashna...use mushkurane ka mauka hi kahan dete hain...

aur mere Adil ko kitna dukh bhi hua ke...ashna use miss nahi karr rahi thi...jab ki sachhai humain pata hai...

lo...iss ladki me toh sense hi nahi hai...ek no ki stupid hai...!!! ek baat use thik se bhi samajh me nahi aati...Adil bol kya raha tha...aur voh samajh kya rahi thi...!!! adil toh bass uss ki care karr raha tha isi liye fast rakhne ko mana kiya...aur yeh toh pata nahi kya kya bake ja rahi thi...!!! sachhi me bolu...Sumi...tere fic ki main villian toh Ashna hi hai...ha ha ha...

n adil late aaya...achha kiya...hamesha Ashna ki baat kyoun maane...!!! hadh hai...Ashna koun si uss ki baat maanti hai...huh...

bichara jarur din bhar bhuka hoga...tabhi toh ashna ko bhej kar khud chup ke se paani pee liya...aur voh stupid kuch nahi samajhti...khaye ja rahi thi...huh...

next part padh chuki hun na...isi liye uss par jyada gussa aa raha hai...

chal ab next ud par apne uchh-vichar prakat karne ja rahi hun...πŸ˜›

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Posted: 14 years ago

hmmm...dil ko shanti mil gayi...ha ha ha...ab itna badhiya update tha ke kya kahun...πŸ˜†

sachhi bolu toh maine ise tabhi padh liya tha jab tum ne update kiya tha...par main thoda nahi baht busy thi...isi liye comments karr hi nahi payi...πŸ˜‰

sab se pahle Congo-songo sweety...akhir tum ne hamara naam Roshan karr hi diya...!!! kuch sikhe tum se electricity wale bhi...ke roshan rahe jahan toh kitna achha lagta hai...ha ha ha...πŸ˜†

vaise iss update ke liye mujhe tum se koi complaint nahi hai...kyoun ke maine her ek jagah Adil ko paya...yahan tak ki ashna ki soch me bhi aur voh bhi positively...he he he...isi liye iss baar thodi kamm daant padegi ashna ko...πŸ˜†

lo doc ne bhi khush khabri de di...adil ki mom thik ho rahi hain...!!! mujhe lagta hai yeh Rishbh ki wajah se hai...!!! matlab ke...rishabv ka wapas aa jana...aur uss ka Adil ke sath kaam karna...yeh ek reason ho sakta hai unn ke thik hone ki...!!! vaise Thanks sumi...tumne iss update me bhi adil ko mushkurane ka mauka diya hai...mera dil toh garden garden ho gaya...πŸ˜ƒ

Adil behosh ho gaya tha...!!! mujhe pata hai...voh jaan bujh kar kabhi bhi ashna ko hurt nahi karega...yeh toh Ashna hai jo use hurt karti rahti hai...

aur yeh dadi itni irritate kyoun hai yaar...ek no ki jhagdalu lagti hain mujhe toh...febiquick laga de unn ke muh par...Adil ko bhi aaram milega...humain bhi...aur khud dadi ko bhi...ha ha ha...

vaah...shekhar ne ajnane me kitna achha kaam kar diya...!!! vaise adil aur shekhar ki bonding kafi cute hai...!!! shekhar ka gusse me aa kar cabin lock karna aur adil ka master key se use khol kar ander aana...n all that...sab kuch sweet sweet tha...par sab se achha kaam toh shekhar ne hi kiya...yeh kah kar ki adil faint ho gaya tha...!!! sahi hai yaar...sirf ladkiya faint ho sakti hain kya...ladke nahi...!!! lekin wajah toh kuch aur hi thi...jiss ko koi aur bhi sunn rahi thi...par voh faint nahi hui...

ashna ki finger me chot...aur adil toh kitna pareshan ho gay...aise jaise... abhi stiches lagenge...!!! ashna ne toh nahi samjha...par uss ke dil ne jarur samjha...tabhi voh kuch din tak use ignore karr rahi thi...!!! dil ke jazbaton ko control me lane ki kafi koshish karr rahi thi bichari...

par faida kya hua...Adil ke aane se pahle uss ka dil aa gaya...ashna ke paas...aur voh scene baht romantic thi yaar...!!! ek taraf ashna apne feelings ko ignore karr rahi thi...aur dushri taraf...uss ne apne samne jis adil ko imagine kiya...voh vohi keh raha tha...jo voh sunn na chahti thi...varna voh yeh sab imagine hi kyoun karti...hai na...
I love the way u deny it. (and he comes closer to her cupping her face in his palms) I love the way u look at me & the way u look away from me.Both ways say that you feel for me. And we both knw wat this feeling is called. Right?

kya dhashu dail mara hai...adil ne...ashna yun statue bann ke kyoun baithi thi...kuch toh bol deti yaar...

aur gusse me hi sahi...par ashna ke dil se kuch baatain toh bahar aayi...jo adil thik se samajh nahi pya...!!! par Ashna ne kuch toh kaha hi tha...jise adil ko thik se samjhta toh...natiza kuch aur hi aata...

aur adil use galat nahi samajh raha hai...voh toh ashna hai...jo apni prob Adil se share nahi karti...isi liye Adil ne kisi aur se baat karne ki kahi...varna ashna toh use apne life ka prob kehti hain...huh...

abhi jaldi se update chahiye...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Great and lovely parts πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
congrats for result.
Try to update soon.



Thanks for the congo 😳...and am glad u liked the part!! Thanks for commenting!!πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ

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