U R MINE! ( mayur ff)upd part 26 on pg 112 6/ 2 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Just read part 1 and 2-both were brilliant. Please continue soon and please add me to your pm list.

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hey guyzz! h r u all haan? its feel gr8 that u all like my ff thanks alot ager mayank k andaaz main kahoon tu DIL SAY THANK U 😉 ! and ya this part i want to dedicate my newly frd on IF sujata
so dear sujata this once 4 u!! hope u all like it!


PART# 3

MAYANK was sitting in a car and desperately watching each n every girl, who were enter in collage, by seeing each n avery girl he is saying to himself "na she is not that one definately" he feel exostic now so he thought may be RV is just making fun of me, in all these girls there is not a single feature is like my dreamgirl, he want to start his car but suddenly he saw,
" an angle sitting on a bike she is continously speaking he saw his moving rose petal lips, her long black hairs disturbing her face due to air she is trying to move her tendrils frm her face, and he saw a moon, a moon in a morning".
OMG is that real or i m seeing another dream of my dream girl he speak to himself, he lost in her completely, he walk after her slowly and steadily, she enter in class and mayank stop there he is standing with a pillar he thought he will wait untill she come back 4rm the class he want to talk to her, want see her closely want to touch her feel her that is she real or he is dreaming again now, he lost in thoughts that he listen the bell class over bell he feel so excited and waiting desperately when she will come, as all students coming through the door but his eyes searching for her, suddenly his mobile start ringing he pick up the phone their is RV on call,
RV: hey mayank dekha ussay bata hay na bilkul teri dream girl?
M: haan yaar lagta hay kisse nay mere imagination say nikal ker ussay meray samnay khara ker diya hay! he said in lost emotion.
RV: hmmm waisey tujhay yeh batanay k liye phone kiya hay k uss lerke ka naam pata chal gaya hay, likinn...
M: likin kyaaa jaldee bata? he said eagerly..
RV: per humain kya milayga???
M: oohh jo tu chahey bus mujhay us ka naam bata!! he said annoyangliy
RV: teri car right!!!
M: tunhare huwi ab tere sauday bazi khatam hogai ho tu mujhay us ka naam batayga?? he said gringly.
RV: hmmm "NUPURRR"
M: NUPUURRRR he take a deep breath as he absorbing her name in his braeth he closed his eyes and take her name once again "MY NUPURRR" then suddenly he back to his sense and move back toward the class but class is empty he feel terrible.
M: where is she gone, my godness, where i can find her? he said to himself and run towards the carridoor but she is not there mayank is busy looking here and there then suddenly a cool breeze thouch his face a very know fragnance he feel he move towards the exict door of collage, he find her, he feels he get his world his life back, he runtoward his car and move fastly toward her.
nupur is busying in her thought she reminding her self that wht will she do for suhani birth day. as she celebrating her last birthday with her family and after she will celebrate her every birthday in her sasuraal, nupur is smiling in her thoughts than suddenly a car stop infront of her, a very handsome hunk wearing black tee and blue jeans his eyes coverd with sunglasses which make him more lookable, nupur feel shiverd cross her spine he looked that man with qustioning eyes and put his all courage and said
N: wht?
M: sit in i will drop u, where ever u want to go? he said with a killing smile on his face, nupur feels her blood start boiling as she take a deep breath to control her anger and said annoyangily to him
N: listen mister! whoever u are! god give me two legs i know how to walk very well, so if u realy want to give a free lift so there is many old peolples standing over busstop u can drop them, she said and start waliking fastly as she feel her forhead get wet, as mayank in car put his head back on his driving seat, he smiling and his eyes sparkling that he found wht he want to found and said wisperingly to himself " PERFECT"
she feel that the car is continously following her, she start running and finally she got auto she sit in it and said,
N: bhaiya jaldee chalooo... she takes breath heavely as she saw backward she not found that car so feel relaxced.


"AT SHARMA MANSION"

MAYANK running towards his mansion and screamed loudly,
M: bengi bengi my frd where u r? come listen i got my life today come yaar jaldee... bengi run towards the hall as he listen mayank voice he reached their and asked
B: wht happend chotay sahab? i never see u so much happy and delighted wht happend tell me he said enthusistically, mayank was sitting on a soofa he put his legs on a table and give alook to benge and said,
M: i found my love, my life bengi! he said with a gr8 smile,
B: wht r u saying? who is she, where when tell me jaldee na? he said excitedly, he laughed and said,
M: hang on man! i found her now in a collage and her name is NUPURR then he told him all the story till the gang converstion about her dreamgirl then wht rv said how he finds her and how he talk to her and wht her rply. after told him all inncedent he feels bengi is little uncomfortable he asked to him,
M: wht happend benji? r u not happy? bengi saw him and node his head and said.
B: no chotay sahab! i m very happy for u but...... he stop saying something mayank saw him and asked wht say na, bengi looked at him and said
B: i dont understand! why u asked her for a lift, as u want her in ur life forever! and u gave ur first imperission like flirty brat, wht she will thinking right now about u! why u did this? bengi said in confusing manner, mayank who is listening silently to bengi looked at him give him a petty smile and said,
M: bengi u know i always thought about my dreamgirl i loved my dreamgirl not becoz of her only beauty but i always want my dreamgirl with a strong character, u tell me if i asked any comon girl for a lift will she reject it, or give me lecture about helping old-onces? bengi noded his head and said,
B: never! they loved to spend more n more time with u! mayank smiled and said
iM: this is a difference beteween my nupuurr and other comon girl when i saw her i feel gr8 but after talking to her i feel completey perfect and u r right my first impression must be bad, but its important for knowing her he smiled
B: now wht next? wht u will do? mayank looked at him take a releaf breath and said
M: "i m going to propose her tommorow"!


PRECAP: samrat nupur engagment and mayank proposal!!
-Samira- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing part dear thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Brilliant update Komal. Please continue soon and thanks for the pm.
Alisha x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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uff..mayu is such a sweetheart...loved the part...but the precap was shocking..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing update
finally they met.....
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG komal, u dedicate to me???? i mean ME????😲
thnks dear...........oops sorry.............oops i withdrwn my sorry n thnks.
nice update dear...........amazing..........🤗
Mayur is such a sweetheart........he is always a handsome hunk❤️😳
love him❤️
waiting 4 ur next updt.........Sanu engagement????? Mayank proposal????? OMG.........it ll b a super duper hit FF.......sachi.
n no thanks 4 pm😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

OMG komal, u dedicate to me???? i mean ME????😲

thnks dear...........oops sorry.............oops i withdrwn my sorry n thnks.


nice update dear...........amazing..........🤗

Mayur is such a sweetheart........he is always a handsome hunk❤️😳


love him❤️


waiting 4 ur next updt.........Sanu engagement????? Mayank proposal????? OMG.........it ll b a super duper hit FF.......sachi.


n no thanks 4 pm😉



hey sujata!
ya this part is dedicated to you my frd!! and yap no welcome to you!!! 😉
with love
komal 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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THANX ALOT GUYZ!!!!
i m realy happy to see all ur feed back, its realy realy encouraging and give strength to write best ff more and more, inshallah i will update as soon as i can and guyzzz be ready for some surprisesss......




love ❤️
komal 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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komal can't wait ur suprises update soon

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